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The train came to a sudden stop. Finally she thought she raced of the train what she saw next made her jaw drop. The biggest castle she had ever seen was just across a lake. Then she saw something that almost made her heart stop. A giant man yelling "First 'ears this way!" She was about to run away when suddenly someone stopped her. It was Harry." Where are you going Hagrid's no one to be afraid of. Go on!" He redirected her towards the giant. The next thing she knew she was in a boat with a lot of other children including the red-haired girl she saw pass through the wall.
They had entered a giant hallway you could here hundreds of voices coming from a room not far of. All of the children were standing looking rather frightened. Maybe they were all kidnapped she thought and we are being forced to join a cult! Suddenly a rather old woman appeared. She had black hair that pulled into a tight bun, glasses, and thin lips. She said something about welcome to Hogwarts, her name was professor McGonagall(wow terrible spelling right), and that we were about to be sorted into houses. What in the world is she talking about? Soon all the children were being ushered into the room where all the noise was coming from. WOW that's a lot of kids she thought. They were led to the front of the hall. The woman spoke again this time it had something to do with when she calls your name come up and have this dingy old hat be placed on their head. Well I should be out of here sooner than I thought. When they find out I'm not on the list they'll ship me back to the orphanage where I'll just run away again. She started calling names the crowd was diminishing and soon there was only her left. McGonagall didn't even seem to notice she was there until she politely cleared her throat. She looked down and checked her list, "What's your name dear?" She seemed okay plus she wanted to get back to London so she said. "My name is Annie Valgan, I saw some people walking through the pillar at King's Cross Station and thought I could do it to and I could so I got on the train and here I am." She said this all very quickly and in one breath. But she seemed to hear all of it and looked at rather old man with a crooked nose who was sitting at the giant table behind her. He nodded and got up. She was escorted out of the hall and some of the other adults at the table followed.