Hey everyone I am really sorry I haven't been updating but I really want to take a side glance away from my fan-fiction story just for this chapter to tell you guys, in case you don't already know, that the Delirium pilot for the TV show that got canceled is now on hulu for a limited time so heres the link: ok so it won't let me put the first part but basically its www. hulu (whats underneath and without the spaces and the ) If its too confusing and I am sorry for that message me or search for it on hulu or google

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So I want to take this chapter to just give my opinions/ review of this pilot so keep on reading if you want to and leave what you thought in the review section! So here we go SPOLIER ALERT if you haven't seen it you have been warned not that spoilers are coming

So my overall rating is like a D there were some things I liked, while others not so much… and I sorta understand why it got canceled

So I am going to start with my dislikes cause there are many:

You can't fit the whole first book plus characters from the second into one episode! It moved wayyy toooo fast and personally if I hadn't read the books I would be sooo confused.

Hana doesn't have dark brunette hair and is curvy ( I know this is sorta a stupid one considering it's the actress but still, like that's what lena is not hana)

Julian is not swayed against the DFA that quickly like gosh it takes him being locked in a cell with Lena underground for a good like almost 3 weeks till he is like maybe love isn't bad but this Julian is all like let me listen to uncensored music and read some uncensored books and while we are at sneak into Hana's yard like what?!

Lena gets bit by a dog therefore she can't walk like wtf! How did she just casually walk herself to the little shack where her and alex just meet like no! Alex is suppose to save her cause she can't walk like gosh!

Lena doesn't decide to just magically change her mind about love after two days of being with alex and because alex tells her she has a choice like no! She chose to love alex on her own not because alex tells her she has a choice. She realizes what people become when they are cured- They become emotionless pits and have no love for anything even their own kids. She realizes people have no feelings and will never feel which was shown the night of the raid where she saw people killing teenagers. That's why she choices to love Alex

Alex and Lena don't automatically fall in love like gosh! What happened to them spending time at 37 Brooks and getting to know each other but no the show just has to jump into the romance!

Alex's back story is all wrong, he was born in the Wilds (I know this is a small detail but still there was no need to change it)

There is no Gracie to save Lena! Like I loved Gracie wtf! Instead lena is like taken away automatically and the alex crashes his car into that one and saves her. What happened to the motorcycle and jumping out of the window and hana giving the note to alex like how would alex of known!

Lena can't run to the fence cause she just had her ankle bitten off by the damn dog! It took months for ankle to completely heal.

There are no Wilds people taking a rope and pulling her up like damn!

Alex getting shot wasn't dramatic enough but I mean how could it be they moved so damn fast that like the watcher never could feel the love between them like damn!

Lena's mom is the one alive not her dad….

No offense to Emma Roberts but she was not the right actress for this part

Likes:

Julian's dad was perfect!

I sorta liked the romance that may be possible between Hana and Julian but again Julian is not easily swayed so I don't know…

The little love thing Julian's dad has going on I loved cause it shows he is a dirty, stupid, politican which is how I pictured him in the books

The plot line where the people in the Wilds want Lena cause of her dad was a good twist… besides the part that it could have been her mom…

The whole quote thing with her dad was sorta cute….

Ummm I can't think of much else….

Thanks for reading and again a new chapter will be coming soon sorry for the long wait and please leave comments or message me on what you think of my opinions and if you have anything else you want to add and what you thought about the first episode of the TV series.