Authors note:Wow Im so happy people are actually reading this thing and thinking it's ok.I seriously thought no one would look at it and Id just delete it.This has taken me longer to write been as I managed to write the whole chapter on here, then managed to lose it all grrr.But anyways

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Thanks for the ideas,they seriously helped and now im pretty sure what Namine's name will be.Well I hope this chapter is as good as the first,lemme know what you think.

Roxas wandered through the entrance into Castle Oblivion. His blonde hair was damp from the constant rainfall in the city. Oathkeeper and Oblivion dissapered from his grip so he could use his palms to ruffle up his flat locks. Mid-mess Roxas stopped as one of the portals of darkness appeared a little way in front of him. Been naturally curious towards anything he took a step closer to get a better look. The portal faded to reveal, who Roxas guessed was Xemnas, dragging a small girl dressed in white. She was trying to escape from her captor's hold, but was having no luck. Roxas was intrigued to why she was here, what did Xemnas want with someone who had the appearance of being so innocent? The girl's head turned and she spotted Roxas stood there looking blank. Her azure coloured eyes were glazed as she reached out her arm towards him. It was as if she was hoping Roxas would come help her. Suddenly something clicked in Roxas, and without really realising he took a step forward, reaching his arm out aswell. The girl leant away from Xemnas, stretching her arm more despite the gap between them been too wide to even be close enough to Roxas. The girl's eyes were pleading, crying out for someone to help her. Then Roxas stopped and pulled his arm back, letting his eyes only trail after the girl as she vanished from sight. What was that about? Roxas placed his palm against his damp, raindrop stricken forehead trying to gather in what had just happened. Suddenly a hand slapped him across the back of his head, knocking him from his thoughts.

"Ow!" yelped the spiky haired blonde

Axel's face appeared in front of Roxas', only centemeters away and way too close for comfort. The red head grinned widly revealing his snow white teeth right against Roxas' nose.

"Rockhead," Axel said simply

Roxas pushed his friend away with a scowl and began to rub the soar spot on the back of his head.

"You know there are better ways to get my attention," he stated

Axel crossed his long arms across his chest and tilted his head.

"True," was all he said

Ignoring the pain from Axel's inflicted slap, Roxas' mind skipped back to the mere few minutes ago when he'd seen the girl.There was something about her...The way she'd reached out to him...The way he'd reached out to her...A hand waved in front of his face but Roxas ignored it...The strange feeling that pitted his stomach...She was...Something struck across the side of his head.

"AXEL!" Roxas yelled furiously "ARE YOU TRYING TO GIVE ME BRAIN DAMAGE?"

Axel was busy laughing, bent over and clutching his stomach, obviously highly amused by the reaction the blonde male had given him.

"I tried to get your attention but you weren't listening," Axel managed as he stood up properly

Roxas' hands balled into fists as he stalked past the red head, his head throbbed painfully. It wasn't long though before Axel was back at his side.

"Aww come on Rockhead," he said pleadingly "You know I only do it to show my affection for you," there was a cheeky grin on his lips

Roxas said nothing as Axel swung his arm over his shoulders.

"Hey, d'ya hear there's a new member..."

Namine sat with her knees pulled up to her chest, her gentle face dirtied with tears. She felt as if she had lost her identity. Forced to exchange her white dress and sandals for a heavy black cloak and black boots, she looked pretty much the same as the man stood in front of her. Lifting her eyes she saw him looking at her with a satisfied smirk on his face. Namine tore her gaze away, not wanting to look at the person who had forcefully brought her here and stripped her of her true self. What was this place anyway? Sure wasn't homely at any cost...

"Namine..."

The man spoke with no feeling and slowly, each letter seemed to linger painfully. Namine clamped her eyes shut and tried to block everything out, refusing to give him eye contact. The man said her name again, it sounded exactly like when he'd first said it. Still having not responded Namine was suddenly hauled to her feet, her head yanked sharply to look up. Everything was blurry as hot tears filled her innocent eyes, the grip tightening around her arm. There was a menacing snigger that made Namine feel completly worthless.

"This is where you belong now...get used to it..."

Namine was pushed backwards and stumbled into someone else's grasp. Her head hung as the tears rolled softly down her cheeks. Was she ever going to see home again?

"Marluxia, take Namine to her room. I'm sure she must be tired..."

Marluxia began to steer Namine from the room. Unable to pull away and filled with exhaustion from the sadness she felt inside, Namine let herself be lead away, leaving her dreams and hopes behind.

Authors note:Phew thats done,its only taken me half a day but oh well. Just hopes its good and was worth sitting here for hours.