Galerians: Reanimation

Author

Hihana

Disclaimer

If anyone of those characters would belong to me, I wouldn't leave my room anymore.

Summary (I'm terrible at those)

After Awakening from his second death. Rion has to discover, that all he's ever known isn't existing anymore. Even more so, the government wants him to fight a war, which is not his. How will Rion manage this….?

Author's notes

This is the second chapter of the story.

As for the others if you don't want spoilers to either of the two games, play them before and now all the sequences in the second game.

I got the Galerians Artbook earlier this week. I'm so in love, the art is great. I love it. (Repeat the aforementioned sentence 100 times)

Reviewers

Sailorfusion

Thanks for the review, I hope you will enjoy the story as it continues. Don't worry about Cain. He is going to play a major part in this story. And he will appear in the next chapter.

Caeli Et Terra

Damn you chosen a long name, heaven and earth? Interesting. Thanks for your review. And yes 'mother' stood on her headstone and for a reason. I fear though you have to read the story to find out.

DayDreamer9

I have no intention of stopping anytime soon, don't worry. As for Lilia, I like her too. She has a very devoting character. But regardless of that, a human exposed to radiation dies. Sorry.

Warnings

None, except the blatant mentioning of drug use.

Couples

Implied Rion/Lilia

I think that was it for now. Read, enjoy... oh and leave a review please...

Bye

Hihana

(Annoying notes from the author)

"Speaking"

quotes, thoughts

telepathic contact

Scanned scenes/flashback

Last time

"I never wanted to live…in a world without Lilia…!" he added in a quieter voice. He should have expected, that the young woman was dead, she had nearly died in the waste uranium chamber, but he had hoped, he never wanted to live in a world without Lilia. His hands clawed at the ground beneath him, his frame was shuddering, but no tears escaped him. He didn't really expect it, but he had wanted to so that he could at least mourn her properly. He saw that Pat was leaving. Giving him the privacy he desperately needed. "Why? To fight a war for a race… who despises my very existence?"

Pat stopped and spoke in an equally quiet voice.

On with the show…

Chapter 2 Surprises, Realizations and Complications

"It was her last wish Rion, bringing you back, to see you again was all that kept her going. The doctors and nurses who examined her, said she wouldn't last past the day I brought her back from the facility, but she didn't die, no she fought her sickness, for you. The next day she worked on a new suit to ward off radiation to fetch your body. After we noticed that you had been hijacked by the foreign power, she doubled her efforts despite her frail condition and the doubled strain she was under. The hope of seeing you again gave her the strength to survive, 834 days longer than the doctors had given her, they always wanted her to rest, said the work would be the end but nothing could stop her. She always said: "There is a thing that I've done Pat. I have to apologize for it. I never understood what she meant. Her last moments. I heard her…Rion. I heard what she said, she had informed me over the intercom that she found you.. Her mind was always on you and no one else, not even on her.." Pat's voice broke and left the sentence unfinished. He changed the topic as he spoke again.

"Come back to the hospital after you are finished. The correspondent from the government is awaiting for us." With that Pat turned around and left. Rion remained alone in front of the grave. Turning around he carefully touched the flowers: Lilies. He felt a memory surface in the depths of his mind, he remembered that lilies had been Lilia's favorite flowers. They were fitting for the gentle soul of his first love. Yes, he had always loved the young woman, from the day he had met her in the destroyed restaurant.

But at the same time he had never acted upon his feelings, there was no time with Rita threatening their life and after his awakening he did not know if it were his own or rather the feelings of the real Rion and there was the issue with Lilia's feelings, did she love him, Rion's reflection or the real Rion, who was long dead. By the time he realized that she really loved him it had been too late.

.. Rion… I'm Lilia.. no one else… I'm Lilia that loves you…. do you believe me?.. Rion…I thought I would never see you again… I'm so happy that you're beside me now…

Her words had told him all he needed to know but Lilia had been exposed to the radiation and he needed to go to fight Ash. He had been a fool, and now Lilia was gone. It was too late. The only comfort he had was that he knew that it was true what Pat had said, Lilia's thoughts had always been on him and no one else. That thought warmed his heart more than he could describe. It was funny actually, why had he kissed the silver haired Galerian instead. He didn't know why Ash had kissed him, maybe he didn't know what it meant but he doubted that. Ash had studied humans under Dorothy's order. He had to know what it had meant, to kiss a human, so why did he do it? He had to ask the Galerian, after he had been revived and was no longer out to kill him.

Studying the bouquet he wondered who had put it here, the most people who had known that Lilia liked this flowers were long dead. Maybe she had told Pat about that, while they were in the fallout shelter. Setting the bouquet down, he carefully concentrated his powers, he couldn't do much without PPECs in his system but small powers he could invoke. He traced one last word on her headstone, after he was finished he pulled his hand away.

Dr. Lilia Pascalle

born June 02, 2508

died April 06, 2524

beloved friend, mother, hero, love

we will mourn your loss

He stood up and without looking back he left the cemetery. Closing the iron gates behind him, he made his way back to the Memorial hospital. Sometimes he stopped to look into the windows of the new shops, he ignored the giggles of the girls who passed him. There wasn't anything which interested him, so he arrived at the hospital two hours after he and Pat had left.

The woman at the reception informed him that Pat was waiting for him on the 16th floor. The 16th floor was the level where the staff and the security lived, Pat's private rooms were also on this floor. The correspondent would be waiting there to discuss their future steps. Future steps, he snorted. Somehow he doubted that, they would want to find a way to control him without having him on a visible short leash. They feared him, he knew that.

With a 'ding' the elevator stopped and the doors opened. Stepping out he followed the corridor towards Pat's rooms, the lady had been kind enough to give him directions. The room number was ironically 206. He shuddered, that room in Babylon hotel had been even more creepy than most others. A man who talked about god and at the same time tried to rape young teenage boys, back then he had blessed his powers.

Sighing he knocked on the door and entered. The tapestry was colorful, that was his first thought. Looking around he noticed that one wall was decorated with photos, he recognized Cas and her men, waving in the camera, then Pat in front of his air beagle, Lilia holding her diploma. Pat again with a small child. He frowned, the child's face wasn't visible but the hair reminded him of Lilia. The color at least. Both were clothed in black, lifting his hand he scanned the photo only to retract himself immediately, the picture had been taken after they had attended Lilia's funeral. He couldn't watch that, he wasn't ready.

"Rion, we are in the living room. Come the tea is almost cold."

The living room was cream colored, two armchairs and two sofas were assembled around a small table, tea and biscuits were served. Sitting down he noticed that the correspondent was female and ogled him like a piece of meat. Great, as if the damn girls in the city hadn't been enough. She rose and offered him her hand. He took it. Like a tidal wave information crashed into his brain, it was almost painful. As he released her hand the wave stopped. He hadn't used the Melatropin, so how did that happen? He needed to talk with Pat about it later.

"I'm Cornelia Tucker, it's nice to meet you Rion Steiner."

"Likewise Mrs. Tucker."

"Miss Tucker please, Pat told me a bit about you and your achievements. I look forward to work with you."

Rion felt overwhelmed, she was pleasant and nice, but what touched him was that she genuinely meant it. He settled for a polite nod and sat down. Cornelia and Pat followed.

"Now down to business. The government I represent is asking for your help, Rion. It's okay to call you that? Good! My client is willing in exchange for your services to pay all your bills, house, schooling, clothing and the like. You and the other Galerians would live in the old Steiner mansion which was renovated, behind the mansion is now a high school and a college. You would attend the college and study a subject of your choice. It's of course your cover, you would get a different last name since Rion Steiner and his parents are dead. Once a week you and the Galerians would meet with us for an update. If something urgent comes up you have to come immediately. My clients will make sure that you will not discredited for that. Details of the living arrangements will be discussed once all of you are awake. From you we want that you will lent us your powers to fight the spawn of Dorothy and in college you are required to wear a bracelet which will make sure that you do not misuse your powers. The hospital here will of course supply you with skip, delmetor, PPECs and others medicines should you require them. We would in addiction to that pay you as an employee of our government. I think that's about it for now."

Pat had watched Rion closely, he didn't like it. He could tell, the blond Galerian had been calm, but then the damn woman had to mention the suppressing bracelets, those idiots, now Rion would decline and then he would have to.. Damn it. Rion had fought for humanity twice and both times had paid with his life, not to forget that his parents and Lilia would not be there anymore. If he helped them why should he try to kill college students? Ridiculous.

"What will happen to me if I decline your offer?"

Now she looked like a deer caught in headlights. Pat frowned, she probably never expected the question, probably thought that Rion would be grateful for such an offer. True most would, but not Rion. To cover her mistake, she pulled a sheet from her suitcase. Rion took it and read, while he already knew what it said. Rion would be labeled as insane and would end up in a nice cell in a nut house, with a nice collar around his neck that would render him useless. He would never see the daylight again. Now Rion would certainly never help them. How he despised politicians, they never thought about the persons who suffered, only to save their own asses.

Rion had finished the sheet. "A logical solution, the government cannot risk it to have an uncontrolled Galerian walking through the city." She chuckled more than a little nervous, of course. Angering a Galerian could be the last thing she ever did. Then she seemed to have an idea. He just hoped she wouldn't say something about a subject he had yet to talk with Rion about. There were quite a few.

"I forgot something, silly me. We would of course also employ a nanny to take care of your daughter. You would also become her legal guardian." Pat froze, shit that was one of said subjects. Rion didn't even know he had a daughter. Someone up there was definitely against him, but on the other hand maybe that would be the key to get Rion to agree. Said person, Rion, looked confused.

"Excuse me Miss Tucker, my daughter?"

"Yes, Mr. Steiner. You are father of a three year old girl. Such a delightful child, congratulations." Rion didn't say anything, he didn't know what to say. Father? He? How? When? Who was the mother? He had spent six years in backup data, hell he didn't even know enough about sex to get someone knocked up. Was this a joke?

"Is something wrong Mr. Steiner? You look a bit pale. Didn't Dr. Pascalle tell you, aren't you the father?" Now Rion paled even more. What the hell was going on!

"Lilia? She, the mother and I don't know, Miss Tucker, what gave you the idea that I would be the father?"

"Well the birth certificate of course, Dr. Pascalle named you as her daughter's father and… " If possible Rion looked even more confused. Absolute uncharacteristic for the always calm Galerian. In any other situation Pat would have thought it to be funny.

"She is telling the truth Rion. After Lilia's death I made a DNA test to be sure, since you never said anything to me, about you and Dr. Lilia being together. She was three months along as you died, there for I didn't question it. I mean you were always at her side and well she made no secret of the fact how much she liked , loved you. Anyway the DNA result were clear. You are Elsa's father."

Rion stared at Pat, he was a father? He and Lilia had a child together? How? He had met Lilia as they were fourteen, six years later he had met her again, but they never had sex. At least not to his knowledge.

"Elsa?"

"Dr. Lilia said it was you mother's name." Rion nodded, that was right, he remembered that Lilia once said how much she liked the name. Shortly after the implantation of the virus and launch program. They both had been nine at that time.

"Mr. Steiner. Dr. Pascalle left something for you."

Cornelia took a case and gave it to Rion, who recognized it immediately, it was the same case he had seen in the vision of the graveyard. Now he could see what Lilia had written onto it.

For Rion

"You can borrow my laptop to see what's on the disk?"

He shook his head. As if he needed such things.

"Cornelia, Rion's a Galerian, he doesn't need electronic devices to see what's on the disk. A simple scan tells him that as well."

Taking the disk from the case he lifted his left hand over it. His scanning ability responded and the information was loaded into his brain. It was almost the same way Lilia had used to inject passwords into his mind. He gritted his teeth. Damn it was like thousands of little hot needles were shot into his skin. Then the data sunk in and his eyes widened, now he understood what Lilia had meant before she died. The power which had built up around him died down and the disk fell to the floor. He could feel Pat's eyes on him, he would tell him later …maybe. Panting he tried to calm himself down.

Then he felt something entirely else, of course he had no PPECs in his body, there was nothing to dampen the addiction with. He could feel his breath becoming uneven again and sweat formed over his brow. His hands shook slightly as he retrieved the disk and put it back into the case.

"Pat, do you have Delmetor here? Without the PPECs the AP are building up faster than normal."

"Of course, wait a second, I'll fetch it."

Pat vanished through one door Rion hadn't noticed before, not that it was important. At the moment there was only one thing or rather someone, his daughter.

"Who has custody of Elsa at the moment?"

"Her godfather of course. You're…"

"Da.. Daddy…?"

Rion's head wiped around, there, hiding behind Pat's leg stood an adorable small child. She looked almost like Lilia, the hair color, the face, even the way she peeked at him from behind Pat's leg with the shy smile on her face, just like he remembered Lilia as a child. There was only one feature that distinguished her from her mother… the eyes, her eyes were of a aquamarine color with more blue than green just like his own. Then he noticed that she was unusually tall for such a young child, again just like he himself had been.

Slowly he stood up and kneed on the floor so that they were on almost the same height. Pat pried her small hand from his pant leg before kneeing himself. He whispered something in her ear. Rion was sure, that Cornelia couldn't understand it, but he could.

"Yes sweetie, that's your daddy, remember I told you that he was very sick and had to sleep, that's why he couldn't be with you and mummy. But your daddy is okay now and you will live with him." The small child looked at Pat, her bluish eyes wide, god she was adorable, and that toothy smile. "Really?" Pat nodded. "Really really." Then Elsa laughed, before launching herself into Rion's arms.

Rion's arms closed around her before he lifted her up, holding onto her tightly. He didn't need his scanning ability to know that this was his child. The familiar aura around her which reminded him so much of Lilia, the eyes. He had a child, a part of himself and Lilia. Was that, what Pat had meant with the doubled strain, sickness and pregnancy? He had to ask him, but first he needed to agree with the correspondent, otherwise he wouldn't be able to keep her, he knew that.

Manipulative bastards, they planned it this way.

"Rion, here your Delmetor."

Taking the little capsule Rion downed it, his need for drugs was bothering him. But there was no other way, he needed the Delmetor since the Melatropin was in his body which was the cause of his rising AP, even if there were no PPECs injected and without PPECs the AP rose even faster since the PPECs somehow also dampened the effects of Melatropin. He adjusted his awkward grip on his daughter before sitting down again. Elsa made herself comfortable in her father's lap before dozing off. Rion stared at her peaceful face for a few seconds before he, Pat and Cornelia resumed their discussion.

Rion sighed, it had been three days since the meeting with Miss Tucker. The last days had been hell. Miss Tucker had been shopping with him, after all Elsa needed clothes, toys, books and things Rion had never heard of, then he needed an entire wardrobe. He had gotten one, but it had definitely been a mistake to let Miss Tucker chose most of the items, none of her pants were loose fitting now they were all practically painted on his skin, most of them leather. The only pairs which were comfortable were the ones he had chosen, which also went for everything else he needed. Regardless of what Miss Tucker had chosen, be it a turtleneck or a shirt, he could count on it that either it was skintight, short or made of leather. The only thing he was allowed to choose on his own were underwear, socks and shoes.

How did she find all the things…

The woman even picked earrings, rings, a few choker and collars for him. Bracelets were needed since he had to conceal the one to suppress his psychic powers. Besides he had worn loose bracelets before and Pat had given him his old ring back. Though he doubted that it would work. He had drawn a line as the woman had tried to pull him into the beauty department, there was no way in hell that he would wear make up, she could shop there with Rita and Nitro maybe even Ash but he wouldn't go anywhere near that stuff. Of course in the end he had been dragged into the department anyway, they had bought shampoo, conditioner, bathing oils, toothpaste, lotions and a lot of stuff for Elsa. Well Miss Tucker had bought the stuff, he just carried it. He was sure she had slipped a bit of make up in the bags as well, but since he had yet to unpack them he couldn't prove it.

Then they had bought furniture for the Steiner Mansion, which had been rebuilt and renovated. The master bedroom, his parents' bedroom would be his and Elsa's, the storage room across his study and the bathroom he would share with the two Galerians who would move into his old bedroom. The old study and the recording room would become one sleeping and a bath room. The library had been left like that except that most books had to be exchanged since they had been damaged in his fight with Birdman, they had blown half the roof and most of the rooms beneath it apart.

Downstairs the room with the pool table would be the room for the female Galerians since the cellar there had been converted to a bathroom, just for them. Birdman had confronted him there before they had fought in front of the house and the backyard. The room across from that would become a study and the other room would also be a sleeping room. Across from the kitchen and dining room were the two bathrooms. The kitchen had been renovated, the halls were cleaned. Bathrooms, kitchen and the library were already finished.

The shed where he had found Lilia's old doll had been repaired, the swings were new as was the bench. The pound had been filled with earth, instead there were two swimming pools, on deep enough to dive while the other was suitable for Elsa. The grounds were surrounded by a fence so that unauthorized people couldn't enter. You needed a key card and six digit code. Of course Galerians always could go in. Birdman teleported, Rainheart could float just like Rita. He and Cain could open the lock with their minds.

He wondered what kind of powers Ash and the others would develop. Nitro had been pyrokinetic, Parano had used electric lightening and Spider, well he had used spiders. Ash had teleported, thrown kind of different things and tried to beat the crap out of him. But his thoughts shouldn't be on this.

Looking into the mirror which was worked into his closet, he noted with relief that his school uniform fit perfectly. Miss Tucker had delivered said items yesterday and announced that he would start college with the other Galerians on April 1st , well Spider, Rainheart, Cain and Rita would still go to High school, but he and the others would start college. If they were alive that is. The paper he had received had stated, that he was the only Galerian they would let alive because of his deeds. The others would immediately be terminated, especially Ash and Parano. For their sake he hoped that they would accept the proposition.

A bell brought him out of his reveries. Closing his eyes he saw that a delivery service had brought the groceries and last items needed. He took one last look at his uniform before changing into a different outfit. His uniform consisted of dark blue pants, a white button down shirt and a dark blue jacket with a high collar. Girls wore a dark blue skirt, the same white shirt and a blazer. Younger years from high school had the same outfit only in a different color, depending if you were a junior or senior. Fetching the bags he went bags into the house.

Rion carried the bags full of food into the kitchen. Good thing that they had renovated it, ten years ago he had seen his mother in the refrigerator with that damn clock in her mouth. Shuddering he sat the bags down. Opening his mind briefly he confirmed that Elsa was still sleeping in their room. It was funny, Miss Tucker wanted to employ a nanny. Then Rion had discovered that he could hold telepathic contact to his daughter and there for knew all the times where she was. Still there would be someone to supervise and entertain her, but he felt safer in knowing that he could find her when needed.

Pat also told him that Elsa wasn't a Galerian, he had checked and confirmed that her DNA matched the one of Lilia more than his own, in fact she hadn't gotten any DNA which Dorothy had created. She also hadn't inherited Lilia's telepathic abilities, something Rion was glad for. It wouldn't have been good if a three years old could sent thoughts and pictures to other people without any control. He was glad that he hadn't burdened the young girl with his fate.

After putting the groceries in the fridge he went upstairs. It was now two pm, Cain's resurrection was planned for three pm and Pat wanted him there, for security he had said. Personally he hoped that Cain would take the deal, it had been a pain in the ass to kill the boy last time, no need for a repeat performance. Besides now there was Elsa to think of, in the last three days the girl had become incredible fond of him. And he of her. Whenever it was possible, she had crawled onto his lap demanding to cuddle or to read one of her picture books with him. He would have lied if he told anyone that he wasn't enjoying this. She was like Lilia had been and Rion hoped that he would see her grow up and become a great woman like her mother had been.

But now Elsa needed to wake up, Pat expected them in forty minutes. The young girl was already awake as he stepped into the room, she sat and was rattling the bars of her bed. Pushing the bars down he lifted her up, he was still slightly clumsy but had gotten better in the last days. He had never taken care of a young girl before, but the nanny wouldn't arrive for another six weeks and Miss Tucker didn't want to involve more people than necessary. Then Pat had given him a DVD to learn. Instead of watching he had scanned the DVD and learned the contexts through that. Driving a car was really nice. Cornelia had made sure that he got a license to do it legally, so now two cars were parked in the garage behind the mansion. Later he would have to share them with the other Galerians.

He changed Elsa's clothing, grabbed his things and then went to get the car. The black one was a sports car and resembled a type which had existed more than two hundred years before, the other one was green and was one of the newest you could buy for money. Alone he used the sports car, but with Elsa he had deemed it unsafe, which was why he opted to take the green one.

Twenty minutes later they stopped in front of the Memorial Hospital, Rion shuddered, the building still looked like ten years ago even if the inside had been renovated. Bad memories he supposed. Taking Elsa he entered the building. There was only one elevator leading into the research & development center or floor 15 and you needed a keycard to use said elevator. Using the keycard he had gotten from Pat only minutes after his awakening, he waited till the elevator stopped at floor 15. Elsa had been left at the day care of the hospital, he would fetch her in the evening.

Four minutes later he and Pat were standing in a room almost looking like the one he had been in. Instead of one cryogenic device there were eight incubators, in each of them was a body connected to a dozens tubes, not unlike himself. Today Cain was going to be revived. The twin of Rion was the youngest of the Galerians, his body had there for taken less time to age until he fit for the AI. Rion was supposed to oversee the resurrection, he would restrain the Galerian should anything go wrong.

"Do you want to start Pat?"

"Scheduled start is in five minutes and thirty seconds."

Pat was sitting behind a massive terminal, he was busy with making last minute checks. Finally the process was started. Metal walls were covering the normal walls of the hospital, the doors and windows were sealed. Pipes were opened ready to seal the room forever. Rion hoped that everything went well, the Galerians had after all been forced to fight, even though Rita and Rainheart had hated it. Cain had fought because he had been jealous, that Dorothy had chosen him to be the one to get Lilia.

"Rion get ready."

The blond Galerian nodded before he took the old beeject, he had gotten from Lilia. One of the scientists had given him a bit of Nalcon, Red, D- Felon, Bustanor and even Breakeron. Loading the beeject, the muzzle was placed in the juncture of his neck. He pulled the trigger and Nalcon flowed through his body, followed by Red and the rest of the PPECs. He swallowed a Delmetor capsule, shorting while they were reviving one of the strongest Galerians, would be unfortunate. He also took a bit of skip to power the PPECs up.

"I'm ready."

Pat nodded.

"Lisa, activate program RG, Galerian G004 Cain, Pegasus family Q7G chromosome anomaly. Position Y4X12, enter 4 milliard code. Password K – I – B – O!"

The terminal began to work, Rion could see as the incubator was emptied of the liquid which had enclosed Cain's body. From what he could see through the glass the boy still looked exactly like he had back then in Mushroom tower. The blond hair was wet and plastered against his face, the eyes were not open but he knew that dark green emeralds were behind the lids. The shadows around the eyes were missing too and the skin had a healthy color, not pale like they all had been. The PPECs really destroyed their health.

After the incubator was emptied, two of the tubes were zapped off, probably the ones which had given the body air. The glass opened and Rion floated the body on a stretcher. Most tubes were still connected to him but otherwise the incubator had done it's work. Rion pushed the stretcher towards another device. He had gotten a crash course in computer science yesterday, so he could assist Pat. Activating another terminal the backup data was connected with the brain of Cain's body. All Pat had to do was isolating Cain's AI and load it into his body. A beeping sound alerted them both.

"Something's wrong Rion, Cain is not responding. I cannot load the data into his body."

"Is it possible that he is caught in a loop like I was."

"It shouldn't be. I checked the data beforehand. The only possibility would that his AI had moved and is not there anymore, but that's impossible."

"Don't say that, Dorothy prepared us for all kinds of actions. I will go in and find him."

"You really want to do that? It's dangerous, you will be on your own there. I cannot manipulate the data, only view it. If something happens you're as good as dead."

"Don't worry I've loaded all PPECs and I carry a few in reserve. I will be back."

"I will prepare the transporter."

"There is no time, something's telling me that we have no time. It will have to work now."

"Rion there's no guarantee that you will be able to find.."

"I will be back, trust me."

Rion put his hand onto the terminal, the electricity around cackled, he felt as if he was ripped apart and seconds later his body fell to ground. Dead for all purposes. Pat sighed. "Rion you cannot come back now, not anymore you needed the transporter."

Punching the wall he tried to locate the Galerian, it didn't take that long. Rion had ended in the room where all Galerians had been kept in those weird sarcophagus: the hand of god!

TBC….

Yup that's it for now, but there is more to come. Oh I've reread the prologue and reposted it. I added a few sentences near the beginning. Nothing which influences the story or so, but I just needed to add it. I also posted a Analysis of the chapter at the end. I added an analysis to the second chapter and this one gets one too.

Chapter Analysis

And we have finished the second part. I'm so happy. Thank you for the reviews. Well down to business. In this chapter there are a lot of things, written down and in all honesty, I really don't want to list them all. The key point is certainly the 'negotations' with Cornelia Tucker. A lot is revealed during their talk, if you can call it that. Rion is more understanding in this, and he also finds a reason to live, even for short. Though I somehow think something is messed up about the chapter, but I can't put my finger on it.

Well tell me what you think!

Bye

Hihana