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Recap
"My mission is done," I looked at him, "so I need to report to leader-sama." He just gave me a death glare.
"But," I started, "I'm going your way anyways, so what the heck?" I rolled my eyes and I swore I saw his smile, but it turned to a smirk as quickly as it appear.
"Good, I'll need your help,"
Ch 2 starts
"First, we get Suigetsu," He nonchalantly stated while trying to get up. He's not okay yet, but I don't want it to seem like I care about the Uchiha. I ignored his attempt to pretend like he wasn't in a weak state right now. Uchihas never show any weakness, neither do I. I smirked at the coincidence. After the long silence, I finally answered, "Then what are we waiting for?" I flashed my signature mischievous smirk.
Then we set out for the hideout that Suigetsu was in (me: I totally forget which one it was). We stepped into the water like base without a word. Neither Sasuke nor I were very talkative.
"He's in that tank, isn't he?" I inquired, pointing at the water filled aquarium. I only received the Uchiha heir's signature 'hn' and he smashed the tank with his katana. Violent, are we? I chuckled at my comment, but luckily he didn't hear.
While I was still musing about my silent comment, a figure raised out of the water. So, this must be Suigetsu, huh? He can actually become water; no wonder Sasuke wants him.
"So, you're the famous Sasuke huh? Heard you killed Orochimaru," The white haired guy observed.
"Go put some clothes on and we'll set out," His patience was pretty thin.
"And what will be my profit from this?" Suigetsu inquired.
"You want the Kubikiri Bōchō (Zabuza's sword) don't you?," Sasuke hit the bulls eye mark.
"Now that you mention it……………….," Suigetsu seemed to be inquiring about something, "Deal."
Then, Suigetsu turned (finally) to notice me.
"Oh, and you must be the famous Akatsuki no Hime," He smirked holding his hand out.
"Fi--," I was about to start, but Sasuke rudely interrupted.
"We need to get going," He stated in his usual bland tone, though there was another emotion in it that I couldn't put my finger on.
"Nah, I think I'll talk with the gorgeous Akatsuki no Hime," Suigetsu was obviously ignoring Sasuke's rank. Konaha's ex top genin just scowled.
"Do you want your sword?" He inquired, trying to hold his anger.
"Fine," Suigetsu pouted. Stupid Sasuke, just interrupting people like he's the damnable king of the world. I'll show him a thing or two.
"Uchiha," I spat as we were just about to leave. He turned around and raised an eyebrow at me.
"Don't act like your boss," I growled.
"I created this group, and it's for my goal," he replied nonchalantly. Oh, this boy was ticking me off so badly.
"I can run off right now back to Akatsuki and tell them about the group you're trying to plan," I stated, glad that I had the upper hand. I didn't expect Uchiha to beg not to go, but I didn't expect what he would say next either.
"My revenge is the most important thing right now, and I need to have order in this team," He spoke with arrogance, "So I don't need you to ruin the order of things." I gritted my teeth. I had years of experience of controlling my emotions, but this Uchiha made me tick. WHY am I staying here with him? I never really thought of that. I can just leave…..but for some odd reason, I like being here. Even if Sasuke is a big pain in the ass, ever since the death of Sasori, who was my best companion, he's what I consider a rather close friend.
"Are you asking me to leave?" I raised my eyebrow in defiance.
Sasuke's POV
"Are you asking me to leave?" The female kunoichi spoke with arrogance. Do I want her to leave? No. Would she be any good in helping me kill Itachi? Hell no.
"Did I say that?" I raised on of my eyebrows. And stared at her nonchalantly. Then, someone cleared their throats.
"Are we gonna have a lover's quarrel or go?" Suigetsu tapped his feet impatiently. If I was drinking something, I think I would have choked. Lovers? Me and THAT? Never.
"Lovers? Me and HIM? Oh hell no," Katsumi retorted, saying exactly what I was thinking.
Katsumi's POV
I was shocked that Suigetsu thought that. Ha, stupid boy. He has much to learn.
On the way to the village hidden in the rain to obtain Zabuza's sword, Suigetsu promptly stated that he wanted some yogurt, so here we are, in a yogurt shop. The girls stare at Sasuke with loving eyes, give me death glares, and pays Suigetsu absolutely no attention. Typical.
I glared at Suigetsu, motioning him to hurry up, while Sasuke looks at him in his usual look. Suigetsu, clearly ignoring the looks, just continued chomping up yogurt. Dammit! Can't he eat any faster?! The fangirls are getting on my nerves. I was mentally pissed, but I showed nothing.
"Would you like anything?" A waitress hovered over us, but it was obvious that the question was directed to Sasuke.
"Does it look like we need anything?" I questioned with a rather annoyed attitude. The waitress huffed.
"I was asking him," she pointed to Sasuke. I don't see what's so special about him, and yet every girl tries to get his attention.
"We don't need anything," Sasuke spoke with his usual nonchalant tone, but the girl squealed.
"Alright then, call me over when you do!" She squealed quite annoyingly.
"Hey," Suigetsu called some girls over, "This guy –points to Sasuke- wants to know where Zabuza's sword is." Immediately, girls started pouring over to our table and telling us where it was.
When Suigetsu was finally done eating, we headed out the grave, where Zabuza was buried, but the sword wasn't there. But we found out where it was. Some rich lord had it, so that was where we were going.
"Hey, Akatsuki no Hime," Suigetsu called out, "Can you show me some techniques?" It was clear that his respect for me was far greater than his feeble respect for the arrogant Uchiha, much to his distaste.
"No," I blandly stated. Don't feel like talking.
"Aw….." He pouted, "Why not?" And he continues to pester.
"Because I think we're at the Lord's place," I nonchalantly pointed out to the thousands of people pouring out, trying to defend the place.
"Try not to kill anyone," Sasuke commanded.
"Heh, I'll try," Suigetsu said sarcastically and I just sighed.
Suigetsu, obviously, didn't follow Sasuke's command. As much as I hated to listen to him, I didn't kill anyone either. Let them live knowing that the Akatsuki no Hime can hunt them down anytime. I smirked at my evil thought.
When we got to the main gate, Suigetsu just knocked the guards dead and Sasuke glared at him. Boys………. We then ran up to the top floor where the Lord was sleeping.
Sasuke crept up behind him and put his katana to his neck.
"Give me the Blade," he said in a cold voice. The Lord was frightened out of his wits.
"I don't have it," he stammered.
"Lying isn't going to help, you know?" I sighed at his stupidity.
"Who is this for?" The lord stuttered
"Suigetsu," Sasuke replied emotionlessly.
Then, the Lord tried (and failed) to fight and we went off with a Suigetsu's sword. Next person to get would be Karin. Hopefully, she won't be a fangirl.
