So, this is my Call of Duty chapter, but after this, I'm all out of ideas, so if you could, please give me ideas. Please!
Call of Duty
Once again, welcome to Fowl Manor, where games are won, and dreams are shattered. Let's see who get's beaten to day, shall we?
The man is walking through the town, checking all the windows, seeing if there is anyone laying in wait. He walks in one building, up the stairs, into the top room and… nothing. Absolutely nothing. He turns around and starts walking down the stairs when BOOM!
The man falls to the ground dead, as another man walks out of the closet carrying a shotgun.
"Hah!" shouts Holly. "Take that Butler! Way to die! Kiss my gun!"
Then the second man slumps down after a sharp CRACK!
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" screams Holly. "I had killed four in a row!"
"All of them Butler," replies Juliet, smirking, "And he doesn't count."
"What does that mean?" grumbles Butler.
"It means that even though in real life, you could find a way to make a man swallow his own foot whole while it's still attached to his leg," starts Juliet, "I this game you hit a boulder from five feet away with a rocket launcher."
CRACK!
"UGH!" screams Holly as she once again got killed by Juliet.
"One more kill until I get a nuke!" Juliet says, gloating.
Butler is smiling as he aims down his sights and then… BOOM!
The rocket butler just shot goes barreling towards her from across the room, five feet away to be exact, and then keeps going right out the window. Juliet smiles as she spins around… and then yells in frustration as there is a PataPataPata from the barrel of Holly's gun and she slumps down dead.
"AH!" Juliet screams. "I hate you Holly! I hate you! I was going to kill him and get a nuke! And now I don't even know where you were because you used a silencer! I hate you!"
Butler is just sitting there, shocked that he had actually missed Juliet from five feet away with a rocket launcher when he is startled back to reality by a quick knife to the back from Holly. Juliet and Butler share a quick look, and nod to each other.
Butler goes to the building where he had last seen Holly, and then runs upstairs, shooting all the way, while Juliet circles around back. Holly quickly dispatches Butler, but his job was done, Holly's attention was diverted from the other side of the building. Juliet charges up the stairs with her machine gun fully loaded. But Juliet forgets about one thing: claymores. With a BOOM! Juliet gets killed to.
"I can't belive it," whispers Juliet. "I didn't work."
"If only boulders were a lot bigger," gasps Butler.
Holly, being almost out of ammo, runs and picks up their guns. Then Holly prtends to wrap a bandana around her head, and then gets going. Over the next five minutes, Holly goes around the map on a killing spree, amassing countless kills. But it seems the game has been counting, because she sees a symbol pop up in the corner of her screen.
"Well you guys," Holly says, "This has been fun, but I'm afraid I'm done playing."
"You can't quit now!" exclaims Juliet.
"Oh, I'm not quitting," Holly replies, pushing a button. "I'm just winning."
"TATICLE NUKE INBOUND!" booms a voice from the game.
"NO!" Juliet shouts.
Butler glares.
Holly smirks.
And this has been another afternoon on Fowl Manor.
So seriously. I need ideas. Also, I might not be able to update for a while because I'm on vacation. I'm actually writing this on vacation, so I don't know when the next time I'll be able to update is. Maybe sometime during the weekend, I don't know. Thank you to these people who have reviewed at anytime during the story:
isac
The QAS
Imp90
Artemis Simpletoon
.71717
Andrew(reviewed twice)
justagirlwithideas
Ellie
Unknown
Readergirl99
ZeZe123
U.K.C.(My grandpa, he's awesome)
I fight I win
Those were all the positive reviewers. Now it's time for some negative reviewersL:
Beckett Simpleton
mischievous101
A Moment Of Sincerity
AznLee
So those were all negative reviewers, but I haven't gotten any negative reviews since the first chapter( which I've just revised) so that leaves two options: A) I have gotten better at writing this story, or B) they've just stopped reading it. I hope it's the second one. Vote for which one you think is right in the poll on my profile.
Signing Out,
Jrfess