After my last review I have decided this will be my last story. I think criticism should be constructive not destructive, so being told I write like a 5th grader is not at all constructive.
Telling me I need to have English lessons is fine, you are probably right with what you're saying, and I thoroughly agree.
I would have accepted what you said had you said –
'You could have made this better by proof reading it, making sure your grammar was up to standard…' and so forth.
In retrospect I should have looked have done things differently, but it's quite harsh when you make comparisons like that.
Sorry guys who did support me. Thank you so much and I apologise for my rant.