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Hey, here we go shopping. this is the fixed version of the story i mad iggy blind. i'm stupid today i keept doing this when i was writting it. i thought i fixed all of the misteakes

Max's POV

I have to go shopping. Anne dropped us off in front of the mall after school.

We walked into this fancy dress store. It was expensive, but thanks to Anne she gave us money to buy what we needed.

A nice sales lady, maybe about thirty came up to us. She gave Angel, Nudge, and Gazzy dirty looks, but they didn't notice.

"Hi, how may I help you today," The lady questioned looking at me.

"Nick, Jeff and I need formal wear," I said pointing to Fang and Iggy.

"Well, I think I can help you with that please follow me," she waved us over.

"This is the juniors section. If you need any help, I'll be over there," the lady pointed. I never did get her name.

Gazzy went over to the boy's side of the juniors section, while Angel, Nudge, and me went to the girl's.

I didn't know what size I wore in dresses, so I looked at the size zeros. That's what I usually wear.

There were lots of size zeros. Everything was all frilly and girlie. Didn't they have anything less girlie? Probably, not since it was a formal wear store.

I looked for an about twenty minutes until I found this pretty knee length black dress. It had thick sleeveless straps. It was really pretty.

I went over to the dressing rooms to try it on and you will never believe who I saw waiting in line. Lissa, she was standing there with a light pink dress that would go down all the way to her ankles.

I wanted to rip her head off. I'm not even going to try to hide it anymore, I love Fang and that's all there is to it.

She turned around.

"Hi, Max. I thought I would see you here," Lissa said with her high pitched cheerful voice.

"Hi," I mumbled back.

Two people walked out of the dressing rooms. So, Lissa and I walked into the two open rooms. I striped off my jeans and t-shirt and slipped the black dress on.

It covered my wing perfectly. The best part was it didn't have a zipper, so nothing would be digging into my wings. I mean, have you ever had a zipper dig into your wings? What am I saying you guys don't have wings, unless you're a mutant like me? (A/n I don't know if a zipper on a dress would hurt Max's wings, but it just seems that zippers would hurt after a while.)

I stepped out of the dressing room to look at my self in the three way mirror. Of course Angel and Nudge were ooing and ahhing.

Lissa was already there looking at her self. She must have seen me come up behind her in the mirror, because she asked if I think that Fang would like her dress.

I said yes of course with fake enthusiasm, but I don't think she noticed. Lissa went back into the dressing room.

I stepped on to the platform and looked at my self. I didn't look as bad as I thought I would. The dress wasn't to short and my wings didn't show. It was the only dress that I really liked anyway.

Angel must have gotten Fang, because I saw him with his mouth hanging open, in the mirror. When I turned around he closed it right back up.

"So, what do you think," I asked.

"I think you should get that dress you look really pretty Max," Fang said awed.

Fang's POV

I had just finished getting back into my normal clothes, when Angel came and got me saying that I need to see how pretty Max looked in her dress.

I didn't waste any time, I grabbed Iggy and Gazzy's hands and followed Angel over to were Max was. When I got there Max was looking at her self in the mirror and boy did she look hot.

I couldn't help, but to let my jaw drop. She must have noticed because she turned around. I quickly closed my mouth and went back to my normal emotionless self.

Max got this look on her face that said that she doesn't even want to know what I said.

Max went back to get dressed. When she was gone Lissa seemed to appear out of no where. I really need to break up with her soon, but I can't now because already promised her I would take her to the dance.

"Nick," she screamed and ran over to hug me.

"Hi, to you too," I said pretending to be happy to see her.

"Sorry Nick, but I have to check out my dress and no, you can't see it until tomorrow night," she said running off.

Max came out dressed and ready to go, but of course Nudge piped in.

"Max, don't you guys need dress shoes? I mean you can't wear that dress in tennis shoes. You could get pretty black high heels and Fang and Iggy could get the same kind of black shoes, since their tuxes are black. Wow, I just noticed-"I gently covered her mouth so she would stop talking.

Max's POV

Nudge was right I couldn't wear tennis shoes with my dress. Good thing this store had shoes I really didn't want to go to a bunch of stores to look for shoes.

"Okay, Nudge lets go over to the shoe section," I said.

When I got over there I saw Sam picking out a pair of black dress shoes. He looked up and saw us coming.

"Hey, Max how are you doing," Sam asked politely?

"Oh, I'm fine just picking out what I'm going to wear to the dance," I said.

"That's cool, well, I guess I'll see you tomorrow," Sam said getting up to check out his stuff. I watched Fang glare at him as he walked away.

Nudge shoved a box of shoes into Fang's, Iggy's, and my hands. We walked over to the benches to try on our shoes that Nudge had given us

I'm glad that Nudge was doing the shoe shopping form me. I just wanted to go home and sleep. I had no fun at school and this was worse.

After trying on like ten pair of shoes Nudge finally found a pair of shoes she liked on Fang, Iggy, and me.

I walked up to the counter and put all of our things on the check out counter. The guy that was checking our stuff out was staring at me and I didn't like it.

"cash or credit," the guy asked me?

"credit," I said handing him the credit card that Anne had given me.

"So are you going to the dance at Cosby High, if you are then you get a 15 discount?"

"yeah we are here is my student card," I said handing him the card.

He checked our clothes out and put them in suite bags and put or shoes in regular bags.

He handed me my cards back and we walked out, finally.

Fang's POV

I did not like the way that guy was looking at Max I was giving him death glares the whole time and I don't think he noticed. I was so ready to go home and sleep.

I hate shopping I don't know why girls love it so much it is boring and stupid.

We walked outside and Max called for Anne to pick us up. It took her twenty minutes to take us home. It was only 6:30, but it felt like 7:30.

Anne picked up dinner. So, we set the table so we could eat.

Ok, that is like five pages on word I think that is long enough for today. Please, please, please review. I need to know what you guys think of this chapter. I have maybe one or two chapters left. Sad I know, but I have this really good Idea for this story when Max is 24.

Please, please, please, please, review. Sorry if it has a lot of mistakes in it, but it is like five pages and I have only so long attention span. Pm or whatever if you have any questions.