Disclaimer: I don't own Maximum Ride. I don't really have anything funny to say right now. Wow I thought I would never say that. I may have to call brezzy430 about that. She has a fanfic account too. Lol.

Ok forget my ramble ling and read.

Max's POV

I was about to scream if I didn't get out of this room, Nudge was putting make up on me. I mean everything that was meant to make you look pretty was on my face; pink glitter eye shadow, light pink lip stick, mascara, eye liner, cover up, and blush.

I had already put on my dress. Well, that was kind of obvious, I mean if I had to put the dress on it would ruin all the make up that Nudge put on me. I can't even see what I look like until my hair is done.

It took Nudge an hour to finish and I have no idea how long it would take until Angel was done with my hair. To make this worse they are all gushing on how pretty I look.

I just want this to be over. I want to go to the dance break up with Sam and tell Fang I love him. Tonight is going to be a really bad night. I just hope Fang feels the same way I do.

I have had my eyes closed the entire time, except for when Nudge put on the mascara and eye liner, against my will.

I felt my head being yanked in all directions. It kind of hurt, I mean someone pulling your hair isn't the best thing when you have a major headache. At least when Angel was done I could see what I looked like and then it is off to the dance. Yea (note sarcasm)

It took Angel only a half and hour to do my hair. She kept redoing it and making it tighter. So, now I have a headache for two reasons, first I have the whole tell Fang I love him thing or Angel will, second the tightness of my hair being up really high.

"Ok, Max you can look now," Nudge cheered.

I got up and staggered to the full length mirror. My legs were really wobbly from sitting for so long. I took a deep breath and looked at my self. It wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. At least you could still see I looked like me from under all my make up.

My hair was in a high pony tail and it was wavy, so it looked really pretty. It was wavier than usual I guess that was what the hair spry stuff was for.

All I had to do was put on my high heels and I would be set. The dance stared in 15 minutes. I had just finished getting ready.

"Max are you coming, Lissa ,Tess, and Sam are here and we are leaving," Anne called just as I finished putting on my high heels and I slowly rushed out of my room, so I wouldn't hurt my self?

Everyone was waiting at the bottom of the stairs and boy did Fang look hot. I mean black is a good color on him, but he looked better than a movie actor in his tux. He looked like a God and I don't know if I deserve him.

Sam looked good to, but not as good as Fang. Fang was hot and Sam was cute. I hope he wouldn't take it too hard when I break up with him tonight.

Fang, Iggy, and Sam all stared at me opened mouthed as I walked down the stairs. I don't know why. I didn't look all that much different. I guess it was because I was in a dress and you don't see that every day.

Iggy was so handsome. He had his tux on and his hair spiked. It looked really good on him. I was really happy for him he had a girlfriend that really liked him.

Tess had on a light blue dress that had thin straps. Iggy was really lucky he had someone that liked him and he liked back, unlike me.

I finally reached the bottom of the stairs.

Anne got us all on her car and she left Nudge in charge since she would only be gone for a half an hour. That was ok with me too. Nudge was a responsible girl and she was growing up really fast. Sometime it felt to fast.

I got to sit in the middle between Fang and Sam. Fang was giving Sam death glares the whole time. When Sam put is had on my lap, I thought Fang was going to kill him. The death glare that he gave Sam was scary.

Fang's POV

Max waited at the top of the stairs and God did she look like the most wonderful, beautiful, gorgeous, and lovely person you would ever see. I didn't deserve her she was too much. She was a goddess and I was a peasant.

I quickly noticed my jaw was hanging open so I closed it. Time seemed to go in slow motion as she walked down the stairs. I wasn't the only one who must have been staring at her. Sam looked like he was going to pee his pants because she was so pretty. That would be funny. Then let's see how much Max likes him.

Iggy seemed impressed by her too, but I knew he didn't like her like that, besides he had a girlfriend and she liked him. He was the lucky one, he had a girlfriend that he liked and she liked him back.

We went out to the car and somehow crammed in. I didn't mind too much, I was stuck beside Max, but she was also next to Sammy boy. I gave many death him glares.

Sam put his hand on Max's lap. I wanted to reach over and strangle him to death. I gave him a death glare so powerful it scared Max, so I stopped. I didn't want to scare Max.

Tess POV

Wow, Jeff wasn't kidding when he said that his sister was beautiful she really was pretty. The dress fit her perfectly and the shoes were lovely.

I like what she did to her hair. Jeff seemed to be shocked about hat Max was wearing because he couldn't stop staring at her. I can't wait to until I get to dance with Jeff.

Then he turned to me and kissed me on the check and I knew he was just as excited for the dance as I was.

We got into the car. Iggy and I sat in the middle.

Lissa's POV

Oh, I'm starting to hate that tramp of a sister Fang has, she looked prettier than me. I was supposed to be the prettiest girl at the dance, not Max. To make it worse Nick couldn't keep his eyes off her.

That dress was perfect for her and the shoes too. I wanted to rip her head off.

We got into the little car somehow. I don't really know how though. I had to sit in the front while Max got to sit in the back with Sam and Nick. This is really unfair. I want her to drop dead.

I should be the one back there with the boys, I'm prettier. Max should be the one up here.

Sam's POV

Oh, my God, Max looked like someone in a magazine. She was beautiful and I was her date. I liked her a lot. I was going to tell her I loved her tonight. It was time we had been going out for about six months. (Is that long enough before you tell someone you love them?)

I couldn't take my eyes of Max, she was just so pretty tonight, no that was an understatement, she was exceptionally beautiful. I couldn't wait to slow dance with her.

Her brother though was giving me the creeps he was staring at her opened mouthed. It looked like he was about to go in shock.

We got into the car it was tight, but I didn't mind I was beside Max, but she was also beside her brother. He was giving me glares too. I couldn't wait until we got to the dance so we could get away from him.

I put my hand on Max's lap and I think her brother was going to kill me, he sent me a death glare that said you better get off my sister.

Ok, guys I might have two more chapters, I don't know though. I have to see how the story plays out. I might have one really big chapter and then on little chapter or maybe two big chapters, but don't quote me on that. I'll see what my mind can come up with.

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