THE AUTHOR SPEAKETH. Anyway, I've re-paragraphed to story to make it more easily read. I've also re-written certain parts. Nothing to dramatically affect the storyline, but you might want to re-read to see the new stuff :D By the way, I'm using my sister's account on here since we only have 1 e-mail and you can only have 1 account per e-mail --. So anyway...

Hydros out.