Hello everyone. If you have reached this far, then thank you for reading this story. It has been said before on the reviews that my grammar is incorrect. Well I normally write technical reports for industry so I thought I was ok, but my GF told me different. For all those men out there, listen to them….its a lot less painful ;)
I would like someone to Beta read for me and punch me when I get it wrong. (Or just act as a sounding board, bring ear plugs :p ) So if anyone is interested please e-mail me at my writers name then its like a hot potato but in letter format in the UK. ;)
To answer an earlier issus someone brought up is that the gang seems to be enjoying killing. If this is apparent to everyone then I do apologise as they were meant to show signs of remorse. My only analogy for the subject is like killing one of your favourite pets because it is lame. (Livestock farmers will get this). Its not fun, its not fair, but it is the right thing to do. When you do it, you don't feel happy, you feel sad and remorseful for the act. You put it to the back of your mind later and forget about it, but when you think about death, it comes to the front and it makes you sad. If you don't feel these things, then I strongly suggest seeing someone and talking about it. I have spoken to a 'few' farm labour's in my time and when asked just before or after a culling, they were always sad or remorseful.
Anyway back to a happy theme. Please do keep reading and reviewing. It is nice to hear from you all. I hope the odd comedy keeps a smile on your faces.
Till
next chapter.
ME