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Here. I received a review that I'm glad to had, actually I appreciate those who had let me a review. But the one that Onhiro let me it made me realize that maybe some of you will need some words from my part about the fic and some reminders that I though were clear.
1- I'm not a native English speaker. I'm Puerto Rican and here in that part of the Caribbean we speak Spanish. So it took me a lot to translate this as I say on earlier chapters. But I'm doing this for the love of tale tales.
2- Never had be my intention to make fool or something or anything like that type of soldier or police officer. My myself work hand in hand with emergencies technicians, police officers, firefighters, etc. (But I'm on my twenties, don't think of me as old) Even had friends that are right now or had been in the Irak war recently.
3-This is comedy with dark humor. That's my way, being sarcastic is on my nature. That's why I had classified the fic under humor and romance.
4-Here first character is Saitô and my own character 'the sergeant' (everything she does had a reason to be, even if it sound ridiculous, over acted, and or out of context or ranking.) Aoshi here is serving as narrator.
5-In some parts I have to admit that the fic get over me. And I had decide to make it as protest against human slavery nowadays. Even if it NOT describe too well the feelings and real situations that this people had to live. In it self the fic is just to communicate that this situation are real and broke a part lots of life; to make a consciences that out there is a world.
6-Remember that this is a work of fiction and the characters related to Rurouni Kenshin series are property of Mr. Watsuki and all his associates, NOT to me and I DON'T receive anything for this work. But the plot of this fan fiction is from my imagination and the character NOT related to the series. And that I DID NOT intent to imitate any real person.
7- However get in mind that I only want all of you pass a good time and while all of you read this laugh and enjoy it. All Yours opinions count to me and are appreciate. Of course everything with respect. With out reviews I wasn't know of this misunderstood.
Your writer,
Stela Waltz
Chapter 7:
¡¡KABOOM!!
The horrible loud noise that thrilled on the walls of their chest came from the metallic door behind.
All get surprised at the dramatic and unique entrance made by Misao, and I didn't remember when was the last time I had see in her that point of vex…., or maybe just…, yes! The close I had get to her anger was when a cheerleader of our high school go on with a rumor she had get a date with me.
Reality was that there was no date at all. Her boyfriend dump her and she was running and crying at the same time she pass through the soccer field where we were practicing. I had already kicked the ball when she get on the line, Sano shout at her making her stop her running, turning around and receiving the ball on her face. As the gentleman I'm, I accompany her home. But next morning I find Misao walking to me with a face like the one she had right now, while she shout at me only God knows because all the while I was meditating. I'm propensity to headaches.
What really matters right now is that is the same face the she have while reach to Saitô. I can't warn him before she took out her hand connecting it with his face. Fast and hard as always. OUCH! I know that part too.
She took out a list of insults that she only know to Hajime. I only catch something about damn womanizer that want to leave out of important mission women and a lot of blaberish related to it. Matter is that at this point all was clear to me. Alicia! I was sure it's all her doing. Not a moment a go she was trying to get Kaoru on the same line of thinking.
She was on to something. Something more while get in a conflict between superiors and subordinates, trying to broke the linking and respect to each others. But Why? That's something fishy and I'll investigate it but not now, there is another priority in this moment.
-Get your mouth closed you Weasel!- Shout Sano to her. But before she can answer Sano took a unusual dark and serious look while passing the silent scope to Aoshi. "Iceberg, get a check on Seta's companion. I think she heard weasel's screams."
"YOU ROOSTER!!!...." Fortunly this time Saitô put a hand on her mouth and in a whisper ask me and Sano if the woman had some hearing device.
-"She had a messy hair, is hard to say." Say Sano.
But without ask for it, Kaoru push the tori atama getting the scope of Aoshi. "OH MY…! You men knows nothing at all! What if she had it?"
"Then that's a lot of problems to us, that it is." Indicate Kenshin.
Misao put her two cents when free herself from Saitô's hand: "That's why we women are completely necessaries. We're intuitive and intelligent."
"Well, she had it. What now?" Ask Kaoru, worry write on her face.
On the tactic map that Alicia prepared Saitô find a detail the she pass out while fighting him for the control of the situation….
"Kamiya!" Call him in over low but strict voice. "You go to the maritime station to talk personally with the captain there, explain the situation we had here. They must block Seta's exits by water. Misao. You will stay here at the silent scope you're good on that. Sagara and Himura will get the red area at the center and Shinomori will accompany me on laterals. You had permission to open fire, we're on disvantage I'll get on the necessary paper work after this."
While he was talking I get a look on the map and saw Valentino's fail. He will get on that, definitely. But however, this get me think on why someone like her, that had all the recommendations she have can fail in something vital like that. For other part Saitô get a while to get on it.
In the nick of time, Alicia had Ikawa's hands on her waist on a possessive grip as he was her owner. For the moment she decide to let it pass. She was face to face with Seta and she will not let pass the opportunity. All the knowledge she had of him was getting from informs made by people that are right now six feet under ground.
Seta was the real reason for her to be in Japan. Get in line some police officers was not that important. Officer at Tokyo Central are the best here on what really matters on this job and whenever Saitô wanted he will get them in line. It's just that he had fun seeing them the way they are and getting annoyed his superiors all the while, an opportunity the wolf will not let pass. Mibu wolf was that way, an intelligent man that one can't get underestimated, and she now that better than anyone else. At this moment she can made a bet the guy is close to the reality of her visit in the country. And for that she will not let escape Seta, not now that he is front her. She had travel the world to get this man.
-Who's your friend here Ikawa?-
Even if Seta's voice sound that innocent she will not let herself be mislead by him.
Ikawa insist that she direct herself to his boss: "Tell him your name baby."
"I'm Alicia, a pleasure to meet you Mister…?"
"Soujiro, call me Soujiro."
Their approach was abundant on coquetry while Alicia and Soujiro shake hands. Seta's female companion made a face at this.
"We will had a party down stairs care to join us. Ladies first Alicia."
"Thanks Soujiro."
This wasn't the must enjoyable position but she play it with out complaints. And even at this moment she keep watching Soujiro. That let her see the signal he send to his companion.
All went silence for a minute only the water rhythm when shake with the ship. Then she heard muffled voices that come under deck. But when she was trying to define the conversations Soujiro order Ikawa to open an hatch where she find the reasons for her mission.
On that limited space were a large amount of people, but the most part where children. The place smell bad, like dead. Her mission: get the person in charge of this human traffic; Soujiro Seta down in to jail or worse.
-This is part of our merchandise, arms and drugs are already taken down and put on secure place. Sergeant Valentino I understand that you had pass a year tracking me."
Seta's words made her play a wide smile on her face, but she did not answer. And he keep on.
"There are all what you need to put me down and end your mission Sergeant. But sorry, you will not get it today. Disarm her Kamatari."
Ikawa guy was with out words. That girl was really to his linking and that's why he ask her boss to let him bring her. Of course that he find weird he let him do it with out to much pressure after now her name. And that's why.
From her spot Misao was watching how the woman was disarming Alicia and tell the others.
"Calm every body now." Say Saitô by the communicators. "We'll wait the maritime to get in. The girl can handle her self."
As if Saitô was a wizard the maritime units arrive. Seeing that Alicia damn her luck. There was a reason after all for her not take that option. She don't want to repeat the Colombia operative. When Seta was at the same situation he made the embarkation explode sending all the evidence in little pieces to bottom sea. That was the only time they had Seta this close.
"Is like you don't learn from experiences Alicia. Tie her down Ikawa."
"What?!" Ask the refer one in surprise.
-"You will get another one soon."
But Alicia interrupt Seta: "Will you send me depth sea with all this people?"
-"It is call controlled looses. You soldiers now that."
She get very angry at his inhuman words and as if nothing she get out Ikawa's grip, evade Kamatari getting close to Seta.
Soujiro tell the others to let her get her fight against him, but when she was at his reach he use his well known velocity and punch her without mercy.
All the while Misao was watching the scene and keep inform Saitô from every detail.
-"Itachi. Check the other two."
-"Guy is in stunning mode seem as if he don't had experience…But the woman has get out her gun and is waiting a good moment to attack but is not altered.?
-"I'll get in." Say Aoshi that not wait for any instruction to put out of combat the guys that were moving the boxes.
As he get in to the cargo area of the ship he heard the same voices Alicia did. In the first area he find a freight car and surprise him self at seeing it full of people.
"Captain." Call Aoshi to Saito. "We get a situation here."
"That is for get my position of desperate one." Say Sano in a sufficient tone.
-"Ahou get of the communication and let him tell us. Shinomori…"
"About a hundred child are in front of me. Did that tell you something?"
A loud WHAT?! Sound through de communicators. Misao drive her hands to her mouth to muffle a scream and various bad words that pass her mind in that moment. For the first time Sano was out of words and Kenshin as Saitô's anger were putting their blood to boil.
After de first commotion pass Aoshi continue: "They're specially Cambodians but here are Koreans and Vietnamese. Right now we need ambulances and some from the morgue some didn't survive the travel."
Situation was critical each moment that pass us. Get out the children from here was our priority over get Seta in. But the question was how much time will take him to find more to the same thing. If we don't stop the guy in two months or less will be back with more people, more children whose lives will be end as slaves. The problem was, how much can we do? He will arrive in other pier or in another country for what it matters and I'll can do nothing because of the jurisdiction and frontiers themes. And even more "How much did know Alicia? Her desperation was clear now to me. She get herself in the line of fire for the people she was sure was here."
The sound of shots start with out advice. Maritime units started it. Seta's men shot back while attack our small unit of Tokyo Central.
Desperation took me and I forget everything else I had to my self work at taking this children out of the red area. But in a moment Misao gave the notice that Valentino was on ground by receiving a slice from Seta's sword. And that the woman with him was shooting back at her, and Misao didn't know how she discover her hide out.
In a moment Seta was out of her range passing the slow Maritime units in ultra speed boat leaving Ikawa behind.
An explosion was heard and a fire start inside de control room.
Everything was a chaos and the party… on the taste.
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