Starzinmieyez: Thanks for the review. I'm just going to edit the prologue, and chapters 1 and 2 a little bit, but I will defiantly be adding more detail and description. Thanks for the help. :P

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Thanks for the help everybody. :P

Also for all Mulan fans, Cameron Dokey wrote a retelling of Mulan called Wild Orchid, I like it so maybe you will to?

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Chapter 3

The night was ending and Mulan thought it would be best if Khan rested awhile before they arrived to Wu Zong camp. She found a place that was hidden, and she used it to practice her "voice". "Hi guys," Mulan said in a high-pitched voice. No that won't do, thought Mulan, maybe I'll copy Mushu's voice a little bit. "Hey guys, how's it going," Mulan asked Khan in a deep but not too deep voice, Khan gave a snort of approval. Mulan started to work on her walk, talk, and other necessities that she felt she needed to improve on before she went to Wu Zong. When she arrived at Wu Zong, she realized that she was late. All the other soldiers stared at her as she passed through; making her wish that she hadn't left so late from clearing in the forest.

"What is your name soldier," asked the most handsome man Mulan has ever seen. His eyes were a deep dark brown that made Mulan want to tell him everything. He was about 5'11 and a strong build. "What is your name soldier," he yelled at Mulan.

"Oh, um, my name is..um…it's…it's a boy's name….umm Fa Kong," Mulan stammered.

"Fa Kong… Fa Zhou doesn't have a son," Shang said in reply.

"He's his nephew," Mushu said as he approached them. Along with Mushu were three guys, the first was tall and lanky, the second was shorted than the other two but he looked tougher, and the third looked as if eating food was his hobby.

"Ah, Mushu, do you know this…boy," Shang asked.

Mushu replied saying, "Kong and I grew up together, he has learned a lot from Fa Zhou. I think he can prove his worth."

"Alright then," Shang said confusedly, "in 5 minutes line up we have work to be done." He turned and went into his tent.

Mulan started to watch Shang leave but she was interrupted by Mushu when he said, "Come meet Yao, Ling, and Chien Po." Mulan joined Mushu and thought, "Okay, so the tall lanky one is Ling. The short tough one i Yao. Chien Po is the one that loves food. Hmm..this is going to be a long day." After she was introduced to them, Mulan was rushed inside of Mushu's tent. "What were you thinking Mulan? Do you not think at all before you acted? And what will your father say to me when he finds out that I saw you and didn't send you right back home?" Mushu exclaimed furiously. Mulan looked at her best friend. He looked concerned for her but she didn't need people to look out for her. She needed for him to be concerned for himself because she didn't want to be the reason for his death.

"My father can't fight, you know that. Maybe you should be concerned for your own self. And don't try to convince to leave because it won't work," Mulan started to exit the tent, "By the way, my name is Kong," and went that she left.

Shang wasn't so sure that Kong was telling the truth. "Something seems very off about that guy," Shang thought to himself but before he could think more on the subject, Chi Fu came bursting in. Chi Fu was the most annoying man you will ever meet, but he was true to his name. Chi Fu name means 'to bully', the one thing that he was good at. "What do you want Chi Fu," asked Shang.

"I'm just sending my latest report to your father. Shall I read it to you? I'm going to anyway, it goes like this: General Li, Your son's performance is terrible. He is not training the troops and he is allowing them to misbehave. He should be demoted immediately. The consequences will be terrible if he fails. Emperor's advisor, Chi Fu. Do you like it, Captain Li," Chi Fu said in a smug voice.

"Of course, Chi Fu, you are so right," Shang said knowing that he couldn't argue with Chi Fu because he would never hear the end of it. Shang longed to wring the swramy man's neck but knowing he couldn't, he just walked out his tent. He surveyed his camp, Wu Zong. Wu Zong consisted for twelve acres, the soldiers camped on the first acre, and the rest of the acres were used for practicing shooting arrows, swordsmanship, and martial arts. In the center of the camp was a pole of 30 feet with an arrow on top. Shang yelled for the soldiers to get in line. Then he yelled out, "Let's get down to business if we are to defeat the Huns. Time is racing toward us till the Huns arrive and you're the saddest bunch I ever met of you. You're a spineless, pale, pathetic lot who doesn't have a clue. If you heed my every order, you might survive. You're unsuited for the rage of war, but you can bet before we're through that I'll make a man out of you."

"Aw pretty boy, that's such a wonderful speech. Now, can you train us or are we training ourselves," asked Yao.

Shang got up into Yao's face, "Retrieve the arrow, if you fail, you will have cleanup duty for a week." Yao didn't even make it half way before he fell. Some of the soldiers volunteered to try, and all of them fail...except Kong. "Fa Zhou taught you well," Shang told Kong, "but that doesn't mean you will be able to slack off."

"Yes, sir," Kong said.

Back in the Fa Zhou household, there was a commotion when Fa Zhou's mother finally came clean about where Mulan was. "I helped her leave. I didn't awake you when she left," his mother said. "I only did it because I love you my son. She has a chance of surviving, my son, you don't."

"But Mother, she is a girl; if she is found out she will be put to death for treason," Fa Zhou said, "now I may never see my little flower again. And to think the last thing I said to her was that she dishonored me."

"Let Mulan worry about if she gets caught. It will do no good if you die out of worriedness. Beside, Mulan knows that you are proud of her. Go to sleep my son, because I know I am," she said as she walked out the room.

Fa Zhou crossed the family room and looked out the window, "Be safe Mulan, and may our ancestors watch over you," he thought to himself.

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