Chapter 3
AN: STOP FLAMMING DA STORY PREPZ OK!(I give you guys a pat on the back, good job) odderwize fangs 2 da goffik ppl 4 da good reveiws!(and as for you guys...why would you let her continue with this behaviour...setting her up for false goals tsk tsk tsk)FANGS AGEN RAVEN! ( ahaha still not funny) oh yeah, BTW I don't own dis or da lyrics 4 Good Chralotte.(Thank God for that)
On the night of the concert I put on my black lace-up boots with high heels.(hmm k) Underneath them were ripped red fishnets. Then I put on a black leather minidress with all this corset stuff on the back and front(ya we understood what you meant by corset). I put on matching fishnet on my arms. I straightened my hair and made it look all spiky.( love that hairstyle, I love wearing my hair curly and straight, letting it flow down my back yup...)I felt a little depressed then, so I slit one of my wrists.( when I get depressed I shoot myself in the ear, it's a good way to clean them, why bother using q-tips they can get stuck, why would I risk that) I read a depressing(you're already depressed, why make it worse) book while I waited for it to stop bleeding(aren't you a vampire, shouldn't it heal right away) and I listened to some GC. I painted my nails black and put on TONS (OK!)of black eyeliner. Then I put on some black lipstick. I didn't put on foundation(Sooo now she notices it, kinda slow there kiddo) because I was pale anyway. I drank some human blood (I love keeping random people in my room too)so I was ready to go to the concert.(Brush your teeth, blood breath)
I went outside. Draco was waiting there in front of his flying car.(Again...he's a Pureblood...and why pollute use apparition, or floo powder) He was wearing a Simple Plan t-shirt (they would play at the show too), (lovely) baggy black skater pants, black nail polish and a little eyeliner (AN: A lot fo kewl boiz wer it ok. (meh it depends really...)
"Hi Draco!" I said in a depressed voice.(why the exclamation mark if you're depressed...it's like saying "I'M DEAD!" I said depresingly)
"Hi Ebony." he said back. We walked into his flying black Mercedes-Benz(I wonder how they got up there) (the license plate said 666) and flew to the place with the concert(lazy). On the way we listened excitedly to Good Charlotte and Marilyn Manson.(Hogsmeade isn't that far is it) We both smoked cigarettes and drugs.(WHILE DRIVING...you're going to lose some demerit points) When we got there, we both hopped out of the car(more like leaped out probably). We went to the mosh pit at the front of the stage(I always thought that a mosh pit was like a mile away from the concert itself) and jumped up and down(the frog dance) as we listened to Good Charlotte.(Wow the actual band showed up to the concert, I love when that happens)
"You come in cold, you're covered in blood They're all so happy you've arrived The doctor cuts your cord, hands you to your mom She sets you free into this life." sang Joel (I don't own da lyrics 2 dat song).(again thank God)
"Joel is so fucking hot." I said to Draco, pointing to him as he sung(why distract him like that), filling the club with his amazing voice.
Suddenly Draco looked sad.(ahhh he'll get over it)
"What's wrong?" I asked as we moshed to the music.(wow talking and moshing at the same time that's talent) Then I caught on.
"Hey, it's ok I don't like him better than YOU!" I said.(atleast she emphazised it, because if she hadn't I would be at a complete loss)(
"Really?" asked Draco sensitively and he put his arm around me all protective.(ahh draco acting sensitive and protective sounds OOC)
"Really." I said. "Besides I don't even know Joel and he's going out with Hilary fucking Duff. I fucking hate that little bitch." I said disgustedly, thinking of her ugly blonde face.(soo if he wasn't then you'd be with him? like that would happen in the first place...wait a blonde face i wonder what that looks like)
The night went on really well, and I had a great time. So did Draco.(so much for a correct phrase structure) After the concert, we drank some beer and asked Benji and Joel for their autographs and photos with them. We got GC concert tees. Draco and I crawled(they crawled back into it? first they do drugs and drive now they drink and drive, wonderful role model there kids) back into the Mercedes-Benz, but Draco didn't go back into Hogwarts, instead he drove the car into… the Forbidden Forest!(was that suppose to have some sort of dramatic affect...cause it didn't work.)