Chapter 8

AN: stop flassing ok! if u do den u r a prep!(again with the same author's note, I can't even think of anything to say,how sad)

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Everyone in the class stared at me and then Draco came into the room even though he was naked and started begging me to take him back.(hmm I'm really sure that he would never do that, who would in the first place)

"Ebony, it's not what you think!" Draco screamed sadly.(pretty sure that someone can't scream sadly)

My friend B'loody(what can't write the word bloody now?) Mary Smith smiled at me understatedly(that doesn't really make sense in this sentence or maybe it's just me). She flipped her long waste-length gothic(you don't have to put gothic you know...well then I guess my cat has white gothic fur) black hair and opened her crimson eyes like blood(noooo crimson isn't even close to the color red *she said sarcasticly*) that she was wearing contact lenses on(ya you don't need to tell us anymore we can figure that on are own). She had pale white skin that she was wearing white makeup on(soo she's wearing white foundation even though she's pale wow it's like another you). Hermione was kidnapped when she was born. Her real parents are vampires(I thought vampires couldn't reproduce...because they're dead) and one of them is a witch but Voldemort killed her mother and her father committed suicide because he was depressed about it(ya because everyone in your story are depressed). She still has nightmares(she was kidnapped when she was born how can she have nightmare about it?) about it and she is very haunted and depressed(ya we figured that on are own...again). It also turns out her real last name is Smith and not Granger(...). (Since she has converted to Satanism she is in Slytherin now not Griffindoor. )(so all the Slytherin's are Satanist? Wow i.m suprised your not on some sort of hit list)

"What is it that you desire, you ridiculous dimwit!" Snape demeaned angrily in his cold voice but I ignored him.

"Vampire, I can't believe you cheated on me with Draco!" I shouted at him.(cue the dramatic music)

Everyone gasped.(o.o)

I don't know why Ebony was so mad at me.(I guess she forgot to tell us that she changed the POV, because it sounds like she's angry at herself) I had went out with Vampire (I'm bi and so is Ebony)(ok...) for a while but then he broke my heart. He dumped me because he liked Britney, a stupid preppy fucker.(is it just me or does he sound like one of those stereotypical prep?) We were just good friends now. He had gone through horrible problems, and now he was gothic. (Haha, like I would hang out with a prep.)(why is everyone in this story gothic, my life wasn't the easiest and I didn't turn into a strereotypical goth or emo)

"But I'm not going out with Draco anymore!" said Vampire.

"Yeah fucking right! Fuck off, you bastard!" I screamed.(wow someone's a little drama queen *sing-song voice*I ran out of the room and into the Forbidden Forest(maybe she'll get lost :)) where I had lost my virility(did she just write virility...well I guess that explains why she got and 'erection' in the last chapter) to Draco and then I started to bust into tears.(burst into tears...I was hoping that it would be into flames but ok)