SPECIAL FANGZ 2 RAVEN MY GOFFIX BLOOD SISTA WTF UR SUPPOZD 2 RIT DIS!(Why are you yelling at her?)11111111(333333333)
HEY RAVEN DO U KNOW WHERE MY SWEATER I(...use the phone for God sake)
Chapter 13
AN: raven fangz 4 gelpin me agen im sory(ya i'd be sorry too) ah tok ur postr of gerard but dat guy is such a fokin sexbom!(someones a cleptomaniac) PREPZ STOP FLAMIGNG!(Only if you stop writting)
Vampire and I ran up the stairs looking for Dumbledore. We were so scared.(ya he is a pretty scary guy)
"Dumbledore Dumblydore!"(...first time you got it right, second time not so much) we both yelled. Dumbledore came there.(ew, sorry dirty mind)
"What is it that you want now you despicable snobs?" he asked angrily.(mayeb he needs an advil or something)
"Volsemort(is that his sidekick like batman and robin) has Draco!" we shouted at the same time.(wow you guys can be twins)
He laughed in an evil voice.(laugh in an evil voice?...is it normal when someones twitches on the floor...no...oh better call 911 then)
"No! Don't! We need to save Draco!" we begged.(maybe he likes the new fetish)
"No." he said meanly. "I don't give a darn what Voldemort does to Draco. Not after how much he misbehaved in school especially with YOU Ebony."(oooh pay back) he said while he frowned looking at me. "Besides I never liked him that much anyway." then he walked away. Vampire started crying. "My Draco!" he moaned. (AN: don't u fik gay guyz r lik so hot!)(weren't you homophobic a while ago)
"Its okay!" I tried to tell him but that didn't stop him. He started to cry tears of blood.(bring him to the hospital or did you turn him into a vampire without telling us) Then he had a brainstorm.(that must of been loud) "I had an idea!" he exclaimed.(ah poor thing lost it, look under your shoe's quick...got my IQ is slipping as we speak...there goes my dreams of teaching english as a second language, maybe i'll just be the next TARA GILLESPIE TO WALK AMOUNG THIS SITE)
"What?" I asked him.
"You'll see." he said. He took out his wand and did a spell. Then… suddenly we were in Voldemprt's lair!(wow what kind of spell was that?)
We ran in with our wands out just as we heard a croon voice(alright a croon voice maes sense but not the way you wrote it, you can make a dictionary cut himself and burst into flames) say. "Allah(really, isn't that a Muslum version of God?) Kedavra!" It was….. Voldemort!(who did you expect to find at his LAIR, maybe you expected to see a dancing giraffe with long purple fur with extra eyes, ya that sounds about right)