Chapter 15
AN: stup flaming ok! btw u suk frum no on evry tim sum1 flams me im gona slit muh ristsz!(you'd bleed to death if you did that) fangz 2 raven 4 hlpein!
"Ebony Ebony!" shouted Draco sadly. "No, please, come back!"(no dracon run the other way RUN)
But I was too mad.(..I actually forgot why she's mad at him, or is she jsut randomly mad at him?)
"Whatever! Now u can go anh have sex with Vampire!"(probably a better fuck than you ) I shouted. I stormed into my room and closed my black door with my blood-red key.(couldn't you just say that you slammed the door shut, I never closed a door with a blood red key, you can lock it maybe but not close it) It had a picture of Marylin Manson on it. He looked so sexy in a way that reminded me of Draco and Vampire.(I opened a pic of marylin manson a picture of draco and harry...how does he remind you of them.) I started to cry and weep.(that must be hard to do at the same time) I took a razor and started to slit my wrists.(bad reviews?) I drank the blood all depressed.(you drank it depressingly...I might start doing that now too) Then I looked at my black GC watch and noticed it was time to go to Biology class.(there's not biology clas at Hogwarts)
I put on a short ripped black gothic dress that said Anarchy on the front in blood red letters and was all ripped and a spiky belt. Under that I put on ripped black fishnets and boots that said Joel all over them with blood red letters.(you do know you're going to a boarding school that it's maditory to wear a uniform, what makes you so special...I'm stick wearing a ugly uniform at my shcool and I would get in shit if I dress differently) I put my ebony black hair out(was it on fire). Anyway I went downstairs feeling all sad and depressed as usual.(yes as usual, go see a dr.)I did sum advanced Biology work.(OH I'm sure you did, Quick how many chambers is there in a human heart name them all and what they do you have...60 SECONDS) I was turning a bloody pentagram into a black guitar.(ok then, why can't I do that?) Suddenly the guitar turned to Draco!(the guitar turned to draco, so it moved his body towards him or it turned into draco... because both statements make absolute sense, so wizards can be an animagus and instromagus better keep and eye on that drum set)
"Enoby I love you!" he shouted sadly.(he seems kinda stalkerish, poor thing look at what you turned him into) "I dnot care what those fucker preps and posers fink(it's think...think...like THINK before you write something like this story for example). Ur da most beautiful girl in the world.(Lying and Vanity are both Sins, just putting it out there) Before I met you I used to want to commit suicide all the time.(ya I highly doubt that, sure being a follower of Voldemort can be tough but Ebony, Enoby whatever your name is, you're not taht special) Now I just wanna fucking be with you. I fucking love you!."(what's with the need to put fucking in pratically evey chapter and sentences) Then…. he started to sing(cool it's a musical now) "Da Chronicles of Life and Death" (we considered it our song now cuz we fell in love when Joel was singing it)(I can imagine that scene right now...like one of those cheezy romance films...looking into each others eyes, firesworks exploding behind us as Joel's voice is heard in the back ground..ya there goes my lunch) right in front of the entire class! His singing voice was so amazing and gothic and sexxy like a cross between Gerard, Joel, Chester, Pierre and Marilyn Manson(how can someone sound like a mix of 5 people...fine I bet you sound like a mix bewteen: Miss Piggy, Janice from Friends, Gilbert Gottfried, Fran Drescher and Pee Wee Herman) (AN: don't u fink dos guyz r so hot. if u dnot no who dey r get da fuk out od hr!).(Someones' a BITCH)
"OMFG." I said after he was finished. Some fucking preps stared at us(...were they looking at you with a ..happened look or '. look?) but I just stuck up my middle fingers (that were covered in black nail polish and were entwined with Draco's now)(you make it sound like you have more then one middle finger on one hand, and I don't care what color of nail polish you're wearing and if your hands are entwine together)at them. "I love you!" I said and then we started to kiss just like Hilary Duff (i fukin h8 dat bitch)(then why use her as an example idiot) and CMM in a Cinderella Story. Then we went away holding hands.(maybe he's bringing you to a loony bin) Loopin shouted at us but he stopped cuz everyone was clapping by how sexy we looked 2gether.(...um ah I don't know what to say about that, wow the bitch left me speechless) Then I saw a poster saying that MCR would have a concert in Hogsmede right then.(Wow ADD much, and again why is a muggle band playing in the wizarding world, come on girl think for god sakes) We looked at each other all shocked and then we went 2gether.(hmm I thought that it would be sold out)