So happy that every other day I get a favorite or a review!
Also I have got me a new laptop so yay!
Reviews replies:
ZeroDivisionCaptain: "I love this fanfic the irony is delicious"
Haha thanks.
Ichiro2000 ":)"
Yay simile!
Psycho's Pet "So far so good"
" Thanks i will try to keep it that way or have it get better"
Imou "that was short... TOO SHORT!
but I liked the fact that they don't seem troubled by them being engaged! ^^"
I try to keep my story like skirts-Long enough to cover the subject, but short enough to keep it interesting.- someone complained in a past fanfiction about being to long and then being to short so I keep it middle ways.
Kentra Kohama "I love it, and this is sooo cute! I'm praying that Rukia and Ichigo end up together. Oh, and if you want someone to correct your grammar, I'm willing to help."
I e-mailed you but I'm still waiting on a reply.
HanaLovesFlowers"cute story ^^ cant wait to read more :D"
patience young grasshopper
kyurikochan "Sry hehe i mean if they r gonna marry soon.
Are they going to marry? Update"
Yah that is totally not planned out yet...
Imou "gah! update! how can you leave it there? We don't even know Ichigo's reaction!"
I was trying to keep with my deadline. Well did the cliff hanger make you thing for several days? wondering what was going to happen?
So many reviews! No off to the story! BTW I have made a deviantArt! my name is " fangirlmindy " it was mexgirlmindy at one point, but I sorta deleted it on accident...
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Rukia and Ichigo stayed after school 30 minutes after the dismissal bell rang. " Hey Rukia I think everyone has left. Ready to go?" Ichigo asked as he crouched down in front of Rukia.
" Sure. By the way thanks again." Rukia said as she wrapped her arms and legs around him.
" No problem I can just leave an injured friend there. I going to take you to my dad's clinic."
" I will be ok. Just need some rest, Idiot." They where already out of the school before Rukia noticed it.
" I don't care. Better safe, than sorry. Beside my father would kill me if I left any female hurt and not help."
" Fine, But don't whine to me when your back hurt."
"Che."Ichigo walked for 15 minutes before he arrived at the clinic.
" I'm home!" Ichigo called into the kitchen
" Ichi-nii Rukia-neesan, what are you doing here?" Yuzu exclaimed as he walked through the door. Yuzu as always was in the kitchen. " Are you staying for dinner?
" Rukia tripped this morning. She twisted her ankle and I want dad to take a good look at. Sure we can stay, but we can't stay to late."
" Dad should be finished with work in about 10 minutes."
Rukia looked around at the cozy kitchen. In the middle of the wall there was a giant picture of gorgeous women that looked alot like lchigo
" I though I smelted my beautiful daughter-to-be-in-law." Isshin yelled as he attempted to tackle both Ichigo and Rukia but stopped once he saw Rukia's ankle! "What has happened to my poor third daughter"
" She twisted her ankle this morning walking to school this morning." Ichigo explained as he placed Rukia on the counter." I wanted you to take a second look at her ankle. The nurse wasn't in today so I bandaged her ankle myself."
" MASAKI! It brings me to tear about how caring out son is to our third daughter!" Isshin yelled yelled to the giant poster.
" Is that your mother? She is beautiful." Rukia asked while Isshin continued to yell.
" Yah she is." Ichigo replied. Rukia noticed a glint in his eyes. " Dad are going to yell at mom or look at Rukia's ankle." Ichigo yelled. It was 10 minutes later before Isshin settled down enough to look at Rukia's ankle.
" Rukia, your ankle will be fine all you need is to rest your ankle and keeping it propped ever so often." Isshin explained to Rukia and Ichigo.
" Dinner is ready!" Yuzu announced as she covered the table with various foods.
Rukia stared in amazement as the young girl piled even more food on the table." Do you usually cook so much food?"
" You think this is alot you should see Thanksgiving and Christmas dinner" Ichigo said as he sat in his usual table.
" Rukia, my dear third daughter, you will sit beside me." Isshin declared as he pulled out the seat beside Ichigo.
" Would you like some rice?" Yuzu offered, who was across from her
" Rice is very good for pregnant women. Especially for those caring my future grandchild " Isshin added.
" What!" Ichigo yelled.
Rukia dropped her chopsticks and her mouth when slack. It took her a moment to resume her Kuchiki trained image. " I don' know what you are talking about. I'm not nor plan to have any children anytime soon.-"
" That is what they all say before they end up knocked up." Karin muttered into her rice. She was across from Rukia.
"- Though me and Ichigo maybe engaged there are no romantic or sexual relationship between us." She continued.
" Masaki! I have failed you!" Isshin bawled in to the poster.
" Dad! Eat you dinner and quit scaring poor Rukia-neesan." Yuzu commanded . Isshin stopped and returned to the table. " How was you day Ichi-nii?"
" Decent. Had to carry around a midget all day."
"Well at least there wasn't a bright orange hair in you line of vision, you ankle hurting and someone is grabbing you thigh. They are probably bruised! " The 'midget' retorted.
" Che, You should have watched where you were going."
" If a idiot strawberry wouldn't have called Chappy stupid I wouldn't have been looking at where I was going."
" Che"
" Eep! Chappy is on!" Yuzu squealed and raced to the living room.
" Chappy!" Rukia quickly hopped to the living room behind Yuzu.
" I will never understand." Karin sighed and poked at her vegetables .
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" Midget it's 8:30. We need to get home we have school tomorrow." Ichigo spoke to the sleeping figure. " You are asleep, seriously?" Ichigo groaned as hoisted her onto his back. " Bye!"
" Have a safe trip!" Yuzu called as she vigorously waved from the door.
" Don't make me an aunt too soon" Karin yelled as she changed the tv to the rerun of the soccer game.
" Good night my lovely daughter and son! You better make me my grand-" Isshin screamed but was silenced by Karin's punch.
"I'm trying to watch the game!" Karin huffed and returned to her seat on the sofa.
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After the short walk home, Ichigo, carefully placed Rukia in between her sheets. Rukia snuggled closer into the pillow as she released a soft snore.
" Night, midget." Ichigo whispered as he turned the lights of.
" Night, strawberry." Rukia half snored in her sleep."
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My excuse notes.
I know filler fluffish chapter. Yeah, I know I'm late. I'm sorry my mom is having a baby. No seriously, water has broken. It is April 16 now ( The after notes). I'm sitting in the car while she goes to "Wallgreens" to probably buy something to eat. She isn't in labor yet so I think she is going to hold out until the last possible moment to go to the doctors office. BTW is anyone cared it is a boy! A 15 year age difference, damn, I feel old. Well now I probably can''t go to Walmart with out the old people giving me dirty looks say stuff like "Just look at that slut ,Betty. Back when I was a kid we would have beaten girls like that. These kids have no morals now a days." No I'm not putting down teen pregnancy. People should have kids when ever they want to . But that brings me to my parents...-sigh- Why are Mexicans so fertile? Yes I'm half Mexican. The baby on the way is also half Mexican. We have the same parents I say that because in today's world that can no longer be assumed. But after 35 and 3 kids ( all girls me being the oldest children you'd they would say " That is it no more children."
Gah! That got winded.
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