Hey! I was totally inspired to write this fic after: A. NeilHighwind review only after 3 minutes of me uploading chapter 12. B. I had 4 more reviews this morning ( 4/14). C. A beta offering. Thank him not sure lol. Also my last lemon didn't seem do lemony... My this chapter might make it better...
Thank to my anonymous beta! They really cleaned this chapter up.
Side note: Does any one in my county know how to use birth control?My mom had a baby and now my friends mom is having another baby ( The other baby is like 14 months old...) At my school there have been 10 other pregnancy (none where rape mind you.).
More notes. I 'm going to stop using "-san" "Otosan" and similar. Just because it's a little easier.
Review comments
Wow I have 56 comments! and every other day a story alerts. And time to comment to the reveiws. I
might need to do this more often.
Note to beta. You don't have to beta this unless you want. Just erase when u read the note.
IchiRuki2.0
OMG Update love it and is rukia pregnatnt also are u mexican?
Yes I am half Mexican. ( Haven't I stated this already? Maybe not oh well.). Rukia is not yet pregnant
but, might soon enough...-evil smile-
ej
they should start planning the wedding...thus ichigo meeting byakuya...
Great idea!
NeilHighwind
2011-05-13 . chapter 12
Awww, He's worried about her. It's really cute so far. Even with last chapters surprise. Which was a
big surprise mind story is definitly a good one. Keep it up!
Take that Jess! ( his comment so you understand)
Jess
2011-03-25 . chapter 4
Wow, that was very anti-climatic. Not so sure about this story, the plot sounded interesting but
you are rushing through it. The only "twist" in the story so far was very obvious and it doesn't
seeem like you are taking the time to put a lot of detail and thought into your chapters to flesh
out the story to its full potential.
The Dark End
This is total irrelavent but your name reminds me of an anus... I don't know why...
Also thank to my other reveiws they really didn't have a question to them.
Caithlin
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Imou
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I woke up with warm a warm spicy scent and his arm around my waist..again... He was serious when he said he wasn't going to let me out of his sight. Though we haven't had sex since that day, we sleep in his bed -it is bigger-, but I think he wants to. It's sweet that he waits and doesn't push. Damn, it's the "Kurosaki lunch" thing again today isn't it? It's only 7:00 so we have time before they get here. "Ichigo, Wake up!" I whispered placing a small peck on his lips after several moments of trying to level with him.
" Morning, wifey." He grinned kissing me back. I just love the way he make the butterflies erupt into a frenzy of movement in my stomach
" Ready for today?" I got out of bed, stretching, I wasn't going to bother with getting out of my sleeping clothes – Ichigo's shirt and panties- yet. We will probably take a shower later on today.
" What happens?" he asked following me into kitchen. I sat at the table as he made breakfast.
" It's your family's lunch thing."
" Picnic."
" Yeah that."
3rd Pov.
Rukia stood beside the sink as he washed dishes. Ichigo stood there with less than half of his thought process working. One second they where bickering-chappy posters in his room- the next Rukia now bare and freezing ass was sitting on the counter and Ichigio's tongue was in her mouth.
" Don't stop!" Rukia gasped once Ichigo pulled back for air.
" Glad you said that because I don't think I could have stopped." He pulled off her shirt dropping it onto the kitchen floor. Rukia ran her finger through his hair over and over, as he massaged her breast with both hands and nibbled on her collar bone.
" Make love to me again, please." Rukia lust filled eyes meet his equally filled. Ichigo dropped his
shorts kicking them to the side before filling Rukia. Rukia rolled her hips to meet his thrust both
moaning with every sinusoidal lunge of their bodies.
They were almost at their peaks when Isshin yelled " Yuzu, Karin cover your eyes! MASAKI!"
Yuzu ran down the hall and Karin turned on the T.V. To the soccer game in indifference.
Ichigo and Rukia dropped down with him hiding behind the island counter, quickly scurrying to grab
their clothes and put them on. Rukia looked around trying find her panties. She spotted them hanging on the drawer knob. Grabbing them and putting them on.
" Um.. Morning." Rukia blushed crossing her arms over her chest, hiding her erect nipples.
" Why the hell do you just waltz into someone else's house? Can't you knock ?" Ichigo yelled at his
fallen dad.
"You knew we were coming today! We did knock but moans of 'Ichigo!' probably blocked out the sound."
" Shut up!" Ichigo punched his father again looking away. " And If you knew what it was that we were doing, why did you come in?"
" We thought it was being done in the bedroom not the kitchen!"
" Can you idiots keep it down I'm trying to watch the game!" Karin yelled. " OK. We walked in on 2 teenagers, no fiancés, having sex in their kitchen. Moving on. Didn't you have something important to tell them?"
" Oh yeah! I came to say Rukia's father is coming here around noon, so we won't go to our usual place for the picnic."
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Clifthanger! JKJKJKJK That would be mean.
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" Dad! I forgot the Custard in the fridge!" Yuzu exclaimed once she came out of hiding. Pulling her dad towards the door.
" Karin are you coming?" Isshin asked grabbing the door frame before Yuzu completely dragged him out of the house.
" I'm good. The game is getting good." Karin replied after she diverted her attention away from the TV.
"Don't cause trouble then ," Yuzu commanded before dragging her dad to the car.
In the car Isshin asked. " Did you switch her pills?"
" Yep and how did you know that she was on the pill?"
" I'm a doctor. I can access anyone information if I wish."
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In the time it took Yuzu to get her custard Ichigo and Rukia showered, together and got dressed. Karin watched the game in completely ignorant bliss and did not or choose not to the hear their almost muffled moans and mews of passion. Ichigo and Rukia were dressed and watching the game with Karin when Yuzu entered the living room followed by her dad and a serious looking man dressed in an elegant suit followed.
"Father!" Rukia gasped.
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So? So? Review for quicker update! Short chapter I know, but I promise the next chapter will be longer. This is the 2nd to last School week for me so after that is vacation!
Side note: John will be a month old Saturday!