Hi, please I ask you to review, and I know this story is kind of crappy. No, it IS crappy; it's my first MR Fanfic. I know only twenty people actually read it. But please review, I know there were A LOT of mistakes. So please review tell me what I do.
Summary: its AJ's job is to protect the Flock and save Max from her death. But does saving Max mean taking her away from loved ones? Watch her as she brings the Flock and the "Fang Gang" together in this adventure.
Chapter 2
Max's POV
Eight hours ago Angel had disappeared; my baby was gone, in building that collapsed. But somehow I knew she was alive, but where? We had searched the wreck after all the people had cleared out. Nothing, not even a freaking feather. It was weird like she disappeared into thin air, which I am not sure us bird kids are capable of, yet… Anyway, Fang's flock hadn't been much help for that because they decided to take off, not that I cared. Seriously, the situation was already awkward enough, I was sort of thankful they didn't stick around. My life was currently a mess (isn't it always) Angel was gone; my so-called soul mate had taken off with his group of mutant-bird-children, not to mention with my clone. I needed to focus on getting Angel back and saving the human race. Oh, goody. Even in the midst of all my thoughts, I managed to drift off to sleep. I dreamt I was in a white room, I mean it entirely white. Nothing was in the room except the chair I was sitting in, I attempted to release myself from the chair but I was unsuccessful. I wasn't tied to the chair or anything I was just stuck, that's weird I thought. Just then my thoughts were interrupted by a voice, the Voice.
"Hello Maximum," Geez, can't that thing leave me alone. In my sleep!
"Hey voice, how's it going?"
"Max, it's no time for sarcasm, I came here to tell you…"
"No, Voice I think it's the perfect time for sarcasm."
"Maximum listen I came here to tell you that…"
"That what Voice? I know have to save the freaking human race! Dylan's my perfect other half! I know about the Doomsday Group! I know about Gen. 77! Will you just leave me ALONE?"
"Max, I understand what pressure you are under. But I came here to tell you that your protector is coming."
"I really don't think you do understand, and what to do you mean "my protector"
"Your protector Max, she is going to bring you to the MCU (Mutant Children Unite.) (I know it's corny, I couldn't think of anything much better) headquarters, where you will learn everything you can know about the Doomsday Group. Amerile you protector, will stay hidden with your flock and Fang's to train them. When the time is right you will all reunite to destroy the DG and save the human race and Angel."
"You mean I am going to some place to train to save the world and someone I don't even know is going to train my Flock."
"Well, yes that is the point; the flocks need to be trained properly."
"They were trained well enough to survive all these years."
"Max, Amerile knows what she's doing she has been doing this for a very long time. You need to trust her in order to survive."
"No, I don't need to trust her; you can't make me go to that place."
"Max, you can be so stubborn, The DG are using Angel for her powers. She's the most powerful out of all of you; they will take her powers and kill her when they're finished. You will have to cooperate with Fang and his Flock. I know you don't want but you have to. When you wake up you will be in the MCU, OK."
"But…"
"No buts Maximum, Good luck." I was about to argue, when I was hit by the slap of reality. The weird thing was that the Voice was right, I wasn't in the deserted coffee shop anymore and a tall girl with a muscular build and pin straight brown hair with sea green orbs was standing in front of me. Then she said,
"Hello Max, my name is Amerile Jessica but you will call me AJ, and I am your protector."
To be continued…
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