Hey guys, hope you like this updated story so far.
I'm hoping that some of you will notice that there are some changes that have changed which have been thanks to some reviews that I was given I want to say a huge thank you to all those who have helped in this and let me see where I have made some mistakes which have allowed me to improve.
I hope you also enjoy that I'm using some of Demetri's Egyptian heritage in his speech, I think it makes him more connected to his heritage and I'm hoping (fingers crossed) that I have got the words right, as I did look up the translations online, if anything is wrong please please don't be offended, just write me a message and I will quickly correct them.
Love you all you are such big inspirations and motivators for me, I wouldn't be doing half these stories without you! x