Hello everybody, hows it goin? I hope everything is well. Just a heads up, I was talking with my friend the other day about the amount of mistakes that we have noticed in the Twilight movie. I have published a fanfiction with the mistakes that can be seen. There are a lot. Go check it out. Its called 'Mistakes made in Twilight'. I'm sure you've noticed some of these mistakes as well.
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Summary: A young woman struggles to find the right guy for herself. She declines the many requests for marriage that she recieves. After a year of no dating she realises that she's not getting any younger and needs to get married soon. She gets help from her best friend and tracks down her many old boyfriends. She is surprised when she meets them again to see that they have changed so much since when she dated them. Will she regret ever breaking up with them? Will she get back together with some of them? Or will she find new love in someone she never expected? Read and find out.
Chapter 3 - Edward
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3 years ago
I was having dinner with Edward. He was so sweet. He had been so romantic lately. He had ordered such a nice dinner for us. We were eating on the roof under the stars. There were two candles on the table. It was absolutely beautiful. I loved it.
"Bella," Edward started interrupting me from my thoughts.
"Yes Edward?" I asked smiling at him.
He took my hands in his and took a deep breathe. "We've been together for a long time now," he said and I knew where this was going. "And I just wanted to tell you that," he hesitated for a moment seeming extremely nervous, "I love you." He said quickly. "I love you so much and I know that I'll always love you for as long as we live. Its like I've found the person that I was meant to be with for the rest of my life. You are my life. Without you I'm nothing."
I stared at him the whole time he was saying this. I was quite surprised to say the least. I never expected this. I wasn't ready for this.
"And now, tonight, on this wonderful night, here, on the roof, underneath the stars, I want to ask you a question." He got off his chair and kneeled down on one knee next to me. I gasped as he pulled a ring box out of his back pocket. "Will you marry me?" he asked as he revealed a beautiful diamond ring.
I stared at him shocked. "I, uh," I didn't know what to say. I eventually just shook my head. "No."
"What?" he asked shocked.
"No." I repeated biting my lip.
"Really?" he asked.
"Yeah," I said nodding.
"Why?" he asked.
"Well, its just," I didn't know if I should tell him the truth because it might sound harsh but I thought the truth would be best, "throughout the years we've been dating I've been going up the ladder at work you know, getting promotions, salary increase, yada yada yada, and you," I looked at him hesitantly, "you've been fired three times and currently work as a nurse."
"So its my job that bothers you?" he confirmed.
I thought about it and nodded. "Yeah, pretty much." I said.
"Huh." He looked like he was thinking about something. Things got pretty awkward quickly.
"So, I think I should just go..." I said and got up.
"Um, yeah, that would probably be best." He said also getting up from his kneeling position.
"Um," I hesitated as I headed for the door. "Do you think you can drop me off at home?" I asked hesitantly. "You kinda picked me up so I don't have my car here."
"Um," he looked really hesitant but then nodded, "yeah, sure."
"Thanks," I said giving him a sweet smile.
We walked back into his apartment and then outside to his car. He drove me in silence to my house. We finally seemed to get there after what seemed like a lifetime.
"Edward?" I said before getting out of the car.
"Yeah?" he asked looking at me with a pained look.
"I'm sorry." I said. "Really I am. We can still be friends though." I suggested.
He looked hesitant. "I'm not so sure if that would be a good idea..."
"I understand." I said and gave him a small smile. "It was nice knowing you Edward." I said and got out the car. I walked up to my house without even waving back to him.
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So how was the loveable Edward? Would you have said yes to him? How do you think he will end up? Will he be rich? Will he be poor? Or will he be a man-whore? Read more to find out. If you review I'll give you a clue.
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~Rose/Hannah
