AN: I HAVE FOUND A NEW SITE, AND I'M BACK! *Cheering and applause* :). Anyway, welcome back to It's Another My Immortal Commentary! I'll try to not take this long with the next update (and the one after that, and the one after that…)
To remind you
Disclaimer: I DO NOT, I repeat, I DO NOT own this storyline, that's all Tara (fortunately), nor do I own Harry Potter (Unfortunately…). All I own are the lines written in bold
Now, ENJOY THESE NEW CHAPTERS!
Chapter 3.
AN: STOP FLAMMING DA STORY PREPZ OK! NEVER! odderwize fangs 2 da goffik ppl 4 da good reveiws! She actually got GOOD reviews? Wow… FANGS AGEN RAVEN! oh yeah, BTW I don't own dis or da lyrics 4 Good Chralotte. I don't like where this is going…
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On the night of the concert Ah, yes. The impossible concert… I put on my black lace-up boots with high heels. Underneath them were ripped red fishnets. UNDERNEATH them? Don't you mean ABOVE? Then I put on a black leather minidress with all this corset stuff on the back and front. This has to be her worst outfit 'till now I put on matching fishnet on my arms. Yikes I straightened my hair and made it look all spiky. Then what's the point of straightening it in the first place? I felt a little depressed then, Oh, god so I slit one of my wrists. No. NO I read a depressing book while I waited for it to stop bleeding AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! DON'T DO THAT! and I listened to some GC. I painted my nails black and put on TONS of black eyeliner. Why? Why so much? Then I put on some black lipstick. I didn't put on foundation because I was pale anyway. WHY DID IT TAKE YOU TWO AND A HALF CHAPTERS TO FIGURE THAT OUT?! I drank some human blood NO. STOP IT. I can't. I just can't so I was ready to go to the concert. EXCUSE ME? WHAT?!
I went outside. Draco was waiting there in front of his flying car. HOLD THE THIEF! He was wearing a Simple Plan t-shirt (they would play at the show too), baggy black skater pants, black nail polish and a little eyeliner (AN: A lot fo kewl boiz wer it ok!). Yeah, well. Draco doesn't
"Hi Draco!" I said in a depressed voice. Wow… You are SO excited for the concert…
"Hi Ebony." he said back. We walked into his flying black Mercedes-Benz (the license plate said 666) Of course… and flew to the place with the concert. On the way we listened excitedly to Good Charlotte and Marilyn Manson. We both smoked cigarettes and drugs. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH! When we got there, we both hopped out of the car. We went to the mosh pit at the front of the stage and jumped up and down as we listened to Good Charlotte.
"You come in cold, you're covered in blood
They're all so happy you've arrived
The doctor cuts your cord, hands you to your mom
She sets you free into this life." sang Joel This is. A song about a woman giving birth… Wow… (I don't own da lyrics 2 dat song).
"Joel is so fucking hot." I said to Draco, Excuse me, you're there on a DATE with your soon-to-be-boyfriend and all you can talk about is the singer? pointing to him as he sung, filling the club with his amazing voice.
Suddenly Draco looked sad.
"What's wrong?" I asked as we moshed to the music. Then I caught on. A little slow, are we?
"Hey, it's ok I don't like him better than YOU!" I said.
"Really?" asked Draco sensitively C'mon "Draco", MAN UP and he put his arm around me all protective.
"Really." I said. "Besides I don't even know Joel and he's going out with Hilary fucking Duff. I fucking hate that little bitch." Of course you do… I said disgustedly, thinking of her ugly blonde face. *Facepalm*
The night went on really well, and I had a great time. So did Draco. After the concert, we drank some beer Muggle and asked Benji and Joel for their autographs and photos with them. We got GC concert tees. Draco and I crawled back into the Mercedes-Benz, but Draco didn't go back into Hogwarts, instead he drove the car into… the Forbidden Forest! Is it bad that I'm hoping Draco took her there to kill her?
Chapter 4.
AN: I sed stup flaming ok ebony's name is ENOBY Laughing my ass of here… Ebony's name is Enoby. Thank you, Tara, for clearing that up… nut mary su OK! DRACO IS SOO IN LUV wif her dat he is acting defrent! dey nu eechodder b4 ok! Oh, really? Can't imagine… Poor Draco…
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"DRACO!" I shouted. "What the fuck do you think you are doing?" What does it look like he's doing?
Draco didn't answer but he stopped the flying car and he walked out of it. I walked out of it too, curiously.
"What the fucking hell?" I asked angrily. This girl has the WORST mood swings I've EVER seen…
"Ebony?" he asked.
"What?" I snapped.
Draco leaned in extra-close and I looked into his gothic red eyes (he was wearing color contacts) What's wrong with his own eyecolor?
which revealed so much depressing sorrow and evilness *Facepalm* SERIOUSLY? and then suddenly I didn't feel mad anymore. Oh, please…
And then… He killed her, he killed her. Please tell me he killed her suddenly just as I Draco kissed me passionately. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Draco climbed on top of me and we started to make out keenly against a tree. One absolutely HORRENDOUS sex scene coming up He took of my top and I took of his clothes. Here we go! I even took of my bra. Wow… What a sacrifice! Then he put his thingie into my you-know-what and we did it for the first time. *Bangs head into wall while screaming loudly*
"Oh! Oh! Oh! " I screamed. I was beginning to get an orgasm. We started to kiss everywhere and my pale body became all warm. I am officially scarred for life. Thank you Tara… And then….
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING YOU MOTHERFUKERS!" Oh, god
It was….Dumbledore! What is HE doing there? And why is he shouting? I can't for the life of me picture Dumbledore SHOUTING
AN: Well, everyone. That's a wrap on those two chapters. And still about 40 to go… Why did I even start this… Anyway, next chapter will probably up a LOT faster than this one, please review on your way out and see you next time!