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"You sure you wanna tag along…?" Sans asks Riley, wary of the news broadcast they'd seen the other day.
"Sans… It's just the park, and I know you'll protect me, right?" Riley smiles, holding his hand tightly. Sans smiles warily back, she had been helping him so much lately, with the episodes and flashbacks. Ever since he had that nightmare, they'd been much worse. He felt them everyday, sometimes even twice a day. But she was always there. Always there, and ready to help him. He's so grateful to her, and at this point, doesn't know what he'd do without her.
"Yeah. I'll protect you." Always. He turns to Frankie, "You ready to go, kiddo?"
"Yup!" Frankie grins up at Sans, holding onto his jacket. Sans focuses on the park, and suddenly they're there. Frankie runs for the swingset, grinning happily. Riley leads Sans over to a nearby bench, sitting close to him. Sans lets out a happy sigh, watching his son play on the playground. Look how happy he is… Look how happy everyone is… wouldn't it be a shame if it reset, Sans?
Sans stiffens, ignoring the voice. He begins to feel fear overwhelm his soul. What if it did? What if that dream he had became a reality?
"Sans…?" Riley squeezes his hand. She must have felt him stiffen, "Is everything alright…?"
"Y-yeah. Fine." He slaps on a fake smile, "Don't worry 'bout it."
"You heard it again, didn't you…? The voice?" Oh he hears me, alright. I just don't think he's listening…
"Y-yeah… I did."
"Remember what I said I'd do when you heard it…?" She smiles, wrapping her arms around him, "Everything's gonna be okay. It's okay, and I love you… so, so much." She kisses him softly, pulling away moments later to rest her head on his shoulder. Sans smiles,
"You're the best, you know that, Ri?"
"You helped me, now it's my turn to help you. I love you." She grins.
"I love you too." He grins back.
Frankie still missed Wren, but he was grateful to Sans and Riley for trying to make him feel better about it all. Sans always offered to play monopoly with him in the afternoons, and Riley always read to him or took him to the park. Going to the park was always a nice distraction because he got to meet other kids and play with them for a little while. Today he met a little human boy who was a little shy, but really nice.
"Hey." Frankie grinned, sitting in the swing next to the one the little blond boy was sitting in.
"Hi!" The little boy smiled. "My name's Henry. What's your's?"
"Frankie." Frankie smiled.
"Your Mom's a human, huh?" Henry asked, pointing to Sans and Riley. Riley was leaning against Sans. They were holding hands, and whispering about something. They were smiling. It made Frankie grin.
"Riley's not my mom. Not yet…" I wish I could call her mom. She'd be the best mom in the whole world.
"So your dad's girlfriend. That's really cool. My… my mom and dad don't like monsters I don't understand why. You know, Frankie, you and your family and all the other monsters I've met… they're so nice. You're all so nice."
"I… Thanks… You're really nice too."
"Do you wanna be friends?" Henry smiled.
"Yeah! You wanna play knights? I love knights. My mo- Riley's been reading me stories about King Arthur!"
"Sure! King Arthur's AWESOME!" Henry jumped off the swing and Frankie followed just as a tall older woman came rushing across the playground.
"Henry!"
"M-mom…!" Henry gasped.
"What are you doing?!"
"I'm playing with Frankie."
"Playing with… HENRY! What did I say about hanging around these… these freaks?"
"F-freaks…?" Henry choked, his green eyes filled with tears. "F-Frankie's my new friend!"
"Friend?! You can't be friends with these…. These monsters!" She said the word with such spite and it filled Frankie's soul with anger. A burning sensation filled Frankie.
"I'm not a freak!" He choked.
"Don't talk back to your superior, scum!" The woman slapped him, straight across his cheekbone.
"Mom! No!" Henry gasped, grabbing his mother's arm. Frankie felt tears threatening to fall.
"You leave my son alone, FREAK!"
"Woah! What the hell did you just say to my son?" Sans. Oh thank god for Sans. Frankie quickly wiped away a tear and looked up to see his father standing behind him. Riley set her hand on his shoulder. She was glaring at the woman.
"Did you hit him?!" Riley glared.
"What the hell does it matter to you?" The woman snapped.
"He's my son." Riley snapped.
"Your son? Ha!" The woman laughed. "You know you don't belong with these freaks. It's disgusting."
"Lady, you better back off." Sans snarled.
"Don't you dare speak to me!"
"Frankie, come on. Lets go home." Riley frowned. Frankie rubbed his cheekbone, wiping away another tear. It's not fair. Henry's so nice, and his mom hates me. Why?
"You're gonna get in trouble for being with them, you silly girl. Red X doesn't take kindly to supporters. Especially not ones who…. Involve themselves with freaks."
"Red X touches my girl…" Sans hissed, "Or my son…. You all are gonna have a bad time. And if I see you touch him ever again- if I see you anywhere near him…"
"Henry. We're leaving."
"Good." Riley snapped. "So are we. Come on." The woman led Henry away and Frankie stared after his new friend sadly.
"She hit me."
"Shh… sweetheart." Riley knelt in front of him pulling him into her arms. Sans gently rested his hand his Frankie's shoulder.
"You can''t listen to anything they say Frankie."
"Riley… you… you called me… you said I was…" Frankie pulled away to look at her with a frown. "Do you love me, Riley, like…. Like I'm your kid?"
"Do I… Awww, Frankie of course I love you!"
"So… I… I can call you… I mean…. Do you…?"
"Frankie, I… I would love nothing more in the world than to call you my… son." She looked up at Sans with a big grin.
"R-really?! D-dad...is that alright? C-can I call Riley M-mom?" 6
"Of course!" Sans grinned. Frankie was so happy he could hardly keep his tears from rolling down his cheekbones.
"Riley, you'll… you'll be my mom?"
"I- of course!"
"M-my mom! I have a mom and a dad!" He hugged both Riley and Sans tightly. "I love you! I love you both!" He gasped.
"Oh Frankie!" Riley grinned. "We love you too, baby. So much."
In a matter of a few months Riley Elizabeth Malloy had been granted everything she had ever wished for. Someone loved her more than anything, she had a family, a son! Nothing could be more perfect. She had never imagined anything like this would happen. She had decided it would be a good idea to celebrate. She had finished signing the last of the adoption papers and today she was officially Frankie's mom. So, she was on her way to get ingredients to make a cake. Frankie's favorite was chocolate. I'm a mom, it's so weird!
She had just reached the corner where the park was when she decided to take the shortcut through the park. She'd get through the grocery store faster and it would be a nicer walk than along the street. It was when she was walking through a small forested area that ahead of her she saw a group of of people, waiting for her. When they saw her freeze in the middle of the path they approached her slowly.
"Riley Malloy." The tallest man, the leader, smiled.
"H-hello… can I h-help you?" She whispered.
"Oh, I think so." The man nodded. Behind him the five or six others sneered. They were all wearing the black jackets- a red X embroidered at the shoulder. Oh god… Oh no. Her hands balled into fists as she took a step back. From behind his back the man revealed a baseball bat. "Riley… Riley… Riley…" He took a step closer to her, and she backed away into the down the path, but they were surrounding her. "You know, Riley, I'm a patient, generous man. What's interesting though is that you've chosen to completely ignore my warnings. See, a few weeks ago we happened to spy you in the park. We thought, 'Maybe by now she's gotten it. Maybe by now… she understands that we're not fucking around."
She was trembling, but she was also furious. "I'm n-not afraid of you!"
He laughed, leaning in closer to her. "Fear is a wonderful thing, see fear enables power. You know what's so fascinating? There are so many, so many people afraid of us- humans even. So, dear, sweet Riley, you really should be afraid." She wanted to scream. She knew she was in danger, but, she was a human. She shouldn't have been afraid of them. Still, the headlines, the news reports they flashed before her eyes. "Grocery Clerk murdered- Red X left at Scene of the Crime." "The Center for Monster-Supporters burned down yesterday, Red X left at the Scene of the Crime. Two humans, four monsters dead." "Red X will not hesitate to kill a human if it hurts a monster in the long run."
"Oh, Riley. We were so generous. We gave you two warnings, and when we saw you in the park with that thing. We could hardly believe it. And you know what was more shocking?" She chose not to respond. A woman speaks up from behind the leader,
"She was holding it's hand!" She laughs, and they all join in with her, taunting Riley.
"Are you in love with it?!"
"Does it love you, Riley?"
"Following you around like a puppy follows its master-"
"HOW DARE YOU!" She screamed, swinging her hand and slapping the man straight across his cheek. He instantly retaliated, grabbing her chin.
"If you knew who you're defying, you wouldn't be so bold, bitch!" He hissed. He threw her backwards, she stumbled, but didn't fall. Tears were in her eyes, but she refused to let them fall. "Your ignorant behavior pissed me off. I was ready to confront you about it, but there were those who swayed me. And you know what? I am generous, Riley. So, I gave you a third warning. I think, it was pretty clear. 'Strike Three' it said." Her breathing was uneven, she was terrified. She wanted to run, but they were blocking the way. Her whole body was trembling, and still she stared at them defiantly.
"And where did we find you?" One of the other men snorted.
"You… were adopting that kid."
"'I love you!' You said."
"You kissed that freak!" Another woman snarled.
"You ignored Strike three, Riley. Now, some of us were thinking, maybe she doesn't know much about baseball. After all, she does spend a lot of time in the library. Do you know what baseball is, Riley?" She once again chooses not to respond. "Okay, well I'll explain it to you. In baseball you work as a team, but you really rely on one guy to get the job done right. That would be the batter. The batter has to swing his bat," He held up the baseball bat, "And hit the ball that the pitcher throws."
"Are you catching all this, sweetheart?" Someone sneered. Riley looked up with a glare.
"I think I've got it, thanks." She hissed.
"Anyways, you know what's great about baseball, Riley?" The leader grinned. "You see, the batter gets three chances to hit the ball. Three. So, if you can use your imagination for a little bit: The pitcher throws the first ball. And the batter, he misses. Strike One. So the pitcher gets the ball again, and throws again, and… imagine, the batter, he screws up again. Strike Two. And you know what? The batter's still okay, he's got one more chance, right? One more chance to fix his mistakes, to make it right. So the pitcher throws, and the ball flies, and the batter swings. And you know what? The batter fucking misses. You know what comes after two, Riley? Strike Three. Do you see where this is going?" She doesn't respond. "Okay, I'll explain it really simply for you, sweetheart. See, Riley, you are the batter. And I, I am the pitcher. The balls, see, they're the warnings. I threw one ball- that was a little note, just for you. I thought it was pretty clear, and yet… somehow you seemed confused about it because the next week we saw you two going out for coffee. Mmm… Tsk! Tsk! The batter misses the ball, and Strike One. The pitcher, he shrugs it off. Oh well, we'll give the batter another ball. So the pitcher throws. See, the second warning, I thought it was very clear. The whole rock through the window thing- the spray paint. Unfortunately, once again, the batter misses the goddamn ball. You're still going to spaghetti dinner night? You're still going out to coffee? Was this when feelings developed? Was this when you realized you loved the freak? Poor Riley. Strike Two. The pitcher decides, maybe he'll give the batter a few moments to breathe. So, he lets the batter have a little time. You know, take it all in, figure out where she really belongs. But, the batter's determined to defy the pitcher. It's interesting… seeing you in that park… it really was the last straw. So… Final warning. The pitcher throws the ball. The batter swings, and the batter fucking misses. Strike… Three."
"Strike three…" Someone echoed. Riley shivered. She wanted to escape, but she didn't know how. She slipped her hand in her pocket, feeling her phone, tapping the on button. How could she do this by touch?
"This is where things get interesting. See, once a batter reaches strike three, they're out. They can't bat again, well, at least not till later. But for you, dear, sweet Riley. There is no 'later'. You're out, Riley. Out of this game. Out of time. Done." She was terrified now, frantically trying to type in those familiar numbers 911. But she couldn't see, she couldn't hear. How would they know where she was anyways.
The leader raised his bat, and swung with all his might. The metal slammed against her shoulder. She screamed as loud as she could- partly from pain, partly from panic. "Goodbye, Riley." He swung again, she tried to run, but someone grabbed her hair, and yanked her down to the bat swung again, feet kick. I'm going to die. She screamed again. She's in agony already. There's a crack in her chest, pain shoots through her.
"STOP! Please! Stop!" If they could hear her through their laughter, their shouting, they pretended not to. She managed to finally free her phone from her pocket. Sans… Sans' quick dial number was a two. She jabbed at her screen with her thumb- hitting the one. Calling: Voicemail. "NO!"
"Trying to call for help, sweetie? I don't think so." Someone kicked her hand. The phone flew out of reach, and was trampled underfoot. Then, someone's foot, raised high, slammed down on top of her fingers. There was a terrible crunching sound in her hand, her fingers were mangled- twisted at odd angles. She screamed, tears streaming down her cheeks. The kicking resumed. Another foot slammed down on her leg, and agony like never before shot up her body. There was another crack in her ribs. Someone kicked her in the eye. Through her tears, she couldn't see much… her ears were ringing. There was blood… blood everywhere… Someone was kneeling by her, watching in amusement, drawing something in her blood… Then, something startled them. They ran, and god, she could hardly breath. It hurt… it hurt everywhere. When she could finally hear the sirens, so close, she shuddered, agony shooting through her. Her heart beat was slowing… They're too late... She was slipping away, darkness engulfing her. She let it, if only to escape the pain. As she fell away from consciousness, all she was able to think about was Sans, singing softly, rocking Frankie to sleep. Sans easing her fears, Sans singing them both to sleep: Please… don't take… my sunshine away…
REVIEWS FOR CHAPTER THIRTY-SEVEN:
Cocoa the Wolf: Wait, the next chapter is the last chapter? Or have I misunderstood?
No, no no. This would be a very sad ending if it was. No. It's definitely not, I promise. We just get ahead of ourselves when we talk about the future chapters and so forth.
deadlyswarm: alright things are calming down now...Sans and frisk need to have a lil discussion about anomalies and remembering resets...
I don't think it's calm anymore.
Ed's. Curious. Kitten: I'm so glad that everyone's happy again! I'd love to hear stories of Undyne and Alphys getting used to the baby! I hope Wren is okay... Keep it up!
Oh boy. Sooo... just so you all know. This is probably the lowest it's gonna get. I think. At least in this one. Poor Riley. Poor Sans!
Are you on tumblr. We could write little bonus scenes on tumblr as soon as Undyne and Alphys adopt the baby. :)
MachUPB: Yeah, had a feeling that the bad times weren't done despite what you said before. That's why I said 'starting to turn around for the better', rather than 'going to be much better now'.
Riley's so great with children! Though, she does work at the school library (or should I say librarby), so there's that counting towards her experience and everything... :)
I'm pretty sure I won't regret this later, but I forgive you for the bad times ahead in advance. If it's for the good of all humans and monsters... I predict Red X involvement.
Have a nice vacation; I look forward to reading more when you both get back.
A bad time is definitely coming. Trust me. Sans is going to be super, super pissed.
You're regretting it, aren't you? Probably a lot.
Thanks! Vacation was awesome! :)
Citris Dragon: Wait wait wait. A sequel?! With adult Frankie?! I must have missed something somewhere.
Nah. You didn't miss anything. That might have been the first time I mentioned it. But after we're done with this story we're starting on a second one about Frankie as an adult. It's gonna be so cute. :D
W0lfWarrior: I really really do hope you nail the head in the coffin and reset because that would be a killer! Anyway! Great story! I can't wait for the update!
Reset?! Why would I do that when we have such a great twist planned with regards to that?! No. This way's much better, trust me.
nadiahardar: AAAAAAAAH
OK SO I'M REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER BUT NOT REALLY?
I MEAN. I'M REALLY EXITED FOR THE FISH BABY BUT I'M ALSO TERRIFIED BECAUSE YOU SAID SOMETHING ABOUT SOMETHING BAD HAPPENING IN THE NEXT CHAPTER AND MY HEAD JUST HURTS BECAUSE OF HOW MANY HORRIBLE WAYS THIS COULD END?
THE ONLY THINGS THAT COULD MEAN IS
A: A PANIC ATTACK.
B: RED X.
OR
C: BOTH!
UGH!
THIS FIC IS GONNA GIVE ME A PANIC ATTACK WORSE THAN SANS'S.
"OH AND HAVE FuN oN yOuR vAcAtIoN!"
*Crawls back into fanfic hell.
Just out of curiosity, on a scale of one to ten where do you rate the end of this chapter on the "Bad Scale"?
I hope not, if you panic you might not make it to the end, and the extended epilogue is going to be so worth it. :)
Thanks! It was awesome!
trvlsize23: That close! Glad you didn't do it. RED X! YOU BETTER NOT RUIN THEIR ICE CREAM AFTERNOON! Cause I will scream...(for ice cream). That was an adorable chapter. Kudos! Kudos! Take care!
Yay! I'm glad it was adorable. How about this one. :P
Crystel-the-Wolf: Ermagerd this story has progressed so far while i was gone!
Like, i dont remember when exactly i first stumbled onto this, but it was like 24 chapters long and now i found it again just browsing the Undertale Fanfic archive. (I internally screamed in happiness. a lot)
But a small criticism ( trust me i really dont like criticizing) :
There have been a lot of lizard type monster OCs in this story. Wren, Iro, and now Jay. no offense but try to branch off more. maybe thro a few furries in idk
Hehe! Yeah, this story has gotten a lot longer than I think any of us anticipated.
Yeah! Wow. You're right... we gotta throw in some different types in there, huh? (When you say Wren you mean Ella, right? Wren's the human. Ella's the monster.)
We need a cat monster, huh? (I love cats. We should do that.)
iamdaraptor: Hayoos! Sorry I wasn't able to post a review last chapter. Internet practically blinked out of existence for a few weeks. And I might get a few chapters later since I'm heading back to school (in my country summer starts in March). So yeah.
So anyway,I was DEATHLY scared during the fight. It just had so much tension that kept getting worse and worse and- You know,I think it can be best explained through this simple quote:"The wall had finally broken and they were letting lose at each other." -Walk the Line by FilthyMallards
This chapter,however,was a fluffaganza. So much fluff you can make a giant Fluffle Puff. I'm suffocating under a sea of fluffiness. Halp meh.
how about this chapter? *evil laugh*
But Seriously, that fight was not fun to write at all! I hated it. It made me sad. This chapter also makes me sad.
SilerofWorlds:I can't tell what type of person Frisk is. Everyone, including Sans, seems to adore them, but they seemed to be the cause of a lot of pain for Sans. So, is Frisk really as good as they seem, or something else entirely?
I guess you're gonna have to find out. Because. it is secret. And if I tell you, it will give away the twist at the end.
Guest: Why can't sans just teleport frankie to wrens house
Okay, so... I think at least in our fanfic Sans has a limit as to how far he can teleport. Wren lives out of state, like across country practically. It's very far away. Which sucks. Sans' teleportation can't go that far.
Harris: (I used to be anonymous but someone else started using the name so I changed it.) OMG YAS AHAHAHA! I was squealing and jumping around the entire time I read this chapter! I really want to congratulate you on this. This is by far the best fanfiction I've ever read. No fanfic has ever made me react like I'm reading my favorite book. AAAAGH I NEVER WANT IT TO END
Yeah we have quite a few anonymous... well, at least it seemed like it.
Awww! Thanks sooo much! That's always so nice to hear. Well, we have a sequel sort of planned. so when this one's over you can jump to that one. :)
Guest: Oh my goodness. Is there actually going to be a sequel? AAAAAAA
FRANKIE IS GOING TO HAVE GROWN UP, AND HE'LL PROBABLY GET A FAMILY AND EVERYTHING!
Wonder what'll happen to Sans and Riley. (lol I almost wrote Railing instead of Riley)
ANYWAY
Great chapter! I can not wait to see the little baby fish! I hope he has like, yellow scales, so he kinda looks like Undyne because he's a fish, but also looks like Alphys because he would have yellow scales. And I can't wait to find out his name!
Alphys and Undyne better finish that paperwork quick so I can see the child. xxx
Yes! Definitely. The Adventures of adult Frankie! He's gonna be such a cutie. I mean he is. But grown up tall skel. He's gonna be great. It's all gonna be great. I love it.
We have a bunch of fan art for Alphys and Undyne's baby. He has a fairly large roll in the sequel as well. Just because he's gonna be so awesome. :D
Anonymous: That's the reason I hate OC ships too. I mean if your going to make the OC just like you, just make it Character x Reader(which is another ship I hate for obvious reasons). Anyways, keep up the good work! :D
Exactlyyyy! lol
Thanks! I hope you appreciated this chapter. My goodness.
I guest as much: Great update! That was a nice, relatively feel-good chapter that really helped give a breather after all that action in the last update. I can't wait until, sometime in the future, Red X tries to attack Sans' family, and He just wipes the floor with them like he did in the alleyway. Also, I was looking back at some of the earlier chapters and I noticed that the amount of reviews you have been getting has just skyrocketed! Anyway, you have an awesome story and I can't wait for the next update!
Well... they've tried and completely succeeded. we'll see how Sans reacts when he finds out. (Hint- not well)
I knowwww! We get so many reviews! It's amazing! We love hearing from all of you!
JustARandomGal: *crawls out of homestuck hole in the wall* *huff* *puff* ok back to reading fanfiction *sees new part of fractured is out* YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
I have seen so many fanfics (my reading list is so long) and yet this is still better than all of them keep up the good work!
Awww! Thanks so much. :)
Mr. Indigo: I can't help but feel such happiness when Sans and Riley are in the same room together.
Also, can't help but ask, is Sans ever going to ask Frisk about the Resets?
Yay! They're the best aren't they? The ultimate ship. The One OTP. 3
How do you know he hasn't already?
Woof123: Damnnnnnnn, this really is a rollercoaster of emotions. Atleast Riley took the whole, NOTHING MATTERS CAUSE EVERTHING IS GONNA BE RESET well...See the thing is that Sans probably needs to confirm with Frisk that the resets are gonna stop for his mind to be at rest (unless he dosent know its frisk doing it).
If the resets DID continue I think we could still get a happy ending out of it. Sans would obviously be sad but depending how long it'd been...I think he could almost consider it as a second life type of thing. Where he can redo and improve everything? Idk atleast accept it. Because as long as he enjoyed it, it dosent matter that it's over plus if he wants he can just do it again. Why does that mean that the past time dosent matter and the new one is pointless. Honestly it would be a almost beautiful way to end it. (Although I doubt that's gonna happen anytime soon lol). I just feel like it's got to happen eventually, even IF Frisk promises...dyeing of old age is a thing.
Oh wow sorry for being depressing, I just loveeeee this story and get far too into it if you couldn't tell XD
Yeah, I promised no resets. I 100% mean it. So but, how come Frisk has the ability to reset. I think that's the question.
Awww, thanks! :D
Old-Spicy: Never expected to get on your reviews section.
Thank You!
Your story is the only story in all of fanfiction have I ever actually re-read chapters. You have the glorious honor of Old Spice to which your magnificent story has been re-read by me, and is the only story re-read by me.
*Old-Spicy is filled with the need to attempt to force the author to publish this story as a book.
do it. pls and thanks for promising.
Hey, I reply to all reviews! You are so welcome! :D
Oh my gosh, that's awesome! Thanks so much. lol
DatoldDood: This fanfic is really the best fanfic I've read in A LONG TIME (quite possibly ever) and FRANKLIN IS SUCH A CINNAMON ROLL OMG! P.s- I suspect that the voice in sans's head is maybe chara? I don't know. Anyway, great chapter!
Yes! Thanks so much, that's awesome! Yes he is- Frankie's the best! 3
I can't say anything about anything. Shhh! Secrets!
DragonCrescent13: Man, I am really sick of that malevolent voice in Sans' head. At first, I thought it was a flowey-like presence, but it just seems to be a manifestation of his own doubts and fears that won't go away until Sans works through them.
I also wonder why Sans has not confronted Frisk on the topic of resets. I am assuming that Frisk is still in control of that ability and the resets don't happen randomly (because that would be true hell on earth).
I love the Sansley couple so far. Both of them are damaged, but they are healing each other slowly. I do wish the next chapter will present a view into a family bonding time between Riley and Frankie. It could be kind of like a foreshadowing of what is to come! ;)
Good thoughts! Think good thoughts Sans!
How do you know Sans hasn't confronted Frisk already? But also, where do we think Frisk gets the power to reset? Are humans really that powerful?
Sansley is the best! Yes, they can heal each other. Ah yes. Here's the bonding. :)
SalamenceRobot: ok so i JUST read this entire series and HOLY HELL THIS IS AMAZING AND IM FLAILING ITS TOO CUTE AND FEELSY AND AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH *breaks*
Oh my gosh! Yay! I'm so glad you like it! That's awesome. :) IT's gonna get even better soon.
aduralove: rereading storytime! and: Still, after many chapters, 'Just... Toast.' Being back dem cats!
I can't believe people are actually rereading chapters. That's amazing. And yes, I suppose I do have to bring back the cats. lol.
Asreil dreemurr: Ok ok...you guys can yell at me all you want I played thruogh true pascifist a few more times and I relized frisk doesn't have controle over the timeline... The player does as seen by the secret flowey/asriel ending where he speaks to you about how frisk just wants to live her life and you ...YOU have the power to reset if you are...a bit unsatisfied you can reset *hense how the genocide happend* I just came upon this and I was a little shaken up by this... Frisk doesn't WANT to reset frisk doesn't WANT to do genocide it's because of us...we controle frisk doesn't have controle over the reset you do its um... A little hard to explain now but um...I know what you said about asriel nor chara were going to be in this fan fiction but I think I have already found them... You may have not noticed but I have found evidence of both in this fan fic so yah um...-asriel
That's actually a really fascinating point. Though I don't think it's the route we're going in the story. I never thought of it that way, that's some really good insight right there. :)
THANK YOU ALL SOOO SOOOO MUCH. The amount of reviews is amazing! It's always such an amazing thing to hear from you and to hear what you think! Thank you for sticking with us this far. I hope you'll stick with us to the end! :)
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