Hey guys sorry for the long update but life caught up to me and I couldn't update when I wanted to. To make up for that I am going to put out this chapter, this will be 2.7k words to start of the longer chapters in this story.
Anyways onto the questions in reviews.
Issei will not get a harem he will get one girl (Not decided) HOWEVER I am still deciding what I should do with him.
The harem for now is : Rias, Akeno, Sona, Serafall, Kurumi Tokisaki, Kuroka, Ophis, Mei ( Naruto), Miya (sekirei), Karasuba (Sekirei), and Illya (fate/kalied prisma illya)
Maybe In harem: Koneko, Xenovia, Irina, Seilah (fairytale), Tiamat, Asia, and Mia
I am also open to suggestions, however they need to a good reason to go along with the girl suggested.
Not in Harem: Grayfia, and, Venelana.
Anyways onto the Story!
Naruto glared at Raziel through Golden yellow eyes. Raziel for his part was in a state of shock. 'This kid… WHAT THE HELL IS HE?!'
Naruto spoke slowly but his voice was full of hate and angers "You want to kill them don't you… WELL YOU CAN'T!" With those words uttered he launched off the ground cratering it with the force of takeoff.
Raziel barely had time to react as he flew straight up into the air narrowly missing the spectral fist of Naruto's susanoo. Naruto jumped after him striking him in his winged back causing Raziel to smash into a row of trees. Raziel looked at Naruto with rage in his eyes, but if you look closely you can see the fear in them as well.
Getting up slowly Raziel nearly shouted in pain when he noticed the pain his back had; looking at his back he noticed that he had his wings broken and that they were laced with a magic that increased the pain in the area.
Forming as Hundreds of light spears above his head he aimed them at Naruto and both the heiresses. "DIE DEVIL SCUM"
Naruto widened his eyes when he saw that. Quickly dashing toward the two heiresses he used his susanoo to block the spears from hitting Rias and Sona. A giant smoke cloud went up and Raziel smirked thinking he killed the three children.
He was about to celebrate when he saw that Sirzechs, Serafall, Venelana, and Lord Gremory with their peerages showed up after sensing the buildup of Naruto and Raziel's energies. He found his throat in Sirzechs hands and he was squeezing hard. Pure rage emanated from Sirzechs and Serafall's bodies however before they can kill the fallen they heard crying and heavy breathing.
Turning their attention momentarily from the four winged fallen angel they saw a partially destroyed susanoo with Naruto being impaled through the right kidney by a light spear that was slowly dissipating. Blood was oozing out of his wounds at a rapid rate.
Rias and Sona was both fine however they were looking at Naruto with tears in their eyes and, a few moments later they noticed Naruto slowly swaying forwards Rias leapt into action and caught him his head landing on her shoulders.
Rias shouted in despair and Sirzechs turned to kill the fallen but he noticed he wasn't there anymore.
Cursing inside his head he turned towards all the peerages and said "FIND HIM! I want him Alive!"
All the peerages immediately rushed to complete the task. Serafall rushed towards Sona who was crying.
"SONA-CHAN! What happened!?"
Sona responded with sadness evident in her voice "h-he leap-t in front… of the spears..." As she was speaking tears started to leak from her eyes, however Rias was balling her eyes out "NARUTO-KUN! PLEASE WAKE UP! PLEASE!"
As Rias was wracked with tears the adults looked on sadly with Venelana even sobbing at the death of the young boy.
"We can bring him back" Sirzechs stated sadly
"We can but me and your father have no pieces left, Grayfia said she had no interest in building a peerage and you have used your pieces as well" replied Venelana wiping the tears from her eyes.
"I think I know someone who can have revived him but she doesn't have her evil pieces yet…" Serafall said from a distance. The three Gremory's looked at each other before forming an "O" with their mouths.
Sirzechs was the first to speak after that "Let's put his body in a special seal and revive him when Rias get her evil pieces from Adjuka in two months."
At that all the present adults nodded. Now the hard task came which was to tell Rias the news that her friend won't be waking up at least not for two months.
TIMESKIP TWO MONTHS
We find Rias being accompanied by her parents and Sirzechs standing in front of Naruto's preserved body. The last two months had been hard on Rias after her parents explained the situation she cried for 2 days straight but on the third day she left her room with a new found determination.
When they asked her about her sudden change in mood she said a special friend of Naruto visited her and told her to be strong and to bring him back. After several failed attempts at getting her to tell them who Naruto's "Special friend" was they just gave up and took her to get her evil pieces a few weeks later.
"Rias honey you remember how to use the pieces correct?" Venelana asked her daughter.
"Yes kaa-san" Replied Rias without even looking towards her mother.
Stepping forwards and removing the seal that kept Naruto's body preserved she took out an evil piece. This was no ordinary evil piece. This was one of her two mutated pieces, her queen piece.
While her mother had been adamant on Rias using her mutated bishop instead Rias told her mother something that she will not forget anytime soon.
FLASHBACK
We are currently with Rias and her mother in the room with Naruto's body.
"Rias you shouldn't use your most powerful piece in him maybe your bishop would fit him better?" Venelana asked. You see she has been trying to talk Rias out of this decision for a day now.
"No… I can't just pick another piece for him… He is my savior, m-my only other friend besides Sona-chan.." Rias' lips quivered a bit.
"He deserves my most valuable piece… MY QUEEN!" At that exclamation Venelana couldn't help but let a proud and happy smile grace her delicate features. Rias cared so much for the boy.
"Go ahead darling bring back your new queen"
FLASHBACK END
Rias took a deep breath before placing the queen piece on Naruto's stomach.
"I Rias Gremory of the house of Gremory call forth thyn soul to serve me as my new queen!"
With those words said a red light emanated from that room. After the light died down Naruto twitches a bit and blearily opens his eyes.
"W-what?"
"Naruto-kun!" exclaimed Rias before she glomped him.
At first Naruto was confused on what was going on but then he was hit with the past memories of his fight with Raziel. Nearly knocking Rias down he locked around ready to fight however all he saw was Venelana smiling at him.
"What happened? Where did Raziel go?" Naruto asked while still looking around.
Venelana became serious. That was something that Naruto noticed immediately.
"Well Naruto-kun… You died" At those words Naruto's eyes nearly fell out of their sockets
"WHAT?! B-But I'm right here! "Naruto yelled back in confusion.
"Your sacred gear saved Rias-chan and Sona-chan but at the cost of your life. While that susanoo of yours blocked almost all the spears one of them made it through and hit you in the right kidney." Venelana told the shell shocked Naruto.
"You bled to death before we could heal you. In the confusion and panic caused by your condition Raziel escaped. We placed your body in that special case to preserve it until Rias could get her evil pieces to revive you."
Naruto stayed silent digesting the information when a light bulb lit above his head.
"You said resurrected am I some form of undead creature now?" Naruto asked with curiosity in his voice.
"No, you did however become a devil and a servant of Rias"
SERVANT
That word left a bad taste in his mouth as he looked towards Rias with a somewhat hurt look in his face.
"So I am your servant now huh…" His question was directed towards Rias. At this point seeing where the situation was going Rias responded with passion and conviction in her voice
"NO! You are not a servant you are my savior… My precious friend and the man that will stand by my side!"
Venelana held a shocked expression at Rias' proclamation, and while she knew that Rias did not truly know the impact her words can have. She nonetheless felt great pride swell in her chest at her daughters' words and the passion in her voice.
Naruto for the most part stared at her as if trying to find hidden intentions. After a minute of staring he allowed a small smile to grace his features.
'She cares huh… She reminds me so much of you kuru-chan' Naruto thoughts being unknown to the other occupants in the room.
"Well then lady Gremory, I will hold you to those words" Naruto said while sending a grin her way.
"No Naruto-kun , call me Rias-chan… Just like you always called me." Rias replied with a small blush on her cheeks at being addressed in such a respectful manner by her new queen.
"Well then let's go and talk to Sirzechs and get some more clothes and a room for you." Venelana said while pointing towards the door.
About 20 minutes later we find Naruto wearing some black sweatpants with stripes on the side of the legs. He had simple dark orange T-Shirt on that had the graphic design of a samurai warrior drawing his blade as Sakura pedals fall around him. On his feet were a pair of black Nike Free runs. When Rias First saw him she blushed so red that she actually passed out with a small nosebleed, Venelana looked at him with approval shinning in her eyes. After all she picked that outfit so Naruto was not overwhelmed by high class devil culture.
Serafall was with Sirzechs when Naruto , Rias, and Venelana showed up. Lord Gremory arrived a few minutes later.
Despite her childish personality Serafall was in fact a 200+ year old female devil. Not only that but her adult form was considered to be one of the most beautiful women in the world being matched only by Gabriel in heaven and Grayfia coming at a close second.
In Serafall's mind
Serafall was currently mind raping Naruto. 'OH MY GOD' She yelled internally. 'He looks so much better in those clothes oh my I can't wait until he gets older.'
Back to normal
"Why hello there cutie I still haven't thanked you for saving so-tan from the meannie" As Serafall said this she struck a cute yet oddly seductive pose with her tongue poking out of her lips in a childish manner.
"N-no problem ma'am" Naruto replied a bit stiffly.
"Oh none of that ma'am stuff call me sera-chan!" The bubbly maou responded back with yet another pose. This time however Naruto noticed how big her breasts where despite her child like body.
While most people would have assumed that the maou was just being childish those that knew her intimately were narrowing their eyes at her.
'What are you planning Serafall' where Grayfia's thoughts
'Hmmm could it be that Sera-chan has developed an interest in Naruto-kun?' Sirzechs internally voiced his thoughts
'Why do I feel the need to blast Serafall-sama away with my power of destruction' ….. Do I Really need to say whose thoughts those were….
"Th-thank you Serafall-sa *ahem* Sera-chan" Naruto replied. At that Serafall cheered up and smiled at him.
"AHEM. Onto business hmm sera-chan" Sirzechs said.
"Right"
"Now Naruto explain what happened in the forest with that fallen angel" Sirzechs told him.
For the next ten minutes Naruto explained how he was hanging out in the tree's in the outer garden when Rias and Sona approached him. He told them how they introduced each other and then they all agreed to play hide and seek. Naruto told them he heard a scream in the distance and quickly rushed towards them fearing that Rias or Sona may have been hurt.
He told them of his brief fight with Raziel before he activated his Susanoo. Sirzechs narrowed his eyes a bit at how both Rias and Naruto described his new Susanoo.
'Hmm perhaps the sacred gear evolves depending on the level of strength of Naruto's opponent's.' Sirzechs thought to himself while paying attention to Naruto.
"And that's all I remember until Rias-chan revived me as her.. queen piece right?" Queried Naruto.
"Yes Naruto-kun" replied Rias
"Well in that case I will speak to Adjuka about these new developments and see if we can find a way to train you." Lord Gremory Spoke for the first time in the meeting.
"You will train me? How? I already learned how to use my chakra all I need to do is practice my abilities and control, maybe even evolve my susanoo some more." Naruto asked while looking visibly confused
Venelana looked towards him with a serious expression
"Well Naruto-kun you may have your own abilities but learning new ones can't be a bad thing right?" At that statement Naruto nodded seeing the truth in her words.
"Also you now represent Rias-chan and the gremory when you were converted into her queen, after all you don't want Rias-chan to be hurt or humiliated because of your actions hmm?" Once those words left Venelana's mouth Naruto widened his eyes in shock before they returned to normal, however you could see the fire burning behind those blue orbs.
"You are right. How could I forget that. After all me and Rias-chan are going to be standing side by side in the future huh?" he replied with a small yet sweet smile gracing his features as he looked towards a now furiously blushing Rias.
"HoHo kiddo calm down there you guys just met after all" Joked Lord Gremory, however you can hear the seriousness in his voice. Sirzechs cringed slightly as he was reminded of Rias' engagement to Raiser.
"Tou-san… Don't talk to him like that!" Rias surprised many including herself at her outburst. "He is my queen and more importantly that makes him OUR family"
"Hmmm Ri-chan really likes this one" Lord Gremory muttered to himself.
"You are right Ri-chan. Gomen Naruto-kun" Lord Gremory apologized feeling genuinely bad. After all he didn't mean to sound like an asshole to the young Uzumaki.
"Uh it's alright" Naruto Replied awkwardly.
"Anyways Ri-chan why don't you take Naruto-kun here to see your anime collection" Lord Gremory suggested.
"YES!" Exclaimed Rias all the while looking like a kid that was told they would be having blueberry pie for desert… mmm blueberry pie… *ahem*
"C'mon Naru-kun let me show you my favorite show!" While Naruto and Rias were too busy to notice Rias' slipup the adults all reacted differently
'Hahaha…. WAIT WHAT.. NARU-KUN, oh it's on red-chan!' Serafall mentally screamed in her head at realizing she may very well have competition.
'Interesting…' Were Grayfia's thoughts.
"My Ria-tan is getting boys into her room now Noooo-OOOO!" Sirzechs wailed in despair before getting his cheek pinched hard by Grayfia who sported an annoyed look on her face.
"Sirzechs-sama please act your age!" Yelled out Grayfia
With Naruto and Rias
Rias' room to put it quite bluntly was an otaku's heaven. Anime posters and figures littered the walls and shelves all from popular anime's according to Rias.
He also spotted a poster with what looked like Serafall and it read "To my favorite fan Ri-chan – signed Super Magical Girl Levia-tan"
"Uh Rias what's that from?" Queried Naruto
"Oh that is from the show Magical Girl Levia-tan. It's basically a show where Serafall-sama is a magical girl who fights bad guys!" Rias replied enthusiastically.
"Hmm lets watch some I'm curious now" Naruto said while making his way to the bed.
Rias couldn't believe her luck her queen was interested in one of her favorite shows in which her favorite Satan (apart from her brother) starred in.
'HEHEHEHEHEHEHHAHAHHWHHHAHA' Rias laughed in her head at the fact Naruto didn't know the fun he was in for.
END
Welp hope you guys enjoyed as I said before I am a new author so I am getting used to typing longer chapters and being more descriptive. Hopefully I will have an update by next Monday, if not then the week after for sure.
As Always Constructive criticism and idea's are welcome.
Cya Folks!
