Twilight To The Max
Chapter Five
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Alice POV
Vision
Edward was coming toward me with Bella on his back. He stopped in front of me and told me to look up. I did. In the sky was a VERY large bird. It was swooping down on us. As it got closer, I noticed that it was in fact not a bird. It was a flying teenager. With wings. Just like the ones I had seen in the vision with Jane in it.
End of Vision
A few moments pass and the vision happens.
"Edward, what a pleasant surprise," I said when the girl had landed, "Who is this?" I finished. He gave me a look of deep disgust, knowing that I had seen this coming only moments before. I was sure that he was thinking, Surprise, right.
"I am Max," I said.
"And you are so willing to tell her? You know, she is a vampire. My sister, actually," Edward said.
"I am not so willing. I was afraid that you all had a mind reading thing and I didn't want to lie and start on her bad side like I did with you," Max explained.
"Let's go inside and meet the rest of the family. Esme will start dinner," I knew this because I had a vision earlier that consisted of her making dinner for two extra at this very moment. Bella and, What was it? Oh, ya Max. On the way home, Max flew, Edward and I ran and Bella just hung on to Edward by the neck. Silly Bella. When we got to our house, Edward and I had to yell up to Max to come down because she didn't know where the house was. She came down and I opened the door and let the rest in before me.
"Home," I yelled to no one in particular.
"Hi. I made dinner. So who are our guests?" Esme asked as she walked into the entry way.
"Me. As usual. And this is —" But Bella was cut off by Max.
"And I am Maximum Ride. Nice to meet you," she said as she shook Esme's hand. It was then that Esme noticed her wings.
"Why are you wearing fake wings?" she asked. Oh, wrong move. Max's face turned a bright blue.
"They. Are. Not. Fake." Wow. She looked scary when mad. And a that is from a vampires point of veiw.
"Oh, I am so sorry," Esme said. She did look sorry. This calmed Max. Kind of. She still looked like she was going to burst and kill her. Again, SCARY.
"Let's go eat," said Esme timidly.
Fang POV
They were back! Not Nudge and Jane something even better. Way better. My wings! Who knew that they grew so fast? One morning I woke up and they were there! These cords have been difficult to break though, even with my inhuman strength. They were slowly getting weaker with my trying but it was taking a while. I was almost done when I heard a voice.
"Fang," It whispered, "It's me Iggy. Get out of there and save us," Iggy finished. I looked over to the little shack and through a crack in the wood saw a single blind eye staring at the completly wrong thing. He must have thought it to be me. Oh, Iggy.
"I am going to get out. But, I have to save Max first. I will get you guys after," I said. I wonder how stupid that sounded. Probably a lot. He then said what I figured he would say.
"Why don't you get us first, then all of us could save Max and it would be a lot easier? How does that sound?" he asked me, still staring blankly at the wrong spot.
"Not good. I need Max to help me get you guys out. My wings are just back and I think flying may be hard," I explained. The real reason was that I just want to be with Max. My Max.
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