I know you guys thought this would be an update. I'm sorry. But I really need your feedback on something before I can continue. Do you want me to follow the story line exactly? As in me writing some things scene from scene and just adding Miyuki into it or should I just wrote my own thing? So it's similar but not word from word. I know some people don't like certain things. So please give me feedback on that. If you don't I won't know where to go with it.

I love you guys and I really appreciate you. I'm happy you enjoy the story and I'm sorry it takes me so long to update but I believe a problem with how long I'm taking is the issue I just said. I want to continue on but I want your opinions first. I hope what I said makes sense.

On another note I'm in Shanghai right now. Since I switched jobs I'm off two months in the summer. August I'll be all alone in my apartment (my boyfriend is tired of being a stay at home boyfriend and decided he's going to work in Shanghai, which is 15 hour train ride 2 hour flight. Shanghai pays better.) so I'll be able to update! Yay! Also I'm moving to Shanghai in January yay! Currently in Chengdu.

Please give me feedback so I can continue.

1. You want me to write it basically word from word

2. It's about if it isn't following the story line exactly and I might even miss something small

Does that make sense?

I hope you guys are enjoying the story. If you have any ideas you think would be good I'm open to ideas. You might have something that would go great with the story that I haven't though of.

If you read this to the end I have a small gift for you.


"What are you doing?!" Miyuki stared didn't at the six year old before her, hands placed firmly on her hips.

The boy huffed placing the manila folded down. "I'm hiding daddy's work papers." The boy grumbled.

The woman's eyes soften at her son's words.

"Daddy always leaves us for work, it's not fair! If I hid these daddy can't work."

Miyuki reached down and picked up her son. "You know daddy doesn't like to leave us, but he has to go to work."

The boy not liking his mother's answer squirmed in her arms to get down. After freeing himself he started running towards the door. Before he reached the door it started to open.

"Daddy!" The boy cried out, barreling into the man. Easily his father pulled him off the ground into his arms. "Have you been taking care of mommy for me?" The man smiled lovely at his son.

"Yes I-"

*BEEP* *BEEP*

Miyuki awoke with a jolt. Staring wide eyed around her room. It was just a dream. Still. She was panting like she had just ran a marathon. It seemed too real. It wasn't fuzzy like most dreams, she could remember the details perfectly.

The loving look he had gave his soon flashed in her mind.

No.

She's only 14! She shouldn't be thinking about marriage, shouldn't be dreaming about marriage. Not only marriage a kid too! Wait were they even married, just because they had a kid- no! She would've been married if she had a kid.

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Wait why was she even thinking about it in such detail! She's too young to even be worried about that.

"Maybe in ten years..."


Thank you for reading all the way!

I wonder who the father is...