My third chapter!! PUT UP A PARTY!! Wohoooooooo!! Rejoice!

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I don't own Narnia, C.S. Lewis own them! But I own Arrieanne!!


"They're so still", Lucy said breaking the uncomfortable silence inside the boat. Her voice was sad and full of remorse.

"They're trees. What do you expect?", Trumpkin said.

"They used to dance", Lucy replied now playing with the water.

"It was not long after you left when the Telmarines invaded", he began looking up to the sky. "Those who survived retreated to the woods and trees. They were so careful in hiding themselves that we hadn't heard from them since then."

"I don't understand. How could Aslan ever let this happen?", Lucy said.

"Aslan?", Trumpkin asked. "Thought he abandoned us when you four left"

"We didn't mean to leave you here", Peter's voice trailed off.

"Makes no difference now doesn't it", Trumpking said sighing.

"Yeah. Chasing after the White Stag and was not found since then", Arrieanne said with light sarcasm in her voice.

"How did you know?", Susan asked.

"Like I said before, I have my ways"

"Get us to the Narnians. I know it will", Peter said finally ending the discussion. Soon enough, the boat reached the shore, everyone getting out and Trumpkin tied the rope. Peter, Arrieanne, Susan and Edmund were pulling the boat out when suddenly, Arrieanne's feet got tangled up and her face went in the sands.

"Ooff!", she grunted, cursing a few words under her breath when the others burst into laughters.

"Better be careful next time, Rianne", Edmund said laughing a little followed by his siblings and Trumpkin, annoying Arrieanne when she got up and helped by Peter who was still laughing, actually.

"I didn't exactly have experience with boats and since when were we in nickname basis?", she said huffing indignantly.

"Not my fault I'm a spoiled brat"

"Sorry, sorry", Susan said grinning and Arrieanne crossed her arms.

"And not to mention having a hot headed personality. I'm proud of it, baby!"

"Hey, you still have dirt in your face", Peter said brushing away some dirt on her eyebrow while Arrieanne immediately blushed.

"Talk about gentlemen!"

"Err… Thanks… I guess…", she stammered after noticing Susan and Edmund raise their eyebrows.

"Oh no…"

Luckily, Lucy's voice rang up in the air saving Arrieanne from their attention. Whipping their head, they saw Lucy talking to a big, black bear. (A/N: Talk about over use of adjectives XD) It was growling at her.

"It's alright. Were friends!", Lucy said walking nearer towards it.

"Talk about innocent kids. How about I jump right there and save Lucy and be a hero of the day? Hmm.. Sound nice! Now, let's just wait for little Trumpkin here"

"Don't move Your Majesty!", Trumpkin yelled while Arrieanne took this as her cue. Un-sheathing her sword, she ran towards a frightened Lucy, the bear now advancing towards her.

"Stay away from her!", Susan yelled taking her bow and arrow. Arrieanne was already near Lucy who unluckily fell and the bear was already on top of her. She was about to swing her sword when suddenly, an arrow was struck into the bears heart and was slowly falling towards Arrieanne.

"Oh crap…", she muttered after completely being covered by the huge bear.

"Mission un-complete"

"Arrieanne!", came voices and after a few minutes, the bear was already off of her.

"Why wouldn't it stop?", she heard Susan ask.

"I expect he's hungry", Trumpkin said while Peter and Edmund helped Lucy and Arrieanne of the ground. The dwarf began to poke the bear.

"Thanks", Lucy said referring to Arrieanne and Trumpkin.

"No need. I wasn't be able to help you anyway", Arrieanne muttered taking the offered hand of Edmund.

"It's wild", Edmund said.

"And I didn't think he talked at all", Peter added.

"If they treat you like an animal, that's what you become", Trumpkin said answering the silent questions. "You may find Narnia a more savage place than you remember", he added and began to slice the bear. Lucy instinctively put her head on Peter's chest while Arrieanne was beginning to turn green.

"What are you doing?", Arrieanne asked disgusted.

"Meat", Trumpkin answered while Arrieanne was now blue.

"Excuse me", she said going to a far bush, probably to deposit her breakfast in it.

"I hate it when this part comes"

Finally recovering from her 'event', they continued their journey by foot. The others were talking about things like 'ways', 'direction' and other things Arrieanne completely doesn't know about. After a few minutes, they were already in the forest part and were still walking non stop when Peter suddenly gave out a gasp. Looking below, they saw a river, probably hundreds of meters from where they were.

"See.", Susan pointed out. "The soil probably loosened up and-"

"Oh shut up!", Peter snapped cutting her off.

"Is there a way down?", Edmund asked.

"Yeah.", Trumpkin began.

"Falling.", Arrieanne continued letting a piece of rock fall from the cliff.

"But we weren't loss", Peter argued.

"Men and their pride", Arrieanne muttered while Susan and Lucy giggled.

"There's another crossing by Beruna, why don't we try there?", Trumpkin pointed out.

"Better than walking", Susan said following Trumpkin. They were about to go when Lucy yelled.

"Aslan?", she asked. "It's Aslan! It's Aslan, he was there! He was right-", she exclaimed looking at the others then back at the other side of the cliff to find no one. "There.."

"Do you see him now?", Trumpkin asked.

"I'm not crazy! He was there! He said that we should follow him!", Lucy argued.

"I'm sure there are a number of lions in these woods, just like that bear", Peter said.

"I know Aslan when I see him", Lucy urged.

"Look, I'm not going to jump off a cliff for someone who doesn't even exist!", Trumpkin said shaking his head.

"The last time I didn't believe Lucy,", Edmund piped up. "I ended up looking stupid."

"Holy crap! Alsan!"

"I saw him", Arrieanne suddenly said. "He was there on the other side". Looking up again at the spot where she saw the great Lion, she saw no one.

"Now where is he?"

"Then why didn't I see him?", Peter asked.

"Maybe you weren't looking", Lucy and Arrieanne chorused.

"I'm sorry", Peter said after a moment of silence and began to walk away followed by Susan and Trumpkin. Lucy's eyes began to water when Edmund and Arrieanne both touched her shoulders. Nodding her head, they followed the others. When they went to Beruna, however, there were Telmarines constructing a bridge in it. A silent conversation took place and once again, everyone went to the cliff Lucy and Arrieanne pointed where they saw Aslan.

"So… Where did you two seen Aslan exactly?", Peter asked.

"Would you all stop sounding like grown ups? Don't think I didn't saw him but I did see him", Lucy said going over to another part followed by Arrieanne.

"I am a grown up", Trumpkin said.

"It was right over…", Lucy said.

"Here!", Arrieanne continued, tapping the land she was on. She was still tapping it with her feet when the land suddenly gave up letting her and Lucy fall. There ware screams coming from Lucy followed by the others screaming their names. Looking down, they saw Arrieanne hugging a pale-faced Lucy under another piece of earth.

"That was… A nice serendipity…", Arrieanne gulped now releasing Lucy.

"Serendipity?", Peter asked going to where she and Lucy was.

"It means accidental discovery", she said as Peter nodded. One by one, each of them began to hike down the scary looking cliff.

"Good thing I'm not afraid of heights or else I'll be screaming my head off."

After successfully going down, they continued to walk until it was already dawn. Putting up a fire everyone laid down and began to go to dream land except for a few ones.

"Are you two awake?", Susan asked Lucy and Arrieanne in a hushed whisper as the other two either gave a nod and a grunt.

"What do you think why I didn't see Aslan?", she asked putting her head on her palm.

"You believe us?", Lucy asked turning her head towards her older sibling.

'Well… We did cross the cliff with the way you two pointed", Susan said.

"Then why?", Arrieanne asked popping out behind Lucy.

"Maybe you didn't want to", Lucy added sadly.

"You always want to come back here didn't you?", Susan asked Lucy as she nodded. Laying herself on the grass, she closed her eyes.

"Go back to sleep, you two", she said and the other two obliged. It was after an hour when Arrieanne still can't sleep.

"I'm going to have big eye bags when I go back to England"

Standing up, she proceeded to go to some trees and sat on its trunk. Bored, she started to sing.

It started out as a feeling

Which then grew into a hope

Which then turned into a quiet thought

Which then turned into a quiet word

And then that word grew louder and louder

Till it was a battle cry

I'll come back, when you call me

No need to say goodbye

"You've got a nice voice there, Arrieanne", someone said behind her, startling her.

"P-Peter!", she squeaked seeing his shadow.

"Sorry I startled you", he apologized sitting down beside her.

"N-No need", she stammered mentally cursing when she felt her face heat up.

"Thank Aslan it's dark"

There was a period of silence, neither of them making a move to break it, just enjoying each other's presence.

"I still didn't thank you", Peter said.

"Thank you for what?", she asked puzzled.

"For saving Lucy in the bear and in the cliff", he answered.

"Oh… There's no need, I didn't save her in the bear since I got toppled over", they laughed lightly. "While in the cliff, were just lucky", she added.

"But still thanks"

"No problem", she grinned.

"Say, can I see your sword?", he asked tapping the scabbard of Arrieanne's sword.

"Sure, if I can see yours", she countered while Peter lightly laughed and both exchanged.

"What's your sword's name?", Peter asked un-sheathing it to see a golden blade with strange words engraved in it. "And what does this mean?", pointing to the scriptures.

"My sword's name is Excalibur and for your other question, it means 'Take me up'. What about yours? What's it's name?", she asked.

"Rhindon, Father Christmas gave it to me".

"Like I don't know it"

"Hey, why aren't you still asleep?", she asked slightly curious.

"I heard you singing", he said smiling while Arrieanne blushed more.

"I just love that smile… If he continues to do that, I'm gonna faint"

Then, Arrieanne suddenly yawned, covering her mouth with her hands.

"Now your sleepy", Peter said a little sarcastic.

"Yah. Guess I'll be getting my most deserved sleep now", Arrieanne said grinning. "Goodnight", she said standing up followed by Peter.

"Goodnight", Peter called out before lying down on the grass and slept.

"That was a nice chat. Now I know what my friend feels when she has frequent talks with her crush…"


Done at last! Phew! Seven pages?! This is my longest chapter so far… Anyway, vote in my poll!!

Yeah, in this chapter, unless you still don't know, Arrieanne revealed some of her flaws which are hot-headedness, clumsiness and completely sarcastic, so she's not a MARY SUE!!

And also, in this chapter, we all got to see a moment of Arrieanne and Peter alone!! (squeals like hell). I love it!! Hope you do too! Even though it's a little bit cheesy, hehehe…..

Yeah, I forgot to tell all of you, Arrieanne has a crush on Peter! But you probably figured it out anyway, since it IS a PeterxOC story...

So? How did I did it? Did I make a good job in making Arrieanne less Mary Sue-ish?? TELL ME!! Thanks to QuietD for the information and others! I really appreciate it!!

Review!! Review pleaseeeee!! The purple button is VERY lonely!!

Yeah, I forgot, the song Arrieanne sang is 'The Call' by Regina Spektor. It's one of the songs in Narnia, Prince Caspian… I don't own it!!