My fourth, MY FOURTH!! Hahaha!!
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I don't own Narnia but I own Arrieanne!!
"Arrieanne, wake up!"
"5 more minutes Mom…", Arrieanne groggily said swatting the hand Susan placed on her shoulders.
"Rianne, wake up!", this time, it was Edmund who yelled effectively jerking their sleepy companion of dream land.
"Wh-what?", she moaned rubbing her sleepy eyes, now sitting up.
"Let's follow Peter and Lucy", Susan said grabbing her hands making her follow while she groaned. Late night talks with Peter are not too effective alright. They heard Lucy shout something in the distance and that only made them walk faster.
"Peter!", Susan yelled halting her steps. There stood Peter holding a rock and another man holding Rhindon. That's Prince Caspian! Walking at Lucy's side, everybody stared, dumbfounded.
"High King Peter", Prince Caspian said looking at the sword at his hands.
"I believe you called", Peter said.
"Well, yes but… I thought you would be older and… Why is there five of you?", he asked.
"I'm just a… Friend", Arrieanne piped. He does have a Spanish accent.
"If you like, we can come back in a few years", the High King answered.
"No!", Caspian exclaimed. "It's alright. It's just, your not exactly what I expected", he added looking at Susan.
"Neither are you", Edmund said.
"We were anxiously awaiting your return, My Lord", a mouse said walking towards Peter. "A mouse in swords, at your service". Talk about a talking mousse in swords.
"Oh my gosh, he's so cute", Lucy whispered at Susan.
"Who said that?!", he asked getting his sword.
"Sorry."
"Oh!", he said slightly shocked. "Your Majesty. With the greatest respect, I do believe courageou, courteous, or chivalrous might more befit a knight of Narnia.", he added bowing.
"Well, at least some of you can get a blade", Peter said.
"Yes indeed. And I recently put it to good use securing weapons for your army, Sire", Reepicheep said.
"Good. Because were gonna need every sword we can get", Peter said now facing Caspian.
"Well then, your probably wanting yours back", the young prince said handing the hilt to Peter who, in turn, took it and began walking towards the other Narnians followed by his other companions. Soon, everyone walked into a clearing and saw a big construction. The centaurs took their places in front of the entrance, un-sheathed their swords and raising it, making a way for Peter, Susan, Edmund and Lucy to walk on with Caspian and Arrieanne in tow. So this is what it feels like to be Queen! I could get use to this… They were all observing some of the Narnians make their weapons when Susan called their attention.
"Peter, you may want to see this", she said going to another door followed by the others. Inside, they saw carvings in the wall, the Pevensie sibling shown from their first trip to Narnia up to their coronation.
"It's us", Susan said fingering her picture.
"What is this place?", Lucy asked Caspian.
"I-I don't know!", he answered.
"This is Aslan's How", Arrieanne suddenly said giving a torch to Caspian and began to walk deeper in it.
"Aslan's How?", everyone asked.
"You'll know soon enough", she said halting her steps. Snatching Peter's torch away, she let the fire touch a certain spot and fire began to grow around them, illuminating the place. They saw different kind of sculptures and in the middle of two pillars were Aslan's carving. And also in the middle of the room were the remains of the Stone Table.
"Familiar isn't it?", Arrieanne asked putting the torch in it's handle.
"He must know what's his doing", Lucy said facing Susan.
"I think it's time to work now", Peter said.
This is my shortest chapter so far. Sorry to disappoint you guys, hehehe….
School will start in 1 week so I may update longer. But I'll try to update faster, okay! Don't worry, the next chapter will be very long, I guarantee you that!
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