AUTHOUR'S NOTE

AUTHOUR'S NOTE

Hey everyone just wondering if I could ask you guys a couple things. First do you think that I went a little overboard on Kenomaru's character? Just a little input would be just fine. I would really appreciate it if you take the time to review my story and tell me what I need to do. I am new at this I think that it is going good but what I think I really need is a new person's output on this story. So would you be as so kind as to look it over and let me know. Oh sorry it has taken me this long to update. I went on vacation last week. Thanks a whole bunch.