iSparkle0like0alice
2008-08-02
ch 14,
update soon...it should be fun reading what they do to charlie...poor guy...hahaha
thanks!
Katiecheyennecullen
2008-07-30
ch 10, You should do a story on Vampire Valentine's day and Vampire Christmas. That would be hilarious!!cheyennecullen
2008-07-30
ch 14, R.O.F.L.O.L. XD That was great! I /CAN'T/ wait for the prank against Charlie!acdog9419
2008-07-29
ch 14, I LOVE IT! it is absolutly hilarious! good jobemmyfreak13
2008-07-29
ch 14, Hahahahaha, that was great! That Tanya needs to get laid!LyingInTheRain
2008-07-29
ch 14, This is the best series I have read in ages! It is actually the only one with more than 5 chapters that i have read so far! Keep writing! x Mieetwenty1nyounger
2008-07-28
ch 14, W-O-W
at first i thought it was really bad on ure part for making tanya all nice and all but then u did that prank and i was like 'ah...there it is!'
with the police i was all uh oh! but then wen he sed sexy i was all 'OMG a stripper!' haha. i really like ure ideas and writing and i wanna see wat happens to charlie. mwahahaha!OhMyEdward472
2008-07-28
ch 14, aww! the story's almost over! sniff anyways, it was great while it was there! you're a great writerShadowgirl61
2008-07-28
ch 14, Awesome I cant wait to see what they do to CharlieWanna be a fictional charac...
2008-07-28
ch 14, HOLY CRAP! I wanna know what they do to Charlie!fleckpuppy
2008-07-28
ch 14, haha...this is going to be good )amobutterfly25
2008-07-28
ch 14, the poor innocent charlie. hehe this will be good.melissa-thelostcullen
2008-07-28
ch 1, Ok, Kinda busy and didn't get to read it. I was just going to add you to faves so that I could read it later but this was faster. Sorry but I read a bit of it and it was funny!
Melissabriiittx xhc
2008-07-28
ch 14, HAHA!
I can't believe how close she got to raping him!
And the fact that Alice was getting her forgotten credit cards which saved his life!
Lol!
I'm still laughing!
I hope they get Charlie back good!
Update soon!
And I'm sad it's the last chapter!Book Lover 94
2008-07-28
ch 14, haha, i like this. update soon!
2008-07-28
ch 14, CHARLIE IS GOING TO GET IT! HA!RoryAceHayden147
2008-07-28
ch 14, Good story!
Update soon!
Au Revoir!catherine-moonlessnight
2008-07-28
ch 14, LMAO you have to update son ive been waiting for this chapter for ages!TwilightEdwardBella95
2008-07-28
ch 14, good chapter!Twilightistotallyawesome
2008-07-28
ch 14, Oh can't wait for the next prank...and it's on Charlie!TwilightEdwardBella95
2008-07-28
ch 12, good chappy!TwilightVolleyball9
2008-07-28
ch 14, PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! please please please with a cherry on top! updateTwilightEdwardBella95
2008-07-28
ch 11, LOL I realized I read the story before when you had it at chapter10.TwilightEdwardBella95
2008-07-28
ch 1, lol!vampiresrok
2008-07-28
ch 14, i could so c charlie doing thatI hate Ballet
2008-07-28
ch 14, Good chapter. I thought it was funny. ;) I would say update soon but I won't be here to read it since I'm going on vacation. ;)klutzygirl34
2008-07-28
ch 14, OH Charley better watch out!hermionejeangrangerweasley
2008-07-23
ch 13, WHAT!? WOW! THAT WAS AWSOME!hermionejeangrangerweasley
2008-07-23
ch 12, THAT WAS CREEPY! AND CHARLIE DIDN'T COME! AND THAT WAS FUNNY! OMC! "I GOT IT ALL ON TAPE!"hermionejeangrangerweasley
2008-07-23
ch 11, YAY! EMMETT'S GETTIG ARRESTED... doesn't that mean charlie may come? YAYAYAYAY!hermionejeangrangerweasley
2008-07-23
ch 10, THEY ARE ALL GOING TO DIE! TANYA IS COMING AND THEY ARE GOING TO GET MASACERED BY EVIL ALASKAN VAMPIRES!hermionejeangrangerweasley
2008-07-23
ch 9, THAT WAS GREAT!hermionejeangrangerweasley
2008-07-23
ch 8, that was great! PLEASSE PRANK CHARLIE!!hermionejeangrangerweasley
2008-07-23
ch 7, that was amazing!hermionejeangrangerweasley
2008-07-23
ch 5, i think charlie SHOULD see the picturehermionejeangrangerweasley
2008-07-23
ch 4, Don't bring your gun? Are you kidding me? CAN THEY PRANK CHARLIE PLEASE!?hermionejeangrangerweasley
2008-07-23
ch 3, oh wow! poor edward!hermionejeangrangerweasley
2008-07-23
ch 2, that was so freaking funny!hermionejeangrangerweasley
2008-07-23
ch 1, oh wow! that was funny! write mor please!emmyfreak13
2008-07-22
ch 13, Who wouldn't Rape Edward?catherine-moonlessnight
2008-07-21
ch 13, your stories are great DTwilightVolleyball9
2008-07-20
ch 13, LUV IT!! UPDATE SOON! luv how tanya is gone! teeheeMusically Twilight
2008-07-20
ch 13, I don't tink I want to know, but I do.TwilightLoVeR12EDWARD
2008-07-19
ch 13, omg plz add more to it son ;ptwilight4eva13
2008-07-19
ch 13, aswom still funnyGoldenMoonlight17
2008-07-19
ch 13, O! I can't wait to hear about the time Tanya almost raped Edward! God, that must be hilarious!babygirljen6
2008-07-19
ch 13, omg that will be funny to read update soonKait-tastic
2008-07-19
ch 13, amazing story! i would love more chaptersbriiittx xhc
2008-07-19
ch 13, LOL!
Stupid Tanya.
That was a funny chapter!
I can only imagine what will happen next!
Update soon!Twilightistotallyawesome
2008-07-19
ch 13, OMG I wonder if Tanya really did try to rape Edward. Or is it a prankShadowgirl61
2008-07-19
ch 13, That was great and Tanya can be a royal pain in the arseOhMyEdward472
2008-07-19
ch 13, omigosh, I can't wait for the next chapter! this chapter was so funny, I loved when Emmett got shot down! hahaha, this was a really good chapter!I hate Ballet
2008-07-19
ch 13, I liked this chapter. It was very good. ;)x-rosepetals-x
2008-07-19
ch 13, hehe lol what a weird chapklutzygirl34
2008-07-19
ch 13, tanya's a beeyotch. come on hitting bella with a frying pan? Really?amobutterfly25
2008-07-19
ch 13, that was cold. a little below the belt for her poor bella the but of all jokes.XTopazXeyedXVampireX
2008-07-18
ch 12, Hey! I love your story PRANKS it's really funny. Is probably one of my faveorites on here. I just started my first fanfic and I wanted one of my faveorite authours to read and review it for me to see if they think it's any good so it would mean alot to me if you would. It's called "The perfect dress". If you don't have the time it's okay but I would really appriceate it. Thanks!
-HaileyWolf Babies
2008-07-17
ch 12, Plz update soon! What happened to Edward my love?!
haha )
MikkiE.A.M.C I.M.S
2008-07-17
ch 12, u tell me what happened right now missy...jk.i love it.Shadowgirl61
2008-07-16
ch 12, That was so funny i am still laughingamobutterfly25
2008-07-16
ch 12, heheh that was so bad for emmett. but the really good part is that he can get to replay that message for the rest of eternity:-) got to love video cameras. hehehe. i wonder if emmett came from behind or something. update soon pleaseILoveEdwardCullen1
2008-07-16
ch 12, good chapter and thanks of the tip!I hate Ballet
2008-07-16
ch 12, That was very funny. I loved it. You did a very good job.OhMyEdward472
2008-07-16
ch 12, ohmigosh! That chapter was hilarious! i hope Bella's okay! well, actually, I hope you feel better! pleasew update soon!GoldenMoonlight17
2008-07-16
ch 12, OMG! This chapter was freakin' hilarious! I bet Tanya knocked Bella out! WHAT THE HELL! WHERE IS EDWARD! UPDATE! FREAKIN UPDATE PLEASE! Oh! I know how you feel with the cinnimon problem. I got dare to do that once. It gave me the worst stomach ache ever...briiittx xhc
2008-07-16
ch 12, LOL!
Haha Emmett got a stripper!
That was awesome!
I wonder what happened to Bella!
Update soon!lovabl3loz3r
2008-07-16
ch 12, haha that was halarious i wonder what happen to edward? and bella too? intresting hope you update soonTwilightVolleyball9
2008-07-16
ch 12, amazing!! did tanya knock bella out?? what happened?? please update! SSONN!x-rosepetals-x
2008-07-16
ch 12, that was well good:Dklutzygirl34
2008-07-16
ch 12, omg i luved it it waz so excellent!
luv ya
must update asapcrave4biddenfruit
2008-07-16
ch 12, OMG loved the update! That chapter was awesome?
What did tanya do to edward??
UPDATE SOON!crazybutloved
2008-07-15
ch 12, this chapter was hilariousJimeLakesSwanCullen
2008-07-15
ch 12, ooww
get well SOON (:
I wont xD believe
hahah and the police EMMETT Thing was SO FUNNY XD
hahah lol
xD
Sargent Good xD
well thanks for the updatee
enjoy my review
I hope you feel better
much better soon Demmyfreak13
2008-07-15
ch 11, I wish you would have made them moan more!
still good!ILoveEdwardCullen1
2008-07-15
ch 11, It was good, don't be so hard in your self.i'm.dazzled.
2008-07-15
ch 11, hah! whoa i never thought edward would be one to suggest doing that... but it was hillarious! can't wait to read more! : : :Musically Twilight
2008-07-15
ch 11, Emmett, bad Emmett...fleckpuppy
2008-07-15
ch 11, i cant wait until the next chapter comes out...it is going to be SO good. ) please update as soon as you can. thanks!I hate Ballet
2008-07-15
ch 11, I loved it. It was so funny. ;)OhMyEdward472
2008-07-15
ch 11, yay! more chapters! trhisis getting so funny! pleas eupdate super soon!tammyxcullen
2008-07-15
ch 11, just a bit of info:
usually when someone shakes their head, it means no, and when they nod, its a yes
sorry, i was just getting way confusedJimeLakesSwanCullen
2008-07-15
ch 11, yeshh hhaha lol
i want too see more action!xD
Emmett is getting arrested! xD wuuh
i want to see that
I think it is an everyday activity but.. anyways xD
lol
updatee (:
LOL
JimeLakesbriiittx xhc
2008-07-15
ch 11, OMG!
Hahaha!
Why did Tanya freak out the seond time?
I can only imagine what Emmett did and what tanya is going to do!
I liked Edward's prank!
Omg update soon!
The suspense is killing me!Liley-Twilight-Lover
2008-07-15
ch 11, This story is so funny! Can't wait for the next chapter!Twilightangel98
2008-07-15
ch 11, OMG! that was soo funny. write more.XvamprincessX038
2008-07-15
ch 11, OMG that was hilarious please update soon!!crave4biddenfruit
2008-07-15
ch 7, OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG this is awesome so funny!crave4biddenfruit
2008-07-15
ch 5, plz plz take your time this is really good!Ms. Sparkly vampire wolf.
2008-07-15
ch 11, LMAO!
hahahahahahahahahahahahaha!crave4biddenfruit
2008-07-15
ch 4, OMG this is so funny I love it!
hahahahahaha
I can't believe bella could withstand edward's charm when she made him over!catherine-moonlessnight
2008-07-15
ch 1, waw
that is soo funny i can imagine alices faceTwilightVolleyball9
2008-07-15
ch 11, HAHAHAHAHA! luv the story!! please continue soon!! please!TheVampireWithTheGoldenEyes
2008-07-15
ch 11, nice, It is really funny.Twilightistotallyawesome
2008-07-15
ch 11, Wait a minute... If Jasper didn't make Tanya angry at Bella then...was she really PMSing...Do girl-vampires even have periods... this just gets weirder and weirder.x-rosepetals-x
2008-07-15
ch 11, lol that was wel good update soon i wanna know what emmett dne!!:DMusically Twilight
2008-07-10
ch 10, WHY MUST SHE COME!! Okay, update soon.
Alineemmyfreak13
2008-07-07
ch 10, Bella and Tanya will have a mud wrestling fight! No wait... a fight threw the spriklers! yayleafygirlnat
2008-07-05
ch 10, that's great, i mean the story, not about your computer breaking. That really sucks. I just got back from vacation.
Love the story. Prank ones are hhe-larious.
-leafygirlnat
(did i spell that right?)Preya
2008-07-03
ch 10, OMG!
This story was just totally awesome! Write more plz!
I just started a story if u wanted to R&R
PreyaTwilightVolleyball9
2008-07-03
ch 10, awesome! please update soon!! they should prank tanya! hahahahaha
-Twilightvolleyball9sprinter1
2008-07-02
ch 10, hahahaha omg whatit is?!
lol this is frigging hilarious!ShaJuLu
2008-07-02
ch 10, xDvampiresrok
2008-07-02
ch 10, hey i think that tanya should try to flirt with edward unsuccesfuly then the hole family shold play a prank on herKellbella
2008-07-02
ch 10, That was so great! Thanks for using my idea! Maybe Tanya could pull a prank on the Cullen men!
I love Rose when she slaps Emmett upside the head.
Have fun on your week off. :)GoldenMoonlight17
2008-07-02
ch 10, HOLY CRAP! UPDATE! T-A-N-Y-A! HELLO! HOW AM I GOING TO LIVE WONDER WHAT THEY ARE GOING TO DO WITH HER! YOU ARE KILLING ME HERE! WHAT YOU DID WITH THE TYLER'S CAR WAS HILARIOUS!Twilightistotallyawesome
2008-07-02
ch 10, WOW I don't know what Tanya's doin but I think it's gonna be good or very flirty. Or very seducyJimeLakesSwanCullen
2008-07-02
ch 10, whyy god!?
i want to see what happens
just a week
humph.. I think i can wait x3
thaank you :Di'm.dazzled.
2008-07-02
ch 10, uh oh. NOT TANYA! i bet carlisle invited her... this story is really good, it's so much fun to read! oh i wonder what's gonna happen with her? i can't wait to read more, i don't think i can wait a week. lol. i really enjoy reading this story : : :OhMyEdward472
2008-07-02
ch 10, plz update as soon as possible! i love this story!in-between-jake-and-jazz-he...
2008-07-02
ch 10, awesom but bella shoulda been a vampier that would have made it even betterI hate Ballet
2008-07-02
ch 10, I liked it. It was funny. ;)x-rosepetals-x
2008-07-02
ch 10, lol i like the putting the van on the roof and have fun whereeva your going!
plz update asaplovabl3loz3r
2008-07-02
ch 10, omg no story has ever made me laugh so hard as this one - usually there lame and corny BUT NOT YOURS! i cant stop laughing even as im writing this review ha XD its 2 bad your going away :( plz update as soon as you come backILoveEdwardCullen1
2008-07-02
ch 2, you like to use the word alot dont you? If it is a yes it is ok so do I.
lolCindylee99
2008-07-02
ch 10, please continue.twilight4eva13
2008-07-02
ch 10, its so hilarious butn i dontlike BxE geting pranked but emmet is my fav character so if he does it im a bit nuetral 2 it!briiittx xhc
2008-07-02
ch 10, I loved what they did to Tyler's car!
Haha!
Oh man Tanya.
I'm interested as to what will happen.
Update soon!Lady-Lollie
2008-07-02
ch 10, Brill idea. I think that someone will pull a prank on Tanya and shell think it was Bella and theyll have this massive fight which Bella will win of course. Am i right lol?
Lolliex-rosepetals-x
2008-06-30
ch 9, omg that so funny please write moreMayface
2008-06-27
ch 9, hahahahaha!emmyfreak13
2008-06-26
ch 9, TEEHEEHEE!
no idea's, but im sure you'll think of something!WonderHell
2008-06-26
ch 9, Hilarious fic!
Update soon ;)CaryAnn
2008-06-25
ch 9, Wow that was really funny! I love the Emmett one... hilarious!Shadowgirl61
2008-06-25
ch 9, LOL, that was great.LORD commodore Norry
2008-06-25
ch 1, Uh-oh! Edward's gonna kill them! Update!GoldenMoonlight17
2008-06-25
ch 9, ROFL! I in my pants because of laughing so hard! Thanks alot...I was wearing my nice shorts too. Oh, I can't wait to read the next chapter! I think I might die from reading it though! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!Kellbella
2008-06-25
ch 9, Emmett and the diaper was hilarious!
Maybe Edward and Alice (via her visions) should get every single cheeseburger there and stuff them inside Mike's car while he, Lauren, Jessica, and Tyler are eating. When they finish he goes and opens the door and burgers start to fall out!
Or Edward and his siblings can get Mike's vehicle and take it totally apart and reassemble it on the roof of McDonald's.
Can't wait to see what happens next. :)ShaJuLu
2008-06-25
ch 9, Eh, it was ok. The other chapters made me laugh, or at least smile, but this one was just ok. /TwilightVolleyball9
2008-06-25
ch 9, OMG! i love it! its hilairious! please continue and soon! i'm so excited for more! WOOT WOOT! this is so good!! please update ASAP!Edwardluver92
2008-06-25
ch 9, funnyJimeLakesSwanCullen
2008-06-25
ch 9, hahahhahaha xD hahaha
xD
dAMN hahahaha
soo hard xD
lol good job
youu can makee Rosaliee dreess up like victoriaa and scare
Bella and Edward the hell out of them!xD
i dunno xD
you can scribble on Carlisle's books!xD
everyone!xDvampiresrok
2008-06-25
ch 9, this is rokish plz tell me t hat u r goning to continue tyTwilightangel98
2008-06-25
ch 9, I don't have any ideas but that was funny. I think that Bella and Edward should pulla prank on Jessica, Mike, Tyler, and Lauren.sprinter1
2008-06-25
ch 9, omg i love it!
hahaha omg i havnt laughed so hard in ages!
im dying here lol!
please please continue this made my day.
Unicorns4774
2008-06-25
ch 9, i loved this story.
your an awsome writer. keep writing.
arasJimeLakesSwanCullen
2008-06-25
ch 6, are you suureE??
thiss is AMAZING
hahha i laughed soo HARD xD
hahhaha LOL!xDbriiittx xhc
2008-06-25
ch 9, OMG!
That was the best!
I love how Emmett just threw everyone in.
The chicken feathers, glue and the hug were awesome!
Emmett's both new looks are awesome!
Update soon!Twilightistotallyawesome
2008-06-25
ch 9, hahahaha this is funny!Cindylee99
2008-06-25
ch 9, Please continue.amobutterfly25
2008-06-25
ch 9, oh evil esme was priceless.leafygirlnat
2008-06-25
ch 9, KEEP WRIGHTING! I LOVE YOUR STORY!
WRITE ON!
-leafygirlnatleafygirlnat
2008-06-25
ch 8, I loved it!I hate Ballet
2008-06-25
ch 9, I loved this chapter. It was absolutely awsome. ;)leafygirlnat
2008-06-25
ch 7, That was ok, Bella would definatley not do that. But it's your story and i LOVE it!Kiatami-chan
2008-06-25
ch 9, o that was just great emmett as a baby... sounds like some creepy sex game er somethingleafygirlnat
2008-06-25
ch 6, That was helarius!leafygirlnat
2008-06-25
ch 5, OOHH, cliff hanger!leafygirlnat
2008-06-25
ch 4, I like where this is going!leafygirlnat
2008-06-25
ch 2, oh, nice one!Lady-Lollie
2008-06-25
ch 9, Aha Emmett! Oh that was wicked, i cant believe Esme did that!
LollieRosalieLillianHaleCullen22
2008-06-25
ch 9, Those were good.
Thanks for the laughs.
Update again soon.chocolate 101
2008-06-24
ch 7, ur story is so funny!!
i love it!babygirljen6
2008-06-23
ch 8, this was really funny cant wait to read moreShaJuLu
2008-06-22
ch 8, KEEP. WRITING.
Pweez.TwilightVolleyball9
2008-06-22
ch 8, i really liked this chapter!! it was really funny and kept me smiling! please continue and update ASAP!Shadowgirl61
2008-06-21
ch 8, That was too funny and the mud fight perfect.amobutterfly25
2008-06-21
ch 8, abusehehe that was such a fun chapter.Edwardluver92
2008-06-21
ch 8, abusehahaha tht was funny!dear forever yours
2008-06-21
ch 1, This was really funny (:
You had some grammar, punctuation and spelling mistakes, but other than that, I loved it!
Update soon, I'm looking foward to some more!Lady-Lollie
2008-06-21
ch 8, Lol now have a mental image of Edward and Bella rolling around in the mud kissing, sounds fun XD
LollieCourtneyFirehand
2008-06-21
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2008-06-21
ch 8, OMG!
That was awesome!
Man she is !
Can't wait for some more!Kellbella
2008-06-21
ch 8, The mud war was so funny! I can't wait to see what happens next! Carlisle will be fun to see!
Great job. :)TopazObsessr94
2008-06-21
ch 8, this is so funny!I hate Ballet
2008-06-21
ch 8, lol. I loved it. It was awsome. Update soon please.Laren Hawkins
2008-06-18
ch 7, I think they should sing: What I Like About You. But that's just meEmmettFangirl
2008-06-17
ch 7, OH funny funny funny!
how 'bout that one song that goes "i've got a bad case of loving you" or something like that, for esme and carlisle?Twihard Kitty
2008-06-07
ch 7, I'm not all that creative, so I have few ideas for the poor unfortunate couple you're targeting now. Lucky for them. I love it! UPDATE ASAP!.vampire.girl.26.1994.
2008-06-07
ch 7, i absolutely LOVE this story! it is the best one ive read so far!emmyfreak13
2008-06-07
ch 7, i LOVE emmett!Lady-Lollie
2008-06-07
ch 7, Lmao lovin itKellbella
2008-06-06
ch 7, That was great. Maybe since Carlisle works at the hospital, he should wear tight black skinny jeans, wear a mullett wig, a tight shirt with holes and shredded pieces all over it and do karoake night singing Dr. Feelgood from Motley Crew.
Hmm...Emmett should have to pay and dress in old-school Madonna mini-skirt with leggings underneat with neon colors, jelly heels with bobby socks and jelly bracelets, huge hair that has about three cans of Aqua Net on it, singing Like a Virgin.
hm...Esme could sing a Dolly Parton song and have to stuff her bra to astronomical proportions, wear a blonde wig.
Those are my suggestions!Capt. Butch Flowers
2008-06-06
ch 7, GREAT! I LOVE IT! I really want to hear more so PLEASE update soon.
DShaJuLu
2008-06-06
ch 6, Hilarious! I really laughed during the story. xD Keep updating!Alice-Bella-Rosalie
2008-06-06
ch 7, this is really good so far and I would really love to see more. If you want to you could chain Esme and Carlisle to chairs and then dress them up in really dorky looking clothes and make them hiddious looking and then you could hide Carlisles Black sedan or what ever it is and then put them tied up to a tree and leave them hanging there until they can get out themselves and put them very very far apart. Then you could do something only Emmett would think of like dress them up in really ugly looking super people suits or make them dress up as if they were vampires with the plasic fangs and the black capes and stuff with fake or real blood which ever one you like best and have them run around in the middle of the biggest bestest mall in the world and then take videos!! you don't have to use it but it would be hilarious if you did and well ya so bye bye bye bye bye!! bubye! and burn all their things! muhahahahahahahahahahahaShahzysAngelette
2008-06-06
ch 7, me+your storyTwilightangel98
2008-06-06
ch 7, Well, that was great!!I almost fell on the floor laughing when they texted Jessica and Tyler. I couldn't believ what Jessics wsa wearing and what Tyler did ot the room.What's going to happen to Carlisle and Esme?GoldenMoonlight17
2008-06-06
ch 7, Love it! Update Soon! Very Cute!Shadowgirl61
2008-06-06
ch 7, That was so funny I couldn't stop laughing. I lovedit.briiittx xhc
2008-06-06
ch 7, Loved the chapter!
Me and my friends decided to give each other superhero names a while ago and mine was wonder woman!
That made me laugh!
Hmm for Esme and Carlisle you should do...
idk some random rap song or like backstreet boys.
something old school.
LOL!
I really don't know.TwilightVolleyball9
2008-06-06
ch 7, awesome!! update soon!! ASAP!!amobutterfly25
2008-06-06
ch 7, oo maybe have them go on a vacation but before hold esme hostage and carlisle have to sell his Mercedes(beauty on tires) to get her out so that he can bail her out but they get the money to the kids and they use it to get like silly string and plaster them with it or something . IDK.I hate Ballet
2008-06-06
ch 7, I don't know what to do for Esme and Carlisle. Your thinking the exact same thing that I was when I wrote the last chapter of Embarrassed: What do I do next? I'm glad you read my story by the way. It made me happy. good luck with this ;)Twihard Kitty
2008-05-30
ch 6, Ha ha ha!
They're not losing spunk! WHAT ARE THEY DOING TO EDWARD?!Lady-Lollie
2008-05-30
ch 6, Ahaha brilliant
LollieLaren Hawkins
2008-05-29
ch 4, This story is SO funny! Keep going!briiittx xhc
2008-05-29
ch 6, HAHA!
That was the best!
I can't wait to see what Emmett does next!
These pranks are awesome!amobutterfly25
2008-05-29
ch 6, so where do alice's ties lie? huh? heheh just jokingKartuv Blue
2008-05-29
ch 6, OMG!! That is HILARIOUS!CourtneyFirehand
2008-05-29
ch 6, hahhahahaha laughing so hardTwilightVolleyball9
2008-05-29
ch 6, OMG! that was halarious! i cracked up the whole way! Everyone should do something to Charlie! hahaha! thay should make emmett wear a thong from victoria's secret and have to run through an amusement park at human speed! hahaha you don't have to use that!!justrememberhe prefersbrune...
2008-05-29
ch 6, lolemmyfreak13
2008-05-29
ch 6, HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAH
TEHEHEHEEHEHEHEEH
that was amazing!Shadowgirl61
2008-05-29
ch 6, That was really funny. I loved it.Lady-Lollie
2008-05-25
ch 5, Hahahaha so laughable! I can just imagine that happening lol brill
LollieTwihard Kitty
2008-05-25
ch 5, Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! It's hilarious, I can't wait for more!briiittx xhc
2008-05-24
ch 5, LOL!
I have seriously laughed non-stop!
Thanks!
Update soon!
And I hope you feel better!amobutterfly25
2008-05-24
ch 5, poor mike. ;-( - hehehehe not really ! update soon please oh so good so far.latuacontante
2008-05-23
ch 5, omg i love this story but it sucks that you were in a car accident i hope your okayniaxxedward
2008-05-23
ch 5, yay please keep writing, i luv wen they play pranks on each other
! i hope that they play some more pranks on the family members! because they are vampires, and they are so much more funny! i luv it keep it up!!xxcurx2u
2008-05-23
ch 5, OMG ARE YU OKAY!?emmyfreak13
2008-05-23
ch 5, hahahah i love it, mike is such a !fAiRiEpOwDeRiNg
2008-05-23
ch 5, omg! that was really funny, great job! i'm sorry you're in a car accident, but can you please correct your punctuation? It will sound better and make your story so much better.Shadowgirl61
2008-05-23
ch 5, That was so funny, I can't wait to read more.ShahzysAngelette
2008-05-23
ch 5, lol! i loved it once again! poor Mike. can't wait to see what you can cook up for Tyler & Jessica!I hate Ballet
2008-05-23
ch 5, Aw. I feel so bad for you being in the hospital. I'm glad your better now though. I liked this chapter. it was funny. ;)GoldenMoonlight17
2008-05-23
ch 5, You are a pure evil...
GENIUS! WHO! MIKE GOT PIED! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! JESSICA AND TYLER ARE GOING TO GET IT! YOU ROCK! UPDATE SOON! LOVE THE STORY!Bubbly722
2008-05-23
ch 5, I am sorry to hear that you were in a car accident. But one tip for your writing. When you are setting up a plan, don't tell people what exactly is going to happen before hand, to leave some mystery and suspense in your story. I will help people to keep reading. Great story. Hope you feel better.katie277
2008-05-22
ch 4, YAY! MORE MORE PLZ
UpDATE soon can't wait!Dannie190
2008-05-19
ch 1, i like it.ShahzysAngelette
2008-05-17
ch 4, Hehehehehe!! Keep writing! That was priceless! Hmm, pranks on people! sounds fun!Twihard Kitty
2008-05-16
ch 4, Hilarious! OME I'M DYING WILL YOU PLEASE UPDATE!
Oh and here's an idea. Have them do something to Jake. -evil glint in eyes-I hate Ballet
2008-05-16
ch 4, I liked it. It was funny. "You burned all my clothes!" I have a suggestion for something to put in. (This may sound a little cruel) have bella ask mike newton on a date and then after he says yes and they say where they will meet, have bella say that she tricked him and then have her run away or have edward join her and they make out infront of Mike's house.Lady-Lollie
2008-05-16
ch 4, Brill! As usual cannot wait for the next chapter!
LollieDannie190
2008-05-15
ch 4, i love it!fleckpuppy
2008-05-15
ch 4, Haha...great story-please update ASAP! )xXSocialDistortionistXx
2008-05-15
ch 4, LMAO I LOVE THIS STORY! Update uber quickly and SOON! I LOVE IT!amobutterfly25
2008-05-15
ch 4, that was good, so sorry for bella . having to go shopping with her . that was surely going to take a probably 2 days, making sure all outfits have all there accessories. m, maybe they should say that the volvo is on sale for REALLY cheap and someone buys it nad emmett is hiding in the backseat and pops out of the middle of no one. idk just a idea that popped in my head. update when you canRedRose48
2008-05-15
ch 4, be afraid of emmet and his gunAryella
2008-05-14
ch 3, LOL! HAHAHAHA! I think I died laughing, really. :) Great job.
AryLady-Lollie
2008-05-14
ch 3, Aha brillient, did you know it was all underlined?
LollieGoldenMoonlight17
2008-05-14
ch 3, THIS WAS EVEN BETTER! YOU MY FRIEND, ARE A GENIUS! UPDATE! YOU ROCK!ShahzysAngelette
2008-05-13
ch 3, seriously! Don't apologize for long chapters! I love them! Anyways, i'd hate to get on your bad side on april fools... Poor Edward.amobutterfly25
2008-05-13
ch 3, that rocked. i wonder what esme will do that her house has been revamped( no pun intended) by her children?hehe update soon pleaseI hate Ballet
2008-05-13
ch 3, Hahaha. What a wonderful gift to give little children. I love this story. Its so funny.GoldenMoonlight17
2008-05-13
ch 2, O! Bella unconscious! Carlisle is going to get it! LOL God, this story gets funnier and funnier! I thought the the ceiling and the Sharpie was funny. This is RICH! UPDATE SOON! Love it!Lady-Lollie
2008-05-13
ch 2, Absolutely brilliant cant wait for more
LollieI hate Ballet
2008-05-12
ch 2, Hahaha. Hmm, hide and go seek with cars. That's a good one. I thought it was really funny. Keep up the good work.amobutterfly25
2008-05-12
ch 2, THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING! UPDATE SOON PLEASEAryella
2008-05-12
ch 2, HAHAHA! hilarious. There were some confusing sentences, though. You should watch out for how you word some phrases. But other than that, great. :)
Update Soon!
AryfAiRiEpOwDeRiNg
2008-05-11
ch 1, I loved the part when Bella got superglued-duct taped to the ceiling! OMG, I can just imagine that! Good job, but you need to work on your punctuation and you repeated, "starting to get worried" & spelled it wrong the 2nd time. I'm not trying to be nag, but a story w/o errors really makes it better & I think you have a wonderful story.I hate Ballet
2008-05-11
ch 1, Hahaha. I like it. I hope Bella doesn't get hurt too bad, but seeing Edward kill his siblings would be some fun. ;)Twihard Kitty
2008-05-11
ch 1, Pranks! Yay, update! OME, it really is funny!bubbz
2008-05-11
ch 1, you stole this from someone else how could you this is the same as july fools daypiicklex3
2008-05-11
ch 1, nice that was an awsome story if if i say so myself bravo... update soon!
-piicklex3Aryella
2008-05-11
ch 1, lol! Continue, please, that was hilarious!
Update Soon
Arysammysgurl
2008-05-11
ch 1, LMFAO!
gah haha
update soon please!GoldenMoonlight17
2008-05-11
ch 1, It sounds pretty good so far! I like it a lot! Ha! Bella stuck on the ceiling! That is priceless I have to admit. Edward will have to tear off Bella's clothes to get her off the ceiling right? That would be Hilarious! I wonder how Edward and Bella are going to get back at Jasper and Alice? Oh! I can't wait to hear what Emmett and Rosalie are going to do! Well, Update Soon!amobutterfly25
2008-05-11
ch 1, oh poor bella. it really stinks for bella that she can't get revenge because of alices stupid power. update soon pleaseLady-Lollie
2008-05-11
ch 1, Lmao omg please tell me there is more to this, im enjoying it so much already.
Lollie
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