Okay Guys, I have come to a decision. That was exactly where I had planned to end the story from the beginning, HOWEVER, I realised that that little thing about the director opened alot of new, um, ideas? So I will be making a sequel called 'What about now?' but I will plan it before writing so I don't get writer's block. It will be around the same length in chapters as this one, but I'm gonna have longer chapters. :) Wish me luck and tell me what you think.


Now, to reply to reviews.

rach cullen:See above, I hope I satisfied you on both counts.

2sides2evrystory: Don't worry, i'll continue, and the fax? anything but cliche.

ZanaLuvs2Read: Sucking up is good. It gets you places. Oh, and please don't imagine the double meaning in that. Totally unintentional. Read above.

Ruby-Pheonix: There's gonna be.. oh stuff it, read up there.

kashiena: I am making a sequel :) And by the way? Who ever said it was Itex? I mean, sure they thought it was Itex.

Laura.S-x: Yay, my fave reviewer. Love you. And yeah, the ending line? Planned it from the beginning. I'm not gonna do an epilogue, but a sequel. The epilogue would probably go as well as the prologue, if you know what I mean. And yeah, I read twilight. BEFORE everyone else got obsessed just so you know. I read it like, a month after it came out. Actually, I'll tell you the story. My friend told me to read it, I read it, read new moon when it came out, then read eclipse when it came out. Six months later everyone is like Oh My GOD twilight and I'm sitting there rolling my eyes going where the hell were you for the last year or so? Anyway, that aside, yeah I have read twilight. I'm thinking of doing a twilight fic, but I want an original idea. And I need to read the books again to check her writing style so I don't start using Max's sarcasm. Have you read the host? Read it, it's quite good. 'The only book with a love triangle in two bodies'.

maximumluver:Aw thanks, there's gonna be a sequel.

barelypassing4sane: There's a sequel, read above.

The Flock's Bud: Thanks for ur supportive and encouraging reviews. Read the paragraph at the top of the page.

queencleopatra the 2nd: Wow, cleopatra! Can I call you cleo? I'm half egyptian btw, jst so you know, lol.

twimo: Aww, thanks. Well it's true. And read above.

bahamallama ding-dongs rulz: There's gonna be a sequel (imagine me dancing around and singing this. Actually don't. I dunno if you can go deaf from imagining horrible noises, but there's always a first time. Best not to take chances.)

imaGi.NatiOn.X.x: THANKYOU, I think it was my best chappie (in my opinion) cuz I had no internet, so I kept reading it and editing stuff. It's almost a weeks worth of work.

imaGi.NatiOn.X.x: Might I add that while in chapter two you said that there were many more chapters to review and yet you only reviewed one more time. SHOCKING. No, jk, thanks for reviewing in general.

imaGi.NatiOn.X.x: Me likey you very very very much. Thanks for all the reviews.

krissy-fishy: Thanks for your i don't know how many reviews. You first gave me the idea of a sequel, so thanks for that.

Laura.S-x:Thanks, thanks, thanks, okay, aye aye, thanks, thanks, yep, thanks, yes, will do, (this is for the chapter ten review. )

Okay, I'm gonna give you guys an excerpt from What about now?

Max POV

I could feel something tugging at the edge of my consciousness, pulling. Almost like something I was trying to remember, but somehow, different. Like someone was trying to enter my mind.

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Fang POV

He grabbed Max by the waist and twirled her around. He pinned her against the cave wall and grinned.

'See, I told you that you loved me this much' He held out his arms wide, 'I knew I was right'

But that was when Max's face twisted into a grimace, followed by a sly grin. She brought her face close to his.

'You?' She scoffed, 'You don't know anything at all.'

Fang thought that if you pressed the rewind button on life you could pinpoint the exact second his heart broke.'

Tell me what you think. Or is that a bit too depressing. However, might I remind you that I believe in happy endings. So don't get too worried. Oh and read my other two stories, AND REVIEW! tell me if i should continue 'Alive'