Jim and I
I don't own Treasure Planet but I do know the name of the man who does own it and it is Mr. Robert Stevenson. By the way this will go like the movie except a few changes will be in it. I got the idea from another writer but it's not going to be the same.
Chapter 2: Part 2: Introductions
Character starts out at age six.
On the clearest of nights, when the winds of the Etherium were calm and peaceful, the great merchant ship with their cargoes of Arcturian Sora Crystals, felt safe and secure. Little did they suspect that they were perused by…pirates! And the most fear of all these pirates was the notorious
Captain Nathaniel Flint. Like a Candarian Zap-wing overtaking its prey, Flint and his band of renegades swooped in, out of nowhere. And then, gathering up their spoils ... vanished ... without a trace. Flint's secret trove was never found, but stories have persisted, that it remains hidden, somewhere, at the farthest reaches of the galaxy. Stowed with riches beyond the imagination... The loot, of a thousand worlds:
Treasure Planet
A young boy shuts the book, looking out at the stars on this cold night on earth, his parents are dead and he lives in an orphanage. Yet he wishes to be anywhere but here at this time, so he makes a wish on a star for something to come and take him away from here.
Just as he made the wish a ship came crashing down in the yard, he jumps out of his window running up to the ship. He pulls out what looks to him like a lizard and he covers the ship up so no one can tell what it is. He brings this lizard like creature to his hiding place to heal.
The Next Day
The young boy can be found working on the ship that had landed the night before, wishing to know everything about this machine because there are controls that he has never seen in his life. The lizard wakes up, he eats the food that's there for him to eat, while watching this boy try and fix his ship.
The young boy has fixed up the outside of the ship and goes inside to see if it runs now that he's done a few fixings. The ship starts up but doesn't stay on, for it quits and falls to floor in a crashing manner. The boy gets out opening a panel, this time looking a bit deeper in; he finds something that is broken.
Realizing that he's seen this part in an old vehicle that doesn't run now, he runs off to get the part. The lizard gets up to inspect the ship, to see if the boy fixed it at all and to his surprise it is fixed so far. Chuckling he watches as the boy comes back in with this part and attaches it onto the other part.
Once again he closes the door to get inside the ship, only to see the lizard like man already inside. The manlike thing turns the ship on and this time the ship does not quit the boy smiles at the manlike thing, happy to have fixed the ship.
"What's your name lad?" asks the manlike thing.
"The names Marius Sons sir, what's your name and no offense but what are you?" answers and asks the boy.
"I'm Billy Bones and I'm a Salamander, nice work on my ship here, even though I don't think you've ever seen anything like this here on planet Earth" answers the manlike thing getting out of his ship.
"Sir, you should get back to bed, I'll bring lunch when it is time, but for now I've got to go. You'll be safe in here, I'll be back" smiles Marius walking out of the small den and out into the yard.
The young boy goes back inside to get his school lesson; the orphanage provides an education for all the children who live there. He passes through the day not really caring about his classes at the moment, why he's seen an alien. He grabs an extra lunch saying he is very hunger today and heads outside to his little hiding place, knowing Billy will be there.
He goes in to see the salamander looking at something in his hand, not wanting to intrude on him, walking to the table putting the food down. He leans back in a chair opening his food up and starts to eat, even though he's curious about the object.
"I'll be leaving after dark, can't stay in one place to long or else they'll find me" says Billy getting up to eat at the table.
"It's cool, I'm used to this kind of thing, people meet and people part, nothing big" smiles Marius before he takes a drink.
"Where is your parent's young lad?" asks Billy as he finishes eating.
"Let's see they are both dead, I live in an orphanage since I was a baby, so I never knew my parents" shrugs Marius standing up; he walks up to the ship looking it over.
"Do you have any attachments to this place on earth?" asks Billy as he goes to stand next to Marius.
"Nah, I rather just leave like you but I'm too young to be on the streets on my own" Marius answers as he gets into the ship to get a feel for the controls because it may be his last to see an outside ship like this again.
"How about coming with me, you could repair my ship when it gets damaged" suggest Billy looking down at the boy with wonder in his eyes.
"I'd love that" smiles Marius looking up at the salamander.
That Night
The two get inside the ship, Marius watches Billy start up the ship and what buttons he pushes to make it fly into the sky. Marius watches as the stars come closer and closer until they reach outer space, looking at the moon he sighs. Never in his wildest dreams did he believe he could almost touch the stars until now that is.
The two pass by the moon soon, knowing he's going to have the time of his life with Billy, he falls asleep knowing each day will be a new adventure. In his dream he sees the universe through his eyes for the first time ever and he can't wait to see more.
12 years later
Marius slides out from under the ship, the two made a pit stop to fix up the ship with pirates on their trail. He gets into the ship as Billy starts up the ship again, wants to leave as soon as possible so not to get caught. They blast off of the planet the two head for Montressor Planet to see if they can lose the pirates there instead.
The computer buzzes out that a ship is hot on their tail; Billy tries to keep clear from getting shot at by the laser cannons on the other ship. Marius turns around getting out their gun to start shooting back at them; he realizes the gun needs to be fixed. So instead of firing the gun he takes out his tools and starts to fix up the gun so he can finally start shooting back at them.
The computer says the planet is coming up, but for Marius not fast enough, he needs more time. Even if they don't have the time he's got to make it, a laser shot right through the ship messing up the speed control. The computer finally tells them what's wrong, saying: SHIP HAS BEEN HIT, SPEEDING UP, Billy tires to slow the ship down, not wanting to crash on the planet and give them what they want.
"Marius lad, have you got the gun up and operational yet, we need to get out of this mess soon" yells back Billy because of the alarm that keeps saying GOING TO CRASH LAND.
"Yeah I just did, don't worry I'm starting to shoot back right now" Marius pushes the button shooting back at the enemy ship now.
"Let's hope to land nicely" jokes out Billy.
"That is if an old timer like you can handle it" jokes back Marius.
The two falls quiet again each doing what they have to keep themselves alive longer right now. Marius barely moves out of the way as a laser shoots right through the ship, hitting Billy in the back. Marius yells out shit, catching the controls trying to remember how to make it work or at least steer it some.
He pushes in some coordinates of someplace on the planet, the computer on board takes over so Marius can check on Billy. Seeing he is hurt badly, Marius no knows he won't live very long, just long enough to take landing and hiding into account.
As Marius tires to get a nice grip on what's going on around him as another shot goes through the ship. Marius is tossed from one side of the ship to the other; he pulls himself up trying to get a hold on himself at the same time. He runs back to the control panel to see if he can fire lasers at the enemy behind them, noticing for the first time an old cannon ball shot.
He fines a cannon ball putting it in and shooting it at the enemy, hoping to hit the target at the same time. Marius tries to take up the laser gun again only to find Billy at the helm firing like crazy at the enemy ship.
This time making some kind of damage to their ship instead, trying to keep his cool Marius takes out his tools and starts to work on the speed knowing if they can slow down a little they'd have a better chance of hitting the enemy. He knows this, so he crawls under the ships panel and starts his work right away, doing this for so long he soon has everything else working up to speed except that control's speed.
He gets up he goes into the back of the ship, opening up a side panel he starts to work on that side now. He works as fast as he can, considering the ships being shot to hell and rocking back and forth on him. A shot hit's the main sail making the sip go into a nose dive for the planet below them, working harder he finally gets it to work.
Suddenly slowing the ship down some, it jerks him back into a metal bar, his head hitting the bar really hard, and losing consciousness. He comes back a minute later to see Billy in front of him, knowing that a laser shot must have gone towards him. He gets up to check up on Billy, growling out at the blood, he takes his seat at the laser gun and starts to shoot back at them.
With each shot from the enemy more of the ship stops working, even though he can't really hear anything else, thanks to the alarm that's still blaring in his ear. The enemy stops firing for a little while letting him catch his breath; he starts working again on the control panel.
"Billy wake up man, I need you at the moment, and we're almost to the place where your friend's son lives. Come on you old man, wake the hell up, will ya" shouts out Marius.
"Marius shut the hell up and fix the sail, then get us to the Benbow Inn" growls out Billy getting up.
"Aye, Aye Captain" shouts Marius as he starts to work on getting the sail to go back up, long enough to get them to the inn.
He works as hard as he can, finally the sail straightens up, Marius jumps to the control panel, punching in the Benbow Inn's name. The ship starts to head out that way immediately, Marius looks out the back way to see that the enemy ship is not in sight at the moment. Glad for a little break from working on the ship, Marius sits down to relax for a little bit, he picks up his tools.
He puts them away safely in his jacket, that way if they do crash land, he'll be able to keep all of his tools. The ship shakes again as it starts to descend in a bad way to the ground, grabbing onto something and Billy.
Marius waits for the ship to land, rattling as it starts to lose more power, and the ship comes down, picking up some speed. He sighs knowing they must be near the Benbow Inn but not there yet, so Marius gets up trying to get Billy back up again. He finds the chest that he's never seen Billy without, he bends down picking it up he puts it into Billy's hands.
He knows that something in there is valuable enough to risk his life for; he keeps his eyes on the lookout. He sighs as the ship starts to descend even more this time at a rapid state, knowing they are there.
"Hey old man, wake up. We're at the Benbow Inn, just about to land. Come on wake up, will ya, already" growls out Marius trying to keep his cool at the moment, he needs some real sleep right now.
"I'm up, care to land us Lad" smiles Billy to Marius.
Marius nods his head taking control panel; he puts on the brakes to slow the ship down some. He makes to land on a landing dock, not too far from the Benbow Inn, going by he sees a boy his age look up at the ship. Good help, right away, is just what they need in order to survive this little ordeal, he lands not to lightly on the dock.
He helps Billy get up leading him to the door, it may be a small ship, but damn when you've got an injured person it seems a lot bigger. He hears a pounding on the door and a muffled yelling about being alright in here; Marius goes to open the door.
Well, that is down, now onto the third chapter. Please review for me on this, thanks a whole bunch.
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