Jim and I
I don't own Treasure Planet but I do know the name of the man who does own it and it is Mr. Robert Stevenson. By the way this will go like the movie except a few changes will be in it. I got the idea from another writer but it's not going to be the same.
Chapter 3: The Warning and Their Quest
Marius' point of view
The door opens as Billy and I come out coughing because of the smoke. Billy grabs the shirt of the boy in front of us, pulling him closer.
"He's a coming, can you here'em. Those gears and gyros clicking and whirling like the devil himself" says Billy.
"Hit your head their pretty hard, didn't cha" states the boy rubbing his temple.
Billy goes for his chest in my hands taking it. "He's after me chest, that fiendish cyborg and his band of cut throats. But they'll have to pry it from old Billy Bones cold dead fingers before I argh" starts Billy before dropping the chest to the ground coughing.
I go up to Billy, "Help me, get him someplace safe," I shout to Jim.
"Oh my, duh come on give me your arm, that's it" states Jim helping me carry Billy away from the ship.
It starts to rain outside "Good lads" states Billy.
"Mom's going to love this" states Jim.
Third Point of View
Inside of the Benbow Inn, Sarah changes the window blinds to something nice as Delbert gets ready to leave.
"Thanks for listening Delbert (sigh) it helps" Sarah sits down.
"It's going to be ok, you'll see" says Delbert at her side turning away.
"I keep dreaming one day I'll open that door, and there he'll be just the way he was. Smiling happy little boy holding a new pet and begging me to let him keep it" states Sarah as pictures of her son flash by on her necklace.
Delbert opens the door and there Jim, Marius, and Billy are in the door way.
Marius' point of view
"James Pleiades Hawkins" gasps a women getting up.
"Mom he's hurt…bad" states James putting him down.
"Me chest lads" James and I push it over to Billy.
"He'll be coming soon" starts out Billy pushing in the code, "can't let them find this" he says taking out a small round thing.
"Whose coming?" asks James.
Billy pulls him close, "The cyborg, beware the cyborg" breaths out Billy before he hands off the round thing to James, as he dies.
The noise from a ship can be heard outside coming down, all look up toward the noise. James pockets the round thin; we both get up to look outside, seeing pirates coming toward the place.
"Quick we've got to go" we shout at the same time.
James grabs his mother, running up the stairs, I am right behind him. A laser breaks some of the door and the man starts coming.
"I believe I'm with Jim on this one" he says running up the stairs.
He likes to be called Jim, huh. I think as the man opens a window calling out: "Delilah, Delilah, stay don't move"
Jim and I hear the pirates trashing the place a voice calls out "find it" and the pirates start to run up the stairs.
"Don't worry Sarah, I'm an expert in the physical laws of science, on the count of three one" starts the man after he gets Sarah, I'm guessing, up onto the ledge with him.
"Three" Jim and I say at the same time, pushing the two out of window, as we jump out of the window right after the first two.
The man Delbert grabs the reins as the cover comes up around us.
"Delilah go, that's it, that's it go" says Delbert as the thing pulls them away from the Benbow Inn.
Sarah looks back at her inn, she sits down putting her head in her hand. Jim pulls out the round thing and uncovers it, we both look at it.
At Delbert's House:
"I just spoke with the constabulary, those blaggard pirates fled without a trace" starts Delbert as Jim puts a blanket around his mother's shoulders.
"I'm sorry Sarah, I'm afraid the old Benbow Inn has burned to the ground" continues Delbert as Jim goes to pick up the device.
'Well certainly a lot of trouble for that odd little sphere those markings baffle me" continues Delbert as Jim starts to mess with it.
"Unlike anything I've encountered even with vast experience and superior intellect. It would take me years to unlock its" Jim messes with it some more until it clicks and starts to glow.
Lots of small intelligent pixels come out and form a map all around us.
"Hey" gasps out Delbert as something comes out looking like a map.
"Why it's a map" Delbert says as he walks into the middle of it.
Sarah stands up.
"Wait, wait, wait this is us the Planet Montressor" Delbert touches it and everything starts to move.
"That's the Magellanic Cloud, the Coral Galaxy, that's the Cygnus Cross, and that's the Kerian Abyss, wait what's this, what's this, why it's …it's" stutters out Delbert.
"Treasure Planet" states Jim and I at the same time.
"No," gasps out Delbert.
"That's Treasure Planet" repeats Jim.
"Flint's Trove, the loot of a thousand worlds, do you know what this means?" asks Delbert.
"It means all that Treasure is a boat ride away" I say.
Jim smiles at Marius.
"Whoever brings it back could hold an eternal place a top the pantheon of explorers, he be able to experience" gasps out Delbert, the map disappears "oh what just happened?" he asks looking around.
I laugh as Jim goes to his mother.
"Mom, this is it, the answer to all our problems" Jim says.
"Jim there is absolutely no way" Sarah starts to say.
"Don't you remember all those stories" Jim interrupts.
"That's all they were stories" she shoots back.
"With that Treasure we could rebuild the Benbow a hundred times over" Jim shoots back at her.
"Well this is its just, oh my, Delbert would you please explain how ridiculous this is" she turns to Delbert.
"It's totally preposterous, traversing the entire galaxy alone" he puts out.
"Now at last we hear some sense" she says.
"That's why I'm going with you" Delbert says as he starts to gather his things.
"Delbert" she exclaims.
Jim and I look at Delbert, happily.
"I'll use my life savings to finance an expedition. I'll commission a ship, hire a captain and a crew" he says running around as he gathers some of his things.
"You're not serious" Sarah tries to say.
"All my life I've been waiting for an opportunity like this and here it is screaming go Delbert, go Delbert, go" he starts dancing.
"Ok, ok you're all three grounded" she interrupts.
"Mom look, I know that I keep messing everything up, and I know that I let you down. But this is my chance to make it up to you, I'm gonna set things right" Jim points out.
"Sarah um, if I may" Delbert says.
"Do you think she'll let us go?" I ask Jim.
"I don't know if Delbert can talk her into it, but maybe we will go" Jim answers hopefully.
We listen to the two talk, to see what is going on.
"You've said yourself you've tried everything. There are much worse remedies than a few character building months in space" Delbert points out.
"Are you saying this because it's the right thing or because you really want to go" points out Sarah.
"I really, really, really, really want to go and it's the right thing" Delbert says.
"Jim I don't want to lose you" Sarah says to Jim, as Jim grabs her hand.
"Mom you won't, I'll make you proud" he says.
"Well, ah, here we are, we'll begin preparations at once. Jim and Marius my boys, soon we'll be off to the Space Port" states Delbert looking up at the Space Port.
A couple days later on the Space Port:
Jim and I come off a ship looking around.
"Jim, oh Marius, wait for me" says Delbert coming out of the ship in a yellow suit.
"Well Marius this should be a wonderful opportunity for the three of us to get to know each other, you know what they say familiarity breeds um, well contempt, but in our case" states Delbert.
"Look let's just find the ship, ok" puts out Jim as we walk away.
"Second berth on your right" says the robot on the latter.
"You can't miss it" says the man holding the latter.
"Hey thanks" I say as we walk away.
"It's the suit isn't, I should of never listened to that pushy two headed sales women, this one said it fit, that one said it was my color. I didn't know what to do, I get so flustered, oh" speaks Delbert following us from behind.
Jim and I stare up at the ship in front of us.
"Oh, Jim, Marius this is our ship. The R.L.S. Legacy" says Delbert.
"Whoa" says Jim.
"Whoa is right" says Marius.
Next chapter is four, so please review for me. And remember I am only adding Marius into the picture, and once I'm down with this part. Jim and I two will be coming out, at the Academy for those two, weeee.
Dark Angel From Mercury.