Jim and I
I don't own Treasure Planet but I do know the name of the man who does own it and it is Mr. Robert Stevenson. By the way this will go like the movie except a few changes will be in it. I got the idea from another writer but it's not going to be the same.
Chapter 5: Setting Sail and a Mutiny in the Making
Third Person's Point of View
"We're all clear, Captain!" yells Mr. Onus from the birds nest.
"Well my friend, are we ready to raise this creaking tub?" asks Amelia as she stands on the brig.
"My pleasure Captain, all hands to station, smartly now" shouts Arrow.
"Come on, you scurry scum! I'll race you" shouts one crew member.
The crew goes about to their stations.
"Loose all solar sails" shouts Mr. Arrow.
The crew crawls up to the sails and releases the solar sails and the ship starts to move up into the sky.
"Come on," says one crew member bumps into Marius.
"Heave up the braces, brace up" shouts Mr. Arrow.
The ship moves up higher in the air.
"Mr. Zoff engage artificial gravity" states Amelia.
Mr. Zoff salutes the captain and bushes down on the switch to the gravity turbine as Amelia told him to do, so the gravity turns on and keeps us on the ship.
"South by South West Mr. Turnbuckle, heading 2-1-0-0" continues Amelia to command to Mr. Turnbuckle.
"Aye Captain, 2-1-0-0" repeats Mr. Turnbuckle as he turns the wheel.
"Full speed Mr. Arrow, if you please" commands Amelia.
"Take her away" shouts Mr. Arrow into the communications tube.
"Brace yourself Doctor" says Amelia
"Brace yourself" repeats Delbert snidely.
The ship suddenly blast off, as Jim and Marius swing out to see.
"Whoa" says Jim as he sees the big animals.
Marius just smiles at Jim.
"Upon my word, an Orcus Galacticus" says Delbert pulling out a camera while he is on the left observation port, "Smile."
"Uh, Doctor, I would stand clear--" starts Amelia, as Delbert gets squirted on with goop, "ha."
"Ah, 'tis a grand day for sailing, Captain…and look at you, you're as trim and as bonny as a sloop…with new sails and a fresh coat of paint" says Silver as he bows.
"You can keep that kind of flim-flammery…for you spaceport floozies, Silver" speaks Amelia back at him.
"Spaceport floozies, spaceport floozies" states Morph in the captain's form, afterwards Silver captures Morph into his hat on his head.
"You cut me to the quick, Captain. I speaks nothing but me heart at all times" speaks Silver, rounding on the captain.
"Nothing but me heart" repeats Morph.
"And, by the way, isn't that your cabin boys… aimlessly footling about in those shrouds" asks Amelia.
"Yep, it—oh… A momentary aberration, cap'n, soon to be addressed. Jimbo! Mars! I got two new friends I'd like you to meet" starts Silver. "Say hello to Mr. Mop, Mr. Broom and Mrs. Bucket" Silver says the last part to Jim and Marius as he tosses the mop and bucket to Jim and the broom to Marius.
Marius' Point of View
"Yippie" says Jim ad I laugh.
Later That Night
"Yeah, I got your Mr. Mop" sprouts out Jim as a guy walks through pushing me into Jim.
"Watch it, twerp" says the guy who pushed me, as he walks away.
Jim and I turn around and see a couple of crew members talking in low voices, before one spots us and lets the other know.
"What are you guys looking at, weirdo's?" says one as he jumps off of one.
"Yeah, weirdo" says another one.
"Cabin boys should learn to mind their own business" states MR. Scroop as he comes down from the shrouds.
"Why? Got something to hide, bright eyes?" asks Jim.
"Maybe your ears don't work so well" says Mr. Scroop as he picks up Jim.
"Yeah. Ahem. Too bad my nose works just fine" says Jim as he struggles to get away.
"Why, you impudent little--" starts Scroop as he pushes Jim up against the main mass up high in the air.
"Let him go" I say trying to reach for Jim but Scroop swings his free arm at me, catching me across my face, and flinging me backwards.
The crew surrounds Jim and Scroop all talking at once.
"I said let him go" I shout again, only to be pushed out of the way.
"Any last words, cabin boy?" asks Scroop.
Silver grabs Scroop's arm, pulling it down with his cyber arm. "Mr. Scroop…you ever see what happens to a fresh purp…when you squeeze real hard" asks Silver twisting and squeezing Scroop's arm back.
Scroop drops Jim to the ground.
"What's all this then?" asks Mr. Arrow coming down to the crowd. "You know the rules. There will be no brawling on this ship" starts Arrow.
"Aye, aye, sir" says a crew member.
"Any further offenders will be confined to the brig…for the remainder of the voyage. Am I clear, Mr. Scroop?" states Mr. Arrow.
Scroop looks at Silver and back to Arrow saying "Transparently."
Arrow walks away as the crew breaks up.
"Well done, Mr. Arrow sir, a tight ship is a happy sir" says Silver as the crew walks away.
"Jimbo, I gave you a job" says Silver.
"Hey, I was doing it until that bug thing" says Jim.
"Belay that! Now I want this deck swabbed spotless and heaven help you if I come back and done, Morph. Keep an eye on these pups and let me know if there will be any more distractions" says Silver walking away.
"Ok, aye-aye" says Morph becoming big eyes.
"Are you alright Marius, I mean that thing hit you pretty hard" asks Jim.
"Been better, but I've been worse. I'll live, and you" I answer turning to look at Jim.
"Fine, but Marius your face" says Jim walking up to me.
"This, it's a black and blue spot. It'll go away soon, don't worry I'll be fine" I reassure him as I get back to my job.
I watch as he returns to his job as well. I'm happy that he is concerned for me, I know I'm falling. I should try to stop myself because I shouldn't fall in love with a guy, who is most likely straight as can be.
Third Person's Point of View
Silver walks down inside where his crew is in the galley, sitting in the mess area.
"Excuse me" says Onus comes into the room.
"So we're all here then, fine. Now if you pardon my plain speaking gentleman. ARE YOU ALL STARK RAVING TOTALLY BLINKING DAFF? After all me finagling getting us hired as an upstanding crew, you all want to blow the whole mutant before it's time" Silver says to his crew as he almost takes someone's head off.
"Those boys were sniffing about" says Scroop.
Silver grabs Scroop by the neck.
"You just stick to the plan, you buy brained twit, as for the boys. I'll run them so ragged, they won't have time to think" says Silver as laughs.
Marius' Point of View
Morph is going around like a mop on the floor, as Jim stops moving the mop back and forth, Morph goes back to his real form. As he burps up bubbles, I walk over to the two as Jim and I laugh at Morph.
"Well, this has been a fun day, huh? Making new friends, like that spider psycho" says Jim.
"Spider psycho, spider psycho" repeats Morph in Mr. Scroop's form.
"A little uglier" I say, Morph does so.
"Pretty close" says Jim laughing.
"Well, thank heavens for little miracles, up here for an hour and the deck's still in one peace" says Silver dumping some stuffing over board.
Jim and I get back to work, trying to ignore him. As I don't want to talk to him and Jim most likely don't want to talk to him either.
"Um look, I uh, what you did, thanks" says Jim.
"Didn't your pap teach you to pick your fights a bit more carefully?" asks Silver as he looks at both of us.
Jim looks away from Silver as I think about my own parents, at least he knew his father. Yet for a father to leave when you are young, it must have been hard on him.
"Your father's not the teaching sort" speaks Silver slowly.
"No, he was more the taking off and never coming back sort" says Jim as he sweeps.
I sigh as I sit down listening to them talk, I have no parents. I only had Billy Bones, and he wasn't even of my spieces. So that doesn't even count because he never taught me a thing as a parent.
"Oh, sorry lad" speaks Silver softly.
"Hey, no big deal, I'm doing just fine" huffs out Jim as he leans on the railing.
"And you lad?" asks Silver looking over at me.
"Dead, when I was a baby. Never knew either one" I answer turning away from him and Jim.
I don't want to see the look on their faces for the answer I just gave. Jim must feel bad because I didn't have any family at all. The orphanage where I grew up for a few years wasn't bad, just not what a child needs. That also means that a child doesn't need to be on the run from pirates most of his life either, my childhood wasn't the best, but it wasn't the worst either.
"I'm sorry lads, I really am" sighs Silver.
"I get around just fine, I don't need anybody" I state turning to look at Silver.
"Is that so? Well, since the captain has put you both in my charge. Like it or not, I'll be pounding a few skills into those thick heads of yours to keep you out of trouble" states Silver looking at us both.
"What" we both shout out at the same time.
"From now on, I'm not letting either of you out of my sight" starts Silver.
"You can't do" starts Jim interrupting him.
"You two won't so much as eat, sleep, or scratch your bum without my say-so" finishes Silver slamming his fist down on the railing.
"Don't do us any favors" I shout out looking at Silver.
"Oh you can be sure of that my lads, you can be sure of that" laughs Silver.
Well this is the end of Chapter five. Waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh, here comes chapter six, and not to mention the song. I Love the Song, and so read and review for me. Weeee another long chapter yay.
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