Jim and I
I don't own Treasure Planet but I do know the name of the man who does own it and it is Mr. Robert Stevenson. By the way this will go like the movie except a few changes will be in it. I got the idea from another writer but it's not going to be the same.
Chapter 6: I'm Still Here and a Star Gone Supernova
Marius' Point of View
"Put some elbow into it" shouts Silver.
As Jim and I try to clean the bottom of the ship. Later we are peeling potatoes with Silver looking after us.
I am a question to the world
Not an answer to be heard
Or a moment that's held in your arms
And what do you think you'd ever say.
Silver tries to teach us how to tie knots up on the bow. We climb down after tying the knot, we slowly walk away.
I won't listen anyway
You don't know me
And I'll never be what you want
Me to be
And what do you think you'd understand?
Jim and I are scrubbing the floor as Silver walks up, Jim stands up. Silver hands him a bucket and goes back to scrubbing with me.
I'm a boy, no, I am a man
You can't take me and throw me away
And how can you learn what's never shown
Yeah, you stand here on your own
They don't know me
Cause I'm not here
Jim and I are on a sail. Now we're inside listening to Silver tell stories to his crew as Jim sips some coco. I just watch Jim, falling deeper for him.
And I want a moment to be real
Want to touch things I don't feel
Want to hold on and feel I belong
And how can the world want me to change
Jim is cleaning the dishes as I put them away. Silver comes back with more of them and Jim sets right to work. I keep putting dishes away for Jim.
They're the ones that stay the same
They don't know me
But I'm still here
And you see the things they never see
Third Person's Point of View
Jim is sleeping on a clean dish as Marius sleeps next to Jim on the floor. Silver comes in seeing this, he smiles as he takes off his coat. He puts the coat on the two of them, waking them both up, to see his feet leaving.
All you wanted I could be
Now you know me
And I'm not afraid
And I want to tell you who I am
Can you help me be a man?
Marius' Point of View
We are helping Silver get a boat ready to launch for him. Helping him untie the boat, we watch him as the boat sinks. He disappears from view, and I notice that Jim stops smiling. I sigh and look at him sadly.
They can't break me
As long as I know who I am
They can't tell me who to be
Cause I'm not what they see
Yeah, the world is still sleeping
While I keep on dreaming for me
And the words are just whispers and lies
That I'll never believe
Silver pops back up, waving for us to join him, and Jim smiles again. We both jump on board, Silver teaching Jim how to control it, but I've got a feeling he already knows how.
"Ahh" shouts Silver as we blast off.
Going into a comet, he makes the boat do some flips and we come out smiling and laughing. We head back to the ship after we get what we had needed in the first place.
And I want a moment to be real
Want to touch things I don't feel
Want to hold on and feel I belong
How can you say I never change?
They're the ones that stay the same
I'm the one now
Cause I'm still here
I'm the one cause I'm still here
I'm still here
I'm still here
We start to dock the ship.
"You having a little trouble there?" asks Jim as we pull our part up further then Silver's.
"Oh get away from me, Jimbo if I could maneuver a skiff like that when I was your age, they'd be bowing in the streets as I walk by today" says Silver as he sit down in the long boat.
"Bowing in the streets" repeats Morph as he is Silver and sits down.
"I don't know, they weren't exactly singing my praises when I left home" speaks Jim sitting back against the boat. "But I'm going to change all that."
"Are you know, how so?" asks Silver as I watch on.
It seems that is all I do is watch the two talk to each other. I just don't know what to say most of the time because this is something I am not used to talking about what I feel or what I want out of life.
"Uh, I got some plans. Gonna make people see me a little different" answers Jim.
"Ooh sometimes, plans go astray" states Silver.
"Not this time huh?" I question because I know what it is he wants.
Silver picks up his cyborg leg, trying to tighten a bolt on it; morph sees what Silver is trying to do and changes into a wrench for him. "Ohh thank you Morph" speaks Silver.
"So uh, how'd that happen anyway?" I ask.
"You give up a few things chasing a dream" answers Silver.
"Was it worth it?" asks Jim.
"Heh, I'm hoping it is Jimbo, Mars. I most surely am" answers Silver sitting in between Jim and me.
All three of us close our eyes to get some sleep, when a blast moves the entire ship.
"What the devil?" shouts out Silver as we come out from below deck.
"Good heavens the Star Pelusa, its gone Super Nova!" shouts Delbert.
"Evasive action Mr. Turnbuckle!" shouts Amelia running up.
"Aye-aye Captain" shouts back Mr. Turnbuckle.
"All hands fasten your lifelines" shouts Mr. Arrow.
Everyone runs to the center of the boat to the main mass, where the lifelines are, to tie themselves up safely.
"Mr. Arrow, secure those sails" commands Amelia.
"Secure all sails, reef them down men" shouts Arrow to the crew members.
Everyone starts up the shrouds, hurrying to tie down the solar sails. We go out to the bow sprit, Silver falls off but we catch his life line and pull him back onto the bow sprit.
"Whoa, thanks lad" sags Silver.
"Captain the star!" shouts Onus pointing to the star.
Third Person's Point of View
"It's devolving into a black hole" speaks Delbert.
"We're being pulled in! Ohh" says Mr. Turnbuckle losing the wheel.
"Oh, no you don't you--" shouts Amelia taking the wheel.
"Blast these waves they're so deucedly erratic" shouts Amelia.
"No captain, they're not erratic at all, there'll be one more in precisely 47.2 seconds followed by the biggest magilla of all!" shouts out Delbert.
"Of course! Brilliant Doctor! We'll ride that last magilla out of here" shouts back Amelia.
"All sails secured captain!" shouts Arrow from below the brig.
"Good man! Now release them immediately!" shouts Amelia.
"Aye captain, you heard her men, unfurl those sails" yells Arrow.
"WHAT?" yells the first one.
"BUT WE JUST FINISHED" yells the second one.
"TYING THEM DOWN" yells the third one.
"MAKE UP YOUR BLOOMING MINDS" yells the first one.
They all climb back up.
"Mr. Hawkins, Mr. Sons make sure all lifelines are secured good and tight!" yells Amelia.
"Aye-Aye Captain" Jim and Marius shouts back.
Everyone goes about their jobs.
"Lifelines secured captain" shouts Jim.
"Very good" shouts back Amelia.
The wave comes knocking off Mr. Arrow; Mr. Scroop cuts Mr. Arrow lifelines sending him into the black hole.
"Captain the last wave, here it comes" shouts Amelia.
"Hold on to your lifelines gents, it's going to be a bumpy ride" shouts Amelia.
Oh my god, they're going to die! Oh wait I don't know if that is true or not, oh well read and review. PLEASE!
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