Jim and I
I don't own Treasure Planet but I do know the name of the man who does own it and it is Mr. Robert Stevenson. By the way this will go like the movie except a few changes will be in it. I got the idea from another writer but it's not going to be the same.
Chapter 7: A Star Gone Supernova, Getting in Too Deep, and Jim Hears the Truth
Marius' Point of View
The ship blasts out of the black whole, everyone starts to cheer about being out as Silver releases his hold on me and Jim. Morph looks a little shaken up, but it seems everyone.
"Captain that, on my goodness, that was, that was absolutely, that was the most," stutters out Delbert.
"Oh tish tosh, actually Doctor your astronomical advice was most helpful" says Amelia walking away.
"Well, thank you, thank you very much. Well I've had a lot of help to offer anatomically…amanamonically…as…astronomically" stutters out Delbert.
"Well, must congratulate you Mr. Silver. It seems your cabin boys did a bang up job with those life lines" says Amelia, as Silver playfully pushes Jim and me.
"All hands accounted for Mr. Arrow, Mr. Arrow" calls out Amelia.
Scroop walks up to the front with a hat in his hands to the captain.
"I'm afraid Mr. Arrow has been lost, his life line was not secured" says Scroop as he hands Amelia Arrow's hat.
"NO, I checked them" puts out Jim "I…I did, I checked them all, they were secure."
"I checked before and after him, they were secure all right" I say glaring at Scroop, I think he has something to do with this.
"I swear" says Jim looking at the captain.
"Mr. Arrow was, ahem, fine spacer, finer than most of us would ever hope to be. But he knew the risks as do we all, resume your post, we carry on" says Amelia.
While I pat Jim on the back trying to give him some support as I continue to glare toward Mr. Scroop. Jim runs away, I sigh as I go after him. I find him hauled up on the shrouds.
"Jim if it's anyone's fault it's mine. Besides Mr. Scroop had to of had something to do with it, I'm sure of it" I say.
"I know but it's hard, I'm alone" says Jim.
I climb up, to sit next to him.
"No, never alone, you've got me" I say.
"You're just a friend" he shouts at me.
"What if I want to be more then friends, huh, did you ever think about me falling in love with you?" I ask as I jump down as Silver approaches.
"It weren't your fault ya know" speaks Silver. "Why half the crew would be spinning in that black abyss?"
"Look, don't you get it, I screwed up. I mean for two seconds I thought that maybe I could do something right, but argh, I just, just forget it, forget it" shouts out Jim until he sighs at the last part.
"Now, you listen to me James Hawkins, and you to Marius Sons. You've both got the makings of greatness in ya but you've got to take the helm and chart your own course, stick to it no matter the squalls. And when the times comes you get the chance to really test the cut of your sails and show what your made of. Well I hope I'm there catching some of the light coming off ya that day" says Silver.
Jim leans into him and I sigh walking away from the scene. It really looks like he really doesn't need me at the moment.
Third Person's Point of View
Silver looks a little out of place for a few seconds.
"There, there lad, it's alright Jimbo, it's all right. Now Jim, I um, best be getting back to me watch now. You best be getting some shut eye" speaks Silver.
Jim walks off and Morph comes up to Silver.
"Getting in too deep here Morphy, next thing ya know they'll be calling me soft" he says before walking off.
Scroop grins as he gets down from his hiding spot, grinning like a mad man that he is.
Marius' Point of View
I wake up early, before anyone else gets up, I head to the galley to get me something to eat, as I am eating a purp I hear some noise. I head back to the sleeping quarters, I watch as Jim gets up because Mr. Zoff farts in his face. I chuckle as Jim falls out of his hammock to put on his boots. Morph bounces out of his reach, as Jim chases him slowly at first.
"Morph" starts Jim. "Morph, knock it off, it's too early for this." Morph kicks him in the butt.
'Ow, Hey Morph" Jim raises his voice.
Morph sticks his tongue out at Jim, changing back into his original form. He picks up Jim's boot and takes off with it.
"Hey, come back here" yells Jim as he goes after them.
"Come back here" repeats Morph.
I run after them, only to duck and hide into the galley below Jim as he catches his boot. I hide in the kitchen part watching them both, have fun. I don't want to ruin it for him, Jim hasn't had that much fun since we started, but it seems he is starting to have fun alright.
"Gotcha Morph. That it's you little squid" says Jim as Morph had just squirted him with water.
"Little squid, squid, little squid, squid, squid, squid, squid" repeats Morph in the form of Jim's head as he bounces in and out of the holes. Jim is trying to hit him with his boot, I see Morph hide in the barrel that holds the rest of the purps. Jim comes hoping down the stairs into the galley as he puts his boots on, I see him looking around the place for Morph, going up to the barrel he looks into it.
"Ha busted" laughs Jim as he dives into the barrel.
"Look, what we're saying is we're sick of all this waiting" says a voice.
"We are wanting to move" says another one.
"There's only four of them left" says another one.
"We don't move till we've got the treasure in hand" says Silver.
"I say we kill 'em all now" speaks Scroop's voice.
"I say what's to say, disobey my orders again like that stunt you pulled with Mr. Arrow and so help me you'll be joining him" shouts out Silver.
"Strong talk but I know otherwise" says Scroop.
"You got something to say Scroop?" asks Silver.
"It's those boys, me thinks you have a soft spot for them" says Scroop.
"Now mark me, the lot of ya. I care about one thing and one thing only, Flint's Trove. You think I'd risk it all for the sake of some nose wiping little whelps" says Silver.
"What was it now, oh you've got the makings of greatness in ya" says Scroop.
"Shut your yap, I cozied up to those kids, to keep them off our scent, but I ain't gone soft" says Silver being interrupted by a shout from up top.
"Land ho, there it is we find, find it" shouts Onus.
Third Person's Point of View
Silver looks out at the planet. "Where the devil's me glass" says Silver.
As the rest of the crew cheers out loud, they run around and yell at each other.
Marius' Point of View
I get out of my hiding place to catch up with Jim.
"Don't worry we'll make it, let's go warn the captain" I state from behind Jim as he get's out of the barrel.
"Where'd you, oh never mind, let's get out of here" says Jim as we run through the galley but we meet Jim coming down.
"Jimbo, Mars playing games are we" asks Silver.
"Yeah, yeah we're playing games" answers Jim.
"Oh, I see, well I was never much good at games. Always hated to lose" says Silver.
"Hmm, me too" says Jim as I stab him in the leg.
We both run off to get the captain, we shut the door as Silver yells out. "Right—o-ooh blast it all lads. Change in plans, we move now."
We hear them moving about outside, breaking things.
"Strike our colors, Mr. Onus" yells Silver.
Well another chapter done can't wait for the rest. It kills trying to copy the thing perfectly. Review for me please, I promise it will get better.
Dark Angel From Mercury.