Jim and I
I don't own Treasure Planet but I do know the name of the man who does own it and it is Mr. Robert Stevenson. By the way this will go like the movie except a few changes will be in it. I got the idea from another writer but it's not going to be the same.
Chapter 11: The Escape
BOOM, BOOM, BOOM, BOOM, BOOM
A big crash is heard right after B.E.N. stops talking to us about it.
"Speaking of which" starts B.E.N.
"Huh?" says Jim as we all look up at the top.
"Flint wanted to make sure that nobody could ever steel his treasure, so he rigged this whole planet to blow higher than a Kalepsian Kite" finishes B.E.N. as he backs up some.
A piece of the prongs falls down crashing and splitting the core, as the money starts to disappear. The laser starts to move off course, melting money as pirates start running away.
"Run Jimmy and Marius! Run for your life" states B.E.N. trying to pull us away.
"You go back and help the captain and Doc! If we're not there in five minutes, leave without us" I shout as I go under and try to fix this ship enough to run as Jim goes to the controls on top.
"I'm not leaving my buddies Marius, or Jimmy. Unless they look at me like that" states B.E.N. as he pulls me from underneath the controls to see my face and hands with wires, and then looks up at Jim. "Bye Jim, Marius."
The treasure continues to disappear and melt away, "No! No! No!" shouts Silver trying to keep the treasure next to him. Two of his men fall in with the treasure as others head back to the longboat.
Third Person's Point of View
Back at the longboat, Doc, and Captain Amelia are still waiting around.
"All my life, I dreamed of an adventure like this. I'm just sorry I couldn't have been more helpful to you" says Delbert.
"Oh, don't be daft. You've been very helpful. Truly" says Amelia in response.
"I feel like such a useless weakling. With abnormally thin wrists. Excuse me, brutish pirate. Yes, you. I have a question. Is it that your body is too massive for your teeny-tiny head or is it that your head is too teeny-tiny for you big fat body?" asks Delbert as the pirate comes over to him.
"I pummel you good!" says the pirate.
"Yes, I'm sure you will, but before you do I have one more question. Is this yours"? asks Delbert as he points the pirates gun at him.
Marius' Point of View
Finally we get the small ship working and it lifts off the ground.
"Yes! Morph, Marius, we are so out of here" says Jim at the wheel.
"Ah Jimbo, Mars! Aren't you the seventh wonder of the universe?" states Silver climbing on board of the ship.
"Get back" I say as I draw a sword and point it at Silver.
"I like you lad, but I've come too far to let you stand between me and me treasure" says Silver coming closer to us.
"Watch it" says Jim as I had almost hit him.
"Sorry, I'll protect us" I say standing firm.
The laser hits the ship, knocking Jim and me over board, Silver catches the ship before he falls too far. As Jim and I fall further down, I finally grab onto something as Jim falls further than me. He grabs onto what he can, sliding down some. I go out to reach for him.
"Reach Jim, reach please" I say as we both reach out to each other.
"I can't Marius" he says to me as we almost touch.
"Yes you can" I say coming down a little further, grabbing his hand the best I could.
Silver finally comes down to try to reach my hand tp pull us both back up.
"Oh, blast me for a fool" says Silver letting go of the boat o catch my hand in time as we start to fall some more.
Tossing us back up onto safe land for a little while at least, we run out of the place, past the door as we try to escape from the blasts.
"Silver you gave up?" starts Jim as we continue to run.
"Just a long life obsession Jim, Marius, I'll get over it" says Silver.
"Aloha, Jimmy, Marius! Hurry people! We got exactly two minutes and thirty-four seconds till planet's destruction!" yells B.E.N. from the Legacy.
We all get up onto the ship, ready to take off as soon as possible to get out of here. The ship sets off, as we try to leave to leave this planet behind us.
"Captain, you dropped from the heavens in the nick of" starts Silver as he heads up the stairs.
"Save you clap trap for the judge, Silver!" states Amelia walking away.
A part of the planet smashes into the main mass, destroying a sail and falling down on one of the laser cannons. The ship's speed slows down considerably.
""Missile tail demobilized, Captain! Thrusters at only 30 of capacity" states B.E.N.
"30? That means we're, we'll never clear the planet's explosion in time" says Dlebert looking at Amelia.
Jim and I look back at the portal, thinking maybe the same thing.
"We gotta turn around" I say.
"What?" asks Amelia looking down at us.
"There's a portal back there. It can get us out of here!" states Jim as I look over the laser cannon's head that fell off.
"Pardon me, Jim, Marius, but didn't that portal open onto a raging inferno?!" asks Delbert not looking back.
"Yes, but I'm gonna change that. I'm gonna open a different door" states Jim pulling off a piece of the ship.
"Captain, really, I don't see how this is possible" starts Delbert before getting interrupted.
"Listen to the boys!" yells Silver coming down.
"One minute, twenty-nine seconds till planet's destruction!" states B.E.N. typing on his little navigator.
"What do you need, Jim, Marius?" asks Silver coming up to us.
"We need you to attach this laser cannon part to this broken off side of the ship" I state as I watch Jim look around.
"Alright, stand back, stand back, now" says Silver putting out a small melting laser. "There you go" says Silver helping us lift it up to the edge.
"There you go" repeats Morph trying to help as well.
"I'm coming with you" I state hopping on behind him after he hoped on.
"No, it's too dangerous" shouts Jim at me.
"That's why I'm coming with you" I say as we stand up, I wrap my arms around him, waiting to blast off.
"Ok, now, no matter what happens keep the ship heading straight for that portal" states Jim as B.E.N. calls out fifty-eight seconds!
We blast off after looking at Silver's face; we race back toward the portal. We push into things to help us get closer to it, when it shuts off Jim just steps on it to start it back up again. We are heading for the portal, dodging mostly anything in our path, this is great.
This time when the laser cannon fails, Jim can't get it to start back up again. We are mow falling downward toward the exploding core.
"No, no" Jim repeats over and over again, as she keeps trying.
"Jim put it up to the wall, maybe a spark will turn it back on, if we create one" I say to him as we continue to fall.
He pushes the back end up to the wall, as we slid down it sparks start to fly. Some catch on, and we shoot back up and out just as the ship passes us. We fly pass the ship. Jim reaches out and down to push on Montressor space port, as I Jump off the back and roll.
I grab the map as the others pass through, I try to go through the portal before it closes and only my right hand gets caught. I stick the map into my pocket as I wrap up my wrist while waiting for Jim to pick me up.
"What did you do that for, jumping off it?" yells Jim as he picks me up.
"The map is very important to me, like your mom is too you" I tell him.
"You idiot, you're the most important person to me because I love you" says Jim wrapping his arms around me.
"I love you" I say hugging him back the best I can.
"Wow! Yeah!" shouts Jim happy.
"You done it! Jimmy, Marius!" shouts Silver. "You done it, boy! Hahaha! Didn't I say the lads had greatness in them?" laughs Silver.
Jim helps me jump off of the thing to land in the ship where Morph greets us.
"Unorthodox, but ludicrously effective, I'd be proud to recommend you two to the Interstellar Academy, they could use men like you two" says Amelia to us.
"Just wait until your mother hears about this! Of course, we may down play the life-threatening parts" says Delbert before leaving us alone.
"Jimmy, Marius that was unforgettable! I know you don't like touching but get ready for a hug big guys, cause I gotta hug ya!" states B.E.N. hugging me then Jim.
I have Amelia take a look at my wrist saying I need to get to a hospital soon. Jim hugs B.E.N. back swinging him around before putting him back down.
"Hey, you hugged me back" states B.E.N. "oh, I promised myself I wouldn't cry. Does anyone have a tissue?"
Jim and I look to where Silver was supposed to be, and we do not see him there at all.
Ahhhh, it is the best one chapter to go and then I can start typing up the second part of this series of Jim and I. lol Review please, please, thank you
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