AN- ok so here is the deal. I got 156 hits and only 9 reviews. Now may I ask why that is? I really don't know. So I will dedicate this to all my reviewers:
Iluvtwlight, HPTL, x-rosepetals-x, Sarkule, Stacie-Ann Halliwell, xXxtwilightxXxmysteryX, LucyMint, i'm.dazzaled., and Teri Lauren Simms.
Ok so I also want to thank those who voted. So far people are saying I should maybe write the new story, but listen if I do write the new story it might be rated M so tell me what you guys think. I said it might be I am still thinking.
SOO anyways here is the club chapter )
Disclaimer- I WANT TWILIGHT! But I won't ever (
Bpov
So we got to Bianco's pretty quickly for a Saturday night. When we got there Edward opened the door for me and helped me out.
I was going to step onto the HUGE line that was waiting to get into the club.
"No Bella come over here" Edward said. He took me to the front of the line and the bouncer took one look at our group and he let us right in.
When we got inside the place was loud and crowded. There were people dancing, drinking and just sitting on the tables and making out. In the center of the club there was also an island thing where people could stand up and dance on them. There was a pole in the center of the island but no one was on it.
We got a booth and sat down.
"So Bella I am guessing that you and Jacob never had a drink either right?" Emmett asked.
"No actually we have" I said and everyone looked confused. Me and Jacob laughed at their expressions.
"But…." Jasper went off.
"Well sometimes when the other kids got to rowdy the headmistress would lock herself in her office and take drinks of expensive wines and rums and occasionally a brandy" Jacob explained.
"Yeah and one day we snook in and stole a bottle of liquor and drank it all. We had a huge hangover in the morning since it was a new bottle." I said and we started cracking up from the memories.
So did everyone else.
"So let's dance and then we can get drinks" Alice said and we all nodded.
We got up and went to the dance floor. There were a lot of people and lots of guys were eyeing me and Alice and Rose. Jacob put an arm around me and Edward grabbed my waist.
Wow they are soo damn protective.
We got to the center near the island and people moved back.
"Wanna dance?" Edward and Jake asked at the same time.
They looked at each other and glared. I started cracking up.
"OK I will dance with both of you" I said and they looked confused at first but they started dancing after I did.
Edward was behind with his hands on my hips and Jacob was in front of me.
I started swaying my hips to the beat of the song and I would occasionally grind my hips against Edward or Jacob. Each time it looked like they would pass out.
Woman were eyeing Edward and Jacob so I got us closer together. I heard Jake chuckle as he put the puzzle pieces together.
I looked around and found Emmett, and Rosalie dancing while laughing at the three of us. I found Alice and Jasper and they were laughing too.
I looked up and both of of them were looking at me and their eyes were filled lust. I knew that both of them wanted to dance with me and me alone.
I decided to pleasure both of them.
I was facing Edward with my back toward Jake. I dropped myself and slowly came up with my ass in Jacob and my hands trailing up Edwards legs and toward his crotch.
I turned around to face Jacob. I dropped again and this time my hands traced up Jakes legs and my ass was in Edward. They were both stiffened and I noticed that both of them had pitched a tent.
I giggled quietly and kept on dancing only more seductively and they both stood there like statues with me all over both of them. My tiny dress was riding up and as I pulled down again I saw Emmett, Jasper, Alice and Rosalie laughing at Edward and Jacob.
When I caught Rosalie's eyes she winked and went back to laughing.
After a while the motioned me toward the bar so I grabbed Edward and Jacob's hand and dragged them toward the bar.
We sat down and Alice leaned in toward me.
"Good job with these two" she whispered with a giggle.
Emmett sat down and yelled.
"Good job Bella! Who knew you could dance. I would love to dance with you and so would the other guys in this place!" he yelled.
He in return received a glare and hit on the head from Rose and a laugh from everyone else.
"Hey can we have 7 shot glasses and a bottle of liquor?" jasper asked as he took out his wallet.
The bartender nodded but kept his eyes on me the whole time. Edward put his arm around my waist and Jake grabbed my hand while glaring at the bartender. He was a tall guy with muscles like Emmett. He had sparkling aqua blue eyes and black hair and tan skin. He was actually kind of cute.
He came back with the glasses and liquor and Jasper paid.
We each took a glass and poured a bit of liquor.
"Ok let's make a toast to Bella and Jacob being here" Alice said and lifted her glass.
We all did the same and chugged the drink down.
Whoa that was really strong. And I think everyone else thought the same because they all shook their heads a little.
"Again?" Emmett asked and Alice and Rosalie shook their heads and ordered water but me and they rest of the guys said yes.
He poured us more and we all chugged it down. Again it was a shocker on how strong it was but I liked it.
"Anyone else?" Emmett asked I picked up my glass. It was really addicting. So far it was me, Emmett, Edward and Jacob still drinking. Jasper had stopped and gotten water with the girls.
"Wow Bella you sure can drink for a girl." Emmett said and I nodded.
He poured me a third glass and then a fourth. I was getting a little dizzy by the fifth and everyone looked kind of blurry but I felt great.
The bottle was almost done and only me and Emmett were drinking but he seemed fine unlike me who was about to fall out of the chair any second.
"Bella are you done yet?" Rosalie asked.
"NOPE" I said popping the 'p'. My voice was a little slurry too.
Emmett laughed and poured me another glass. I chugged it down.
"Hey more!" I screeched as Emmett started closing the bottle.
"No Bella you have had enough" Edward said.
"No I haven't" I pouted. Then I noticed how hot he looked.
"Hey Edward you look so sexy right now. I am having so much sexual tension between us" I slurred and Jasper and Emmett started laughing.
I turned around and Jacob. He looked hot too.
"Hey Jake. You are so sexy too. Are you guys Gods heaven sent angels?" I asked and everyone laughed.
I leaned and kissed Jacob on the lips. I was surprised at first but he kissed me back. I pulled away and Edward was looking away.
"Don't be sad
Edward. I want to kiss you too.
I leaned in and kissed him only
this one felt a heck of a lot better.
I pulled back.
"Wow Edward you're a great smoocher" I said and everyone laughed again.
"DID SHE JUST SAY SMOOCHER?!" Jasper said while howling with laughter.
Epov
"Hey I wonder if she has had enough to drink to do the truth thing." Emmett said.
"The truth what?" Bella slurred.
"Hey Bella do you think the bartender is cute?" Alice asked.
"Why of course! He is like a mega hottie but I wouldn't never go out with him because he is like a mixture of Jake, Edward, Emmett and Jasper. And that is kinda creepy" bella slurred.
It was true. He was tall like me and Jasper and had sparkling blue eyes like Jasper. His muscles were like Emmett's and he had tan skin and dark hair like Jake. His hair was even in a mess like mine!
"Yep it's true" Jasper said like if he read my thoughts.
"So she does have enough liquor to answer each question truthfully." Rosalie said.
"Ok then Bella who do you like better? Edward or Jake?" Alice asked.
I held my breath and it looked like Jacob did the same thing. Bella looked as if she was thinking about it but she answered.
"I think Edward. He is… I don't know but Jake is a little too much like a friend" she said with a smile.
I let the air out of me and tried to keep my cool. But inside I was shouting!!
She likes me!!
Jake didn't look so happy but that changed into anger.
"Well then I will just try harder" he muttered.
"I want more drinks" she said
"Sorry Bella you've had too much" Emmett said.
"Fine then I will get it myself" she sang and crawled up onto the bar table.
She crawled over to the bartender on her knees and he looked surprised.
She looked so seductive and I think she knew it. Her breasts were hanging loose and her dress was riding up.
Then it clicked together. She was doing it on purpose. She didn't have any money so she would have to steal liquor or seduce it out of the bartender.
I looked at everyone I and I think they knew too
"Hey good lookin. I was wondering if I could trade you something for a small bottle of liquor. Oh and I am still a virgin" she whispered and he smiled.
"Umm well ….. Uh sure?" he stuttered.
He handed her a bottle and she grabbed it out of his hand.
She jumped of the counter and ran away.
"Ha gotcha" she said as she ran.
"WOW" Emmett said.
"Yeah" jasper gasped.
I took out my wallet and paid for the bottle. The bartender looked dumb founded.
I saw Bella on the dance floor and she unscrewed the bottle and chugged some down. She started dancing and some got on her dress.
Her hair was wild…but it looked sexy.
The little island with the pole was still empty. I looked back to Bella but she wasn't there. Then I heard howling and whistling.
"Oh my flipping God" Emmett said and he looked at the island.
Bella was on the pole straddling it. She had her legs wrapped around it and she was holding on to it with one and drinking with the other.
Great. All the guys are gunna get erections including my own brothers.
She started dancing and her dress went up. You could she glimpses of her little black thong and more guys whistled.
Oh yeah I am doing a good job protecting her I thought as I went to get closer to the island.
AN- so there it is. The next chapter will have more of the club and then after. So please please review and I will update tomorrow. If you don't you won't get another update until next Thursday because I am going to my aunt's beach house.
So it's your choice. Review and get a chapter tomorrow or don't review and never get a chapter. Also please vote. And also as you can see Edward is winning the war.
Loves and kisses,
Lexie