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Chp 5-Interruptions

( Slow Spider-Man theme music, primarily used in sad or lonely parts of the film)

Mary Jane picked at the plate of cold food in front of her. Where is he, she thought quietly to herself. They had agreed to meet at her home at 5 and now it was after 8. She sighed as she continued probing and prodding at her plate of chicken, cold from sitting out since 5:30. There was a knock on the door and she quickly got up to answer it. Peter gave a wry smile and immediately spoke.

"Hi, sorry I'm late," he spoke quickly as she led him in," I was going over some notes for Dr. Connor's class and I must've dozed off. Do you forgive me, Mary Jane?"

She smiled a little. "OK," she said quietly.

She led him to a chair and he sat down, trying to act cheerfully as he could tell she was still upset. He sighed as she sat down, not making eye contact with him.

"MJ. I'm very, truly sorry. I didn't mean to be late again. It's just that..." He sighed again as she began speaking.

"I know you can get busy. I am a little upset but it's nothing to fret over. It's really good to see you again Pete..."

A large crash outside her open window cuts her off and Peter leaps up from his chair. (Rise in the tension of the music) He ran to the window quickly and peered out, just in time to see a truck flying up at the apartment window.

"Oh no!" Peter leaps away from the window and covers Mary Jane as the front of the truck smashes through the window and wall of her apartment. The front end of the truck sits there, severely damaged before it slides out onto the street. He looks at Mary Jane.

"Are you OK?" She nods and he races to the hole in the wall. Outside he saw a scene of total chaos. Overturned vehicles, whole sides of buildings crumpled to the ground. Peter knew it was trouble and he looked back at MJ for one quick glance. "I'm sorry again Mary Jane, but I have to go. I'll call you later, OK?" She nodded slowly as he threw off his street clothes, put the mask on, and lept out the hole, swinging towards the sound of destruction.

Mary Jane slowly picked her self up and began to silently weep.

( Spider-man theme begins playing as Peter swings )

Spider-Man swung quickly through the air towards the sounds of destruction. Suddenly, Peter's eyes grew wide as he saw two cars fly into the air and one of them smash into a building as a fleeing crowd ran. He swung high into the air and let go, letting himself fly through the air. He then launched his hands forward and shot a stream of webbing, catching the cars as the fell back down to Earth, saving some of the people. He then hit the ground and rolled to a stand. Then he looked to his left when he heard a gruff laughter. Walking towards him, in a somewhat dull looking gold and dark brown outfit was a man. Upon his hands were a set of stainless steel gauntlets.

"It's about time you got here Spider-Man. I've been waiting fer a chance to meet you.," the man said in a harsh, Brooklyn accent. Peter actually began to laugh.

"Wow. And I thought my costume was ridiculous." The man smiled underneath his mask. "Anyways," Spider-Man said still laughing, "I know you couldn't of done this, so could you tell me who did please?" (The music changes to a swift battle theme heard previously in the first Spider-Man movie during his fight with the Goblin)

The man threw his left fist forward and his thumb pressed a button on the gauntlet. The air surrounding him began to ripple and a shock-wave of air came at Spider-Man. His spider senses kicked into gear and he lept up into the air. Just as he did, the costumed man threw up his other fist and shot another blast and it hit Spider-Man dead on, launching him through the air and onto the ground. Spider-Man stood up, his body shaking a little.

"Wow, I definitely wasn't expecting that." His senses flared again as he lept out of the Way of another blast. The costumed man laughed loudly again.

"Ha! You're all talk web head! I can't believe you're r unning away like a little scared baby!" Peter hurled himself through the air and fired two web lines at the man, connecting to each arm and twisted, flipping him to the ground as Peter landed.

"You might consider taking those gloves off, they mess up your balance," Peter said jokingly. The man jumped up and turned to Peter. "So, what do they call you? Quilt Man," Peter laughed as he said.

"No one laughs at Shocker!" As Shocker shouted, he powered his gauntlets up and launched them at the nearest building. The waves hit the building and it began to shake violently.

"No, don't do it Shocker!" Peter ran at him, then Shocker turned quickly at Spider-Man, the shock-wave trail following like a whip and hitting Spidey, thrusting him through the air and into a car. Shocker promptly shut off the gauntlets.

"Ha, ain't so tough now web head." he walked towards where Spider-Man lay. "Now that I've tested these bad boys out on a real fight, I can get some work done." Shocker laughed again and then ran off into an alleyway. A van turned on and roared out of the alley. As the van sped off, Spider-Man struggled to get up. He held his side.

"Man. That packs a wallop," he said turning to rest on the destroyed car.

Chp 6-Spider-Man Blows It

(We see New York at morning. Peter slowly gets up, his back bruised a little.)

Peter outstretched his arms, yawning loudly. He walked over to the mantle and picked up a few rolls of his film. His back ached from the battle last night with this "Shocker" character. Peter rushed over to the Bugle, only about 10 minutes from his deadline. He opened the door to Jameson's office and quickly put forward the folder and photos he had developed.

"Here you go, Mr. Jameson," Peter said smiling as Jonah growled a little and took the folder, sifting through the pictures. Robbie glanced at Peter and then looked over at the editor as he pulled a shot of Spider-Man soaring over Shocker's head.

"Here's your hero Robbie! And your headline: Spider-Man Blows It!" Robbie and Peter's jaw about hit the floor.

"Mr...Mr Jameson, I hardly think Spider-Man ble.." He was cut off.

"Parker, I don't pay you to think, I pay you to take photos of that wall crawling criminal so we can expose him! Now get back out there and get me more photos!"

Peter stood his ground. "No, Mr. Jameson. He's done nothing wrong to you and yet you deface him at every turn! And for you to continue to say the wrong things about him is just..." Jameson roared at Peter, his voice nearly shattering his windows.

"Parker! The day you stand up to me and tell me how to run my paper is a day I will be in the ground! Spider-man is a criminal and deserves to be brought to justice! And as of last night, he's proven that he isn't the supposed great hero he wants people to believe! Now Parker, if you want to keep your job, you had best get out there and bring me my photos!!" Peter sighed and turned around and began to walk off, defeated a second time in two days.