Okay my reader people. I am taking a break from writing this story. I think I have done good with it. I'm fairly sure I ended it alright. Its not the best ending. Don't worry though, I will be making a sequel. Its probably going to pick up a few years later.
I'm currently starting a new story to post. It takes place after Edward leaves. I have grand plans for it so I hope you guys give it a chance. (yes he does come back)
Preview of One Night Sequel: Time
Bella Prov
I hadn't seen Zackary all day. Edward said he went out with some friends but I didn't trust that kid. He never did what he said he was doing. I jumped down from the balcony. The woods stretched out in front of me. Edward was out with Emmett. I had finally convinced him to spend some time with his brother. There were deer near by. I could smell them. With a nimble leap I started into the woods. The ground felt good against my feet. It had been awhile since I had just ran. When I entered the clearing all the deer panicked. They hadn't heard me coming. I bounded after them. It was too easy.
Edward Prov
I ran next to Emmett. The smile on his face was much to obvious. Our speed continued to pick up as we raced. I could easily beat him but it was fun to give a small chance. The second I picked up the lions scent I ran ahead of him. He fell behind quickly.
"Hey!"
His yell was farther back than I had thought.
I easily found the lion just a few yards ahead. I picked up speed just a little more. It was so close now. As he came into sight something else caught my attention. I stopped dead. Several thoughts were coming in at once. I listened intently. Emmett was thinking about how I far ahead of him I was. Somewhere a hunter was thinking about the time. Then the ones I was looking for came in. I heard a teenage girl thinking about a movie she had seen a few years ago. She was relating it to the boy she was walking with. The boy was thinking about her. I clenched my teeth. Zackary. He was walking with this girl alone in the woods. He knew we didn't want him to do things like that. He had never harmed a human but he was still part vampire.
I took off into the woods without saying a word to Emmett. Hopefully he wouldn't be upset. They weren't too far away. I would be with them in a matter of minutes. I slowed my pace when I smelt a new scent. It was Bella. She was ahead of me. I sped up. I called her name. I entered a small clearing. She was standing there alone. She looked as mad as I felt.
"Coming to find Zackary?"
"I heard his thoughts."
"I could smell him and his girlfriend."
"Well lets find him."
We started running together.
I hope that is enough to keep you guys interested. Please check out my new story and make sure I'm on your story alert so you know when I post the sequel.