Sorry for the lateness of this one. My sister had to read it first. I'm sorry for the way that it was written. I had a writers block that day.
10. Eyes
As he walked by people stared. He didn't understand why they did…they just…did. He glared at them to show that it was not okay. They cowered in fear. Was he really that scary? He turned a corner to find more people on that hallway. Just like the others, they stared. He wondered if he had a stain on his uniform. No…he didn't, he always kept his outfit clean.
"Lieutenant Schubaltz, why is everyone staring at me?"
"Uhh…maybe it's because of our eye color. You know, lime green. Also because of your eye shape…kinda creepy. There also there's the fact that you have those lines under your eyes…that show that you haven't had a moments rest since the 3rd grade. That is also scary."
Karl looked at his younger brother in disbelief. Was he really that scary? No, he wasn't. It was their own problem… not his. If some eyes scare them then they shouldn't be in the military. He now understood why they left the field of battle before it was over. It was because they were a bunch of cowards.
Karl then told Thomas off for not addressing him in a formal way. Thomas walked off with a dark cloud over his head. Karl shook his head and proceeded to the dining hall. (0.o no way!… he always is there)