Hi there,
Before I start explaining the delay in my story Sudden Love, I want to apologize to all those out there that have been going mad for the update delay. In all honesty, I didn't like how the story was going so started over. Quiet frankly, my own story was ticking me off because the characters weren't acting and behaving how I wanted them to be.
Sesshomaru was suppose to fall for Kagome rather quickly because of certain demonic traits, but Kagome was not suppose to. I wanted her side of the relationship to start off platonically while Sesshomaru went crazy trying to keep his feelings hidden from her. I also wanted to create some of the not-so-original jealousy games going on between Sesshomaru, Inuyasha, and Kouga.
I am currently redoing the story entirely. I am keeping some of the key events that I liked from the first draft, such as went he is forced to introduce himself to the class, Shippo's personality and attitude to the whole thing, and other parts. I am also going to try to add some more key elements to the story that will explain why Sesshomaru is falling so hard for her so quickly.
I am going to keep the original draft up on . I will not start posting the new version until I am entirely done writing and checking it. Seeing as I am only on the third chapter of the new draft, I don't see me posting it for a while longer. Again, I apologize to whomever that may frustrate. For the record, I know it would drive me crazy.
The chapters are going to potentially longer than before and not so choppy. I rushed the first draft and in consequence, extremely disliked it. I am actually embarrassed I posted it the way it was.
When I do go to post the story, I may have it listed as another title. If I do, I'll add another author note this copy of Sudden Love and have in parentheses after the new title this one's.
Sincerely,
Zalika717