DBZ: Rebirth of the Saiyans
Disclaimer: Do not own DB/Z/GT. I really reallly really really wish I did... but I don't
I thought I should give evryone a good idea of what the characters look like so that everone understands.
Vegiren looks exactly like Vegeta, Gonjin looks like Goku, Toryu is supposed to look like Vegito, Veisen is supposed to look like Vegeta did in GT.
Toryu and Veisen don't look exactly like their counterparts. Veisen is slightly taller than Krillin and Toryu is dressed like Tien, but not as bulky.
I also think you should undrstand my standing on a few important matters.
First and foremost is the fact that in the anime it never says that Goku's last name is Son! There is no Son Goku!
Another is that there never was a Mystic Gohan he was just powered up by Old Kai, they never called him mystic.
The spelling of the names is another issue that you should be able to tell from reading.
Vegeta did NOT cheat to become Super Saiyan 4! It is true that he used Bulma's machine to transform, but only into the giant ape because he didn't have a tail. The change to SS4 was all Vegeta.
GT was not bad and I love Goku turning in to a kid, but the whole flying off with Shenron sucks. They shouldn't have cut Vegeta's hair and I am VERY glad they had him get rid of the moustache. They could have also come up with a better name for Baby... that was retarded. The SS4 transformation I like but I prefer the eyes without the orange irises, so that's how I will be describing it eventually.
I am Infinitely sorry for how long this chapter took, but I was having some major writer's block and school has really gotten busy. I am sorry. Enjoy this very late chapter.
Chapter Eleven
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"Kid?"
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"Hey, Gonjin, are you okay?" King Kai waved a hand in front of the boy's face, "Yoo-hoo, any body home?"
Gonjin's expression was of complete shock, "T-the O-Otherworld, y-you mean I'm dead?"
"Agh, were you even listening, your not d..."
"WAAAAAH! I don't wanna be dead!" Gonjin suddenly started screaming, not even paying attention to the Kai's word. His voice was so loud that it made Bubbles jump and fall out of the tree. The small monkey landed on his head and rolled down the hill.
King Kai waved his hands in front of him as he tried to silence the wailing boy, "Kid, no, you're not..."
"I don't wanna be dead. I can't be dead. Why am I dead?"
"KIIIIID," the Kai yelled at the top of his lungs, his face red from the strain. "YOU'RE NOT DEAD!"
Gonjin's tears seemed to vaporize and he looked at the panting Kai, "I'm not? But you said... that this was where spirits come after death."
"Yes," said King Kai, now back in semi-good spirits after his outburst, "that's why you're so odd. If you're here, you should be dead, but you're not, so it's not natural, you know, shouldn't be happening."
Gonjin smiled and started jumping around and shouting happily.
The North Kai sighed as he looked up the teen, who was taller than him by a good foot and a half, You know, he looks exactly like Goku, I can't believe I didn't notice that before, it's just so obvious. I must be getting old...
"Wait," Gonjin said, breaking out of his celebrations with a puzzled look on his face, "does that mean you're dead?"
The Kai sighed again, looking downcast, "Unfortunately, yes, see," he pointed to the air above his head and Gonjin noticed, for the first time, a small golden ring floating above the Kai's head, "everything that's dead has a halo."
The boy appeared thoughtful for a moment and then suddenly appeared shocked as he looked back at the Kai, "My friends are here too, but they don't have halos either, so they're alive too, right?"
"What," the Kai looked up at the boy who was staring down worriedly at him, "there's more? Then we should go to them right away." King Kai held his hand out to Gonjin, "Grab hold."
Gonjin hesitantly took the hand, "Okay, how is this going to help us get there though? And they are alive, right"
The Kai smile mischievously, "Oh, you'll find out, and yes they are alive, you have to have a halo if you're dead. This is a technique I learned from a pupil of mine." Kai lifted his other hand and placed his index and middle finger to his forehead, "Just hold on tight." Suddenly the two vanished with a soft woosh just as Bubbles made a leap toward where they were standing...
A few miles away, Veisen's eyes rolled back into his head as he collapsed. Vegiren instead looked even angrier, his head turning so red that it seemed that his hair would catch on fire or already was a fire, it's hard to tell with that shape. Toryu was in the middle, he showed no emotion at all, staring blankly into Krillin's face.
Toryu suddenly blinked several times and shook his head before focusing on Krillen, "Wait, you said we're in the place where spirits go after death, but were not dead, right?"
"Right," Krillin smiled at him since he seemed to be the only one that understood, "Your not dead and that's what's wrong. Since you're in Otherworld, you should be dead."
Vegiren seemed to have calmed down, but only slightly as a vein pulsed in his forehead, "Does that mean your going to have to make us die, Shorty?" He crossed his arms in front of him, as arrogant as ever.
Krillin glanced slyly at the arrogant man, "Oh yeah," he muttered sarcastically to himself, "definitely a Vegeta."
Unfortunately for Krillin, his mutter happened to be just loud enough for Vegiren to hear and at that moment he was ready to explode on whatever and whoever got on his nerves.
"WHAT DID YOU SAY FREAK!" The enraged teens fist rocketed forward...
...and crashed into the face of the strange blue man who had suddenly appeared between him and his target.
The man shot backwards with a scream of pain as Gonjin was spun around because of the man's hand suddenly tearing out of his at such a high speed.
The man ploughed into Krillin, knocking him down, and flying onward before colliding with a tree. His body slumped down to the base of the tree and he was suddenly back on his feet screaming at the top of his lungs while he covered his face with his hands.
Vegiren had a dumbstruck look on his face and his brother Veisen, having just woken up, burst into laughter at his brother's expression because he hadn't been conscious long enough to see anything else. Gonjin and Toryu both stared at the rampaging man as he continued screaming and clutching his face, neither had noticed each other yet. Krillin struggled to his feet, still stunned from the man's head smashing into his.
Suddenly the man tore his hands away from his face and screamed at the still dumbstruck Vegiren, "You little brat! How dare you do that to a Kai!" The strange man breathed in through his teeth and then sighed, regaining his composure even though his face had the red imprint of a fist.
He walked up to Vegiren who had just recovered and was staring murderously at Veisen who was still laughing. He didn't notice the man until his fist crashed into his face sending him sliding backward, but he didn't lose his footing and now it was his turn to scream, "What the heck do you think your doing!"
The Kai just smiled and said one word, "Paybacks." He then turned and helped Krillen get his balance.
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The red ogre drove along in his cleaner truck, bobbing his head to the rock music coming from the headphones on his head. He had never grown out of those, even though they were the reason for him being turned into a freakish monster called Jaleba or someting, he didn't really care.
He closed his eyes as his favorate part of the song started to play. Suddenly there was a loud crash as the truck shook violently, veering toward the side of the narrow road. He barely stopped in time and because the front end of the truck was hanging over the side he saw a shining metal object plummet through the clouds below, How do I get myself into these messes.
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Dr. Myuu angrily stomped along a path in the bowels of HFIL, I hate this place. Nothing ever happens and I don't have any machines to work on. On a whim he looked up into the yellow cloud covered sky.
He squinted at a black speck that had appeared from the clouds and was growing larger, I wonder what that is. His eyes widened and he screamed as he started to run out of the way and was stopped as the large machine crushed him into the ground.
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After Veisen stopped laughing and everyone had greeted Gonjin (except Vegiren) King Kai addressed them, "Okay I think I know some people you guys would like to meet. Everybody grab onto me okay."
Veisen and Toryu both set their hands on King Kai's shoulders, Krillin put a hand on Veisen's shoulder and Gonjin grabbed Vegiren's wrist and yanked him over to the group grabbing onto his brother's wrist as they vanished from sight, leaving behind Vegiren's shocked yell.
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Also, I made a few minor additions to previous chapters so check those out if you can.
