Displeasures of Love

by Freyali13

SEQUEL TO THIEF'S BEGINNING. Lola and Sly have teamed up to take down the Klaww Gang, it's not the ideal team but with the trials and adventures they will go through maybe things will work out. Sly x OC

16. I need help

A.N

I would really appreciate some advice.

First I would like to apologise for not uploading in ages, my coursework and work just got out of hand for a while and I needed to focus on that.

But I have some time now to devote myself to my stories, however I'm not entirely happy with my story I feel somewhere along the line it started to sway from my original vision and I've been thinking about rewriting them.

Now this is where I would like some input

I can either keep the originals and have a new story entitled re write or I can rewrite over the originals.

Another subject I would like some feedback on is whether to write the prequel to thiefs beginning before I rewrite them, I had a prequel in mind before I wrote theifs beginning but I figured I could just catch up the readers in thiefs beginning but I've started to think maybe for the sake of backstory that I should write the prequel

Should I write the prequel before the rewrite or after the rewrite?

Im sorry to those who were expecting a chapter but I think it's important I rewrite the story otherwise the chapters from this point won't be as good as I want them to be and won't meet the standard I've set for myself, which is how I feel about my stories now. It won't be a drastic change just enough to get the story on track and improve development and characters.

So so it shouldn't take long to do and I can be back to continuing these stories soon, but I would really appreciate some thoughts on what I should do, but they will be rewritten whatever outcome is decided.

Thank you