Author Note: So as I ask for comments, which I do read and see all of them. It's been brought to me that the story has or Chapter 5 I guess is a little to kiddy and teenage like ,so ill write this chapter over and try to make it better. I am only at the fifth chapter and to me I like all the comments so I'll try and make everyone enjoy this chapter. Just know the story will get better as I go father in it.
Thnks!
