yee...i'm back...
too early na ...well!
mujhe aap sabse bohot sari baatein kehni hai but baad mein ...
sab se pahle story...yeeee...
Abhi drag daya out of the car...they are on beach ...there were very strong water waves...cold breeze is blowing...duo are infront of each other...
Abhi - haan, ab bol kya keh raha tha...tu mujhse apne sare emotion share karta ...hmmm( trying to be calm)..to ye bata jab tujhe pata chala ki mujhe tere b'day yaad nahi hai to tu upset ho gaya tha ...to ye baat mujhe kyu nahi batayi ...kyun nahi pucha mujhse ki abhi tum mera b'day kaise bhul gaye...acha chal vo chhod ,tune nahi bataya ...(sarcastiscally)bhool gaya hoga...lekin aaj jab bureau mein kisi ne bhi tujhe b'day wish nahi kiya tab bhi mood off tha lekin tune mujhe batane ki bajaye apne emotion chupaye...uske baad, jab maine tujhe tere b'day ke din akela chhod kar survi ke sath date par jane ki baat ki to maine socha ki tu chahe mujhe abhi bhi apne b'day yaad na dilaye lekin kam se kam mujhe rokne ki koshish to karega taki main aaj tere sath rahun, lekin nahi tujhe to koi farak nahi padta ...tune mujhse har bar apne emotion chupaye aurtu chahta hai ki main tujhse apne sare emotion share karu...(shout in anger) KYUN? Daya - (get shivered a bit) ( a complete silence all around) vo...abhi ..main...
Abhi - (shouts) bolo daya main sunana chahta hun...
Daya - (keep his hand on his face, to calm down) ok...main tumhe apne birthday ka to yaad nahi dila sakta tha ...ye to tum bhi mante ho na... main manta hun maine tumse apni feelings chupayi lekin main bhi kya karta...mujhe udas dekhkar tum udas ho rahe the aur main nahi dekh sakta tha...aur rahi restraurant vali baat to haan main chahta tha ki tum ruk jao aur main kush bhi ho jata lekin maine socha ki tum to vaha jakar hi kush hote isiliye maine nahi roka...vaise bhi tumhari kushi main hi meri kushi honi chahiye na...
Abhi - (feeling emotional ) (like an irritated kid) ye sab bakvas kon sikha raha hai tujhe...
Daya - tum ...
Abhi - kya ?
Daya - or kya ...shayad tumhe thik se yaad nahi hai ki tumne mujhse kya kaha tha...
Abhi (remembering) daya tujhe udaas dekhkar main udaas ho jata hun, tu khush rehta hai to main bhi kush rehta hun...
Daya - yaad aya abhi(naughtily)...
Abhi - lekin maine tujhe apni feeling batayi thi ye thodi kaha tha ki tujhe bhi vahi feel karna hai...
Daya - haan haan pata hai ...(comically) main to bas try kar raha tha and believe me ...it feels awesome ...maine to soch liya hai ab se main hamesha aisa hi karunga...
Abhi - koi jaroorat nahi hai itna bada banne ki ...( seriously) pata hai daya main apni life jitne bhi logon ko pyaar karta hun...acp sir ,frddy , shreya ya koi bhi...main kabhi kisi ke samne apni feeling confess nahi karta kyunki main darta hun kahin vo mujhse kuch aisa expect na karle jo main nahi kar sakta ya kahi mujhe weak na samjhe lekin phir bhi main cheek cheek kar tere samne ,sabke samne baar - baar ye accept karta hun ki main tujhse bohot pyaar kata hun,isiliye b'coz main chahta hun ki tum bhi mujhse share karo ...mere itne efforts ke bad bhi jab tum mujhse batein chupate ho to acha nahi lagta daya...
Daya - (realizing his mistake and to make abhi happy) (cutely) solly abhi ...
Abhi - ab ye kya hai...apni galti pata lagte hi kitu bachcha ban hai hai Daya - smart move abhi ...kyunki bacho ko punishment kam milti hai...(laughing a bit) Abhi - exactly ..kam milti hai but milti hai...aur teri punishmentye hai ki...( closing his eyes tightly) (fast) maine is bar tera gift nahi la paya...
Daya - ohh ..hello! main kuch bhi karunga lekin b'day gift mein compromise nahi karunga...jaldi nikalo mera gift...
Abhi - daya..yaar iss baar main sachhi mein bhool gaya...party ki arrangements..case or upar se tere emotional fluctuation...bhool gaya , sorry...
Daya -(trying to look sad ) kya abhi...(thinking) main tumhe ache se janta hun abhi,tum mere liye party organise karo ya na karo lekin gift lana kabhi nahi bhoologe...(smiling inside)
Abhi - jada nautanki karne ki jaroorat nahi hai ...ye le...
Daya - ( instantly hug him) thank u abhi...vaise isme hai kya? Abhi - kholke dekhle na...
Daya - shape se to pen lag raha hai...(then, he open the box) ( it's a gold with heart shaped pandent)acha hai ...but thoda girlish gift nahi hai?
Abhi - abey chain to ladko vali hi hai...
Daya - haan but heart pandent...?
Abhi - maine ye alag alag order kiya hai...ye koi avain pandent nahi hai...isme GPS or microphone hai...matlab tu jahan bhi ho teri location mere paas hogi or agar tu kisi musibat mein ho to iske piche ek chota sa button hai use dabate hi tere aas paas jo bhi bate hongi vo voice message ki form mein mujh tak pahunch jayegi...
Daya - ye to galat baat hai...kisi galat waqt par ye dab gaya or tume koi aisi baat sun li jo tumhe nahi sunni chahiye thi to...
Abhi - aise kitni baat chupa rakhi hai mujse daya...hmmm...
Daya - arey main to aise hi...lekin ye batao tum mujh par itni security laga rahe ho or tum azaad ...
Abhi - to tujhe kya chahiye...
Daya - uss company ka no. taki main bhi tumahre liye kuch secret equipment order kar sakun Abhi - le liyo jailer...
DAya - (laughed)vaise ek baat hai mera har b'day kaisa bhi jaye but tum uski happy ending kar hi dete ho...
Abhi - tu special hai na isiliye...
Daya - (instantly hug him) thank u abhi , thank u so much...
Abhi -(funny way) hat pagle rulayega kya...chal ab jada senti mat ho dr. ne dekh liya to soch le tera kya haal karegi...
Daya smiled broadly and both started walking on sand...they spend almost an hour on beach and then went their home to start a new day with a lot of happiness and freshness...
Ok, atlast ye story to yahan finish ho gayi... i hope aapko achi lagi ho...
Agar aap log dr. ki baat se thode cofused hain...i am sure aap honge to it's my own fictional character...
...she will be a good friend of duo...she 'll be their in stories but main focus will be duo...
please tell me in reviews if u guys want me to add this character, otherwise i'll not..
or yaar iss baar itne kam reviews, i mean yaar on an average main 10 minimum reviews to reviews kar sakti hun na...but only 6 reviews what is this?
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