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"I was saying that -" there's a knock on the door.
"Stay here please. I'll be right back." I walk over to the door and open it. No one is there. I look in the hallway, but nobody is there either. Just as I'm about to close the door, I feel a hand clutching over my mouth, preventing me me from screaming. Another pair of hands put I blindfold over my eyes, so I can't see a single thing.
Tris's POV
I feel myself being lifted in the air by three pair of hands, and a serum is being injected. I start thrashing around, and that causes one kidnapper to fall against the wall. I know I can't handle three attackers at once if my power doesn't work, besides, they're huge, and I mean, huger than me (pretty logical, 'cause I'm quite small).
"AUW!" That voice sounds like Peter's. Then a smell hit me. Sage and lemongrass. Al. Why is he doing this? I thought we where friends? The third kidnapper must be Drew, he's Peter's personal slave and he does anything Peter wants him to do.
"Come on, bring her to the meeting spot!" Wait what? What meeting spot? What are they talking about?
I feel myself being moved, and a wave of cold air strikes me. They are walking in the direction to Erudite. I start trashing even more, but someone knocks me on the head and everything goes dark.
~~~TIME SKIP~~~
When I wake up, I'm tied to a tree with ropes as thick as my pulse.
"Well done Peter, I couldn't have done a better job." The voice sends chills down my spine. It's the one voice I hoped to never hear again. Caleb.
"Can I have some time with her too? But you can go first, I want to see what the best way is."
"You can borrow my belt or my bat, but you better clean it. Maybe if I like what you're doing, you can borrow my knife too." Nononononononononononono! My scars just started fading!
There are pounding footsteps coming towards me, and leaves being crushed under their shoes.
"Well well well, look who's finally decided to wake up."
"Shut it Peter, you're to weak to win a fight between the two of us, so you needed help to finally outnumber a little girl like me." It hurts me to say 'little girl', but maybe Peter will feel a little bit sympathy towards me.
"Beatrice! That's not a way to talk to my friend." I hear Peter snicker in the background, and see Caleb unbuckling his belt. Then I hear the words I dreaded the most:
"This is for your own good." The first hit arrived, and God, it did sting. I feel my flesh being ripped of my skin. After a few hits, my back becomes numb, and I feel almost nothing.
Suddenly, Peter walks towards Caleb and whispers something in his ear. As a responds, Caleb nods vigorously, and begins to untie my hands from the tree. He walks towards a higher tree and ties my hands on a branch high in the air, so my feet are dangling useless in the air. He grabs his phone, and gives it to Peter, who starts filming me.
Caleb begins to hit me with his belt, his fists, branches, practically anything he could think of. First on my legs, then on my arms, back, stomach, face, and my legs (again). Meanwhile he explains everything to Peter, and demonstrates different moves and hits with me as a dummy. Just when I thought I'm gonna die here, they stopped and pulled me back to the ground.
"Now Peter, please try it yourself, I'm going to talk to Jeanine to make me have another couple of days off." With that, Caleb leaves, and Peter continuous the beating.
Zeke's POV
"Stay here please, I'll be right back." She walks out of her bedroom, and we hear her open the door.
After five minutes, she's still not back, so we walk to the door just to see that see is not here. There are signs of struggling, so she must be kidnapped.
"Go get Four." I say to Uriah, and he runs of. I begin to jog to the control room, to watch the cameras for any signs.
When I get there, I slip unnoticed behind a computer and search for the camera next to her apartment. Four and Uriah come back in, and they run straight to me.
"What happened? Where's Be-Tris? Is she okay? Why are we here? Please explain?"
"Four, calm down, well, don't calm down, but just listen, okay?" He calmed down a little and nods, so I continue.
"We were sleeping, then Uriah woke me up saying that there was a girl in the room across the hall who was screaming. We thought something happened, so we run inside. It turns out, it was Tris - Uriah recognised her from initiation - and she was having a nightmare. We woke her up, her hands - who were ,by the way, in gloves- were smoking. A couple minutes later, she stifled a yawn, but we caught it anyway and told her to go back to sleep. She wouldn't go to sleep without us, 'cause she was afraid the nightmares come back. After a few minutes, she kept calling the name 'Caleb' and the word 'no'. Then she said something about a knives and she woke up with a scream. She explained everything that has happened with Caleb, but then the doorbell rang. She asked us to stay here for a minute, but after 5 minutes, she still wasn't back. Then we ran straight to you and here we are." Before I told him the whole story, he was already behind a computer, searching the camera in front of her door.
"Come quick! I found her!", tells Uriah. We all gather around as he shows us the footage. Three persons, looking at their posture, males, grab Tris, inject her with some sort of serum, and carry her out of sight. Uriah swaps to a different camera, and we see them walking in the direction of Erudite.
"Caleb is in Erudite."
"Do you think Caleb and these three men are allies, Four?"
"I think so, what other reason can you think of that these men are kidnapping her and walking in the direction of Erudite?" We shut the computer down and start walking to the exit of the Dauntless compound. As we walk trough the forest, we hear a scream.
Tris's POV
Peter's beatings are more brutal than Caleb's, and soon I couldn't hold back the screams of pain anymore. A noise wavers trough the forest; leaves, being crushed under a pair of shoes. My vision is blurred with tears, so I can't see who it is. Peter stops, and calls out, "Hello?"
"It's me, you can continue." Oh, Caleb's back.
They start again, paying no attention to their surroundings, so they didn't heard the noise of three people running towards us.
"Hey! What are you doing?! Leave her alone!"
"Look who's de died to join the party. Welcome!"
Peter and Caleb were to occupied with the person in front of them, so they didn't notice the person releasing me from the ropes. But the person accidentally touches a bruise, and I let out a strangled noise. They turn around, and when they see me on the ground, all hell brakes lose. I get a strange feeling in my fingers, and I know that the serum has worn out. I heat the beginning of the bat Caleb holds so he burns his hands, and it has the effect I wanted. He drops it with a scream. Next, I focus on Peter. I heat up his shoes, and he's jumping around like a maniac. This gives the saviours an opportunity to disarm him. Peter and Caleb are being tied together, and a third person comes to me.
Four's POV
I walk over to Tris, but suddenly she collapses. I barely catch her, but I manage to do so. I check for a heartbeat, and panic a bit at first, but then I feel a steady but weak thumping.
"Zeke, Uriah, are you guys done?", I shout. I know they are very confused about what happened, they don't know about Tris's power after all. They walk over and together we rush back to the Dauntless compound.
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