Hi there everyone, here is another chapter of Holy Hill. Now I hope you liked last chapter, since it did feature the Stands [Shoota Thrill] and [The World], which I really liked writing in that chapter, despite not doing too much. Also Za Warudo won't stop time too many times and would be more like [Star Platinum: The World] in Diamond is Unbreakable. Also this chapter will be shorter than the other two. Now to the chapter.
Chapter 3: The Rabbi in the Harbour
Ending Musical song: Roundabout by Yes
A small boat floated on the water close to the harbour during the dark of the night. The boat was following the watchtower in the area while floating in the shadows. The boat was in a horrible condition, as the wood it was made of was starting to crack and the color was fading slightly.
On the board were three people: one was the ship's captain, a man in his forties who wore completely white clothing from head to toe, clearly busy making it to shore. The second was an elderly man sitting on a old chair reading a book in his own language, which was russian. He was a man of sixty seven years of age who stood at 1.64 meters tall, which a slightly bent back, white sideburns and a greatbig bushy beard of white covering his face. His close were raggs and his eyes were focused on the book he was reading.
The third person on the small boat was a young woman of nineteen years and clear slavic features. She had a long face and dark brown hair long enough to reach the middle of her back. Her eyes were focused on one thing that was on her mind: her belly which looked pretty big, indicating she was pregnant.
The elder russian managed to notice the lights in the distance as his eyes were stuck on the book he was reading. The captain turned his head at the elder man and the woman deep behind her elderly watcher.
"We're reaching London! Is the man you're looking for even there?" the man in white asked in nonstandard Russian as he asked the older man in suspicion of the man who paid him. He didn't trust these kind of people.
A long sigh came from the bearded man as he closed the book and put it on the wooden and cracked floor of the boat. "I can talk English, even if not mastered yet. Yes, Dr. Charleston from London." the white haired man said in broken and nonstandard English to the captain in white as he stood up and walked towards the pregnant woman.
He walked slowly with a bit of a limp, slowing his movement even more and causing him pain whenever he dragged his leg. He reached to the point that he stood in front of the young lady, but he didn't look down. "We'll meet my contact here and he will get us a route to reach our destination easier." he told the woman in Russian in a slightly detached and cold tone, but still caring enough to make her feel easy.
As time started to pass it was easier to see shore when the lights of the watch tower went over the city, allowing him to see an arbour for the old man and his female companion could set foot. After many days in sea it would be a good idea to walk a bit on land.
As the old man stood the younger man who functioned as the captain of the ship stood right next to him, both staring into the distance. "You come down too. Stay next to me all time." the older man said in Russian, making the younger man frown and look with slight distain at the elder.
"You don't tell me what to do on my ship!" the captain shouted in Russian with slight anger in his tone, but the older man didn't flinch. The woman in the back heard what the captain said and immediately cowarded in fear while covering her belly. "I'm only helping you because you pay me a lot of money, Christ killer!" the captain kept shouting in Russian in a furious rant, while throwing a foul insult at the elderly rabbi.
The rabbi didn't flinch at all and kept silent, only to sigh and stand quietly, making the younger man walk away towards the wheel in order to make sure they reached the harbour safely.
After a while they finally reached the harbour and the elderly man helped the captain put the anchor down into the water. After several minutes the ship was tied to the docks and the captain glared at the old man, who started to leave the boat, but not before seeing the woman trying to get down.
The rabbi grabbed the girl by the arm, stopping her in her tracks. She winced in pain as she looked at the older man and pouted. "Let me go!" she shouted in Russian as she tried to get away, only to recieve a slap in the face, making her stop any attempt to leave the men behind.
The jewish man shook his head with disapprovement as he looked at her with a serious glare in his eyes. "You must not leave my sight. Understand?" he asked as he tightened his grip even further and the young pregnant woman could only nod before he released her.
The glare of the rabbi then went towards the captain of the ship, which made the younger man take a step back, which he didn't know why he did that.
As the three got off the boat, they walked around the harbour, with the young woman constantly looking around with fear in her heart. The barely lit enviroment and the moisure in the air made thing not the most pleasent for the captain either. The rabbi however kept his head cool at all times, prepared to find his ally and to anticipate what ever ambush was waiting for him, since many people heard of the rumors.
As the three kept walking the suddenly stopped at the sight of a group of men wearing black cloaks around their bodies to the point that they couldn't see their faces except for one: a tall man with grey skin and teeth.
After a few moments of observation saw that another cloaked figure tried to hide his left hand from view, but the old rabbi could see small drops of red falling to the ground, showing that he was bleeding slightly.
The elderly man put his hand in front of the young pregnant girl to his right, only to focus his mind to release a figure about his height with four hands, which had a weight tied to each palm. It also had two thin legs and dark purple skin, yellow eyes and blue beard that reached its crotch area.
"No subtle. You no get girl." he said in broken English with a frown on his face and, as the figure next to him entered some sort of battle stance, making the group that included five men laugh with joy at the prospect of seeing the old man releasing his power. "My Stand, [Rolling Stones]!" he roared with determination as the Stand clenched its hands into fists around the weights glued to its palms.
One of the people under the cloaks started to step foward before they were cut by a noise. "I found them!" a voice of a young woman in the air, making everyone look up to see a blonde woman flowing through the sky above straight towards them, with a young well dressed giant of a man right behind her, catching her in the air with five flaming wires.
One of the five members in the group started to tremble as the grey skinned man looked up with a grin on his face. "Seems the boy came for revenge." he said in an hungarian accent, making the rabbi seem surprised even more from the arrival of the two people above them, who were starting to fall towards them.
Diana's POV
For about an hour the two were searching for the two jerks who dared to attempt to capture her. An hour! Diana started to feel angry and frustrated as they used the power of their Guardian Angels to go from harbour to harbour across part of the large city. With Jojo using his wires and her using [The World] to jump high and far to the point that she looked like she was flying, they searched for the asshole vampire who thought he could try to kidnap her and get away with it.
What she barely tried to do was attemp to comfort the young man who was helping her, even if it was in order to get revenge for the death of his brother.
After the kept going all over the city they were reaching the fourth harbor since they started searching. This one was in a much worse shape than the other three, as it didn't have many boats and hasn't been renovated in over fifteen years. A lot of criminals were settling their matters in this harbor, therefore no one dared to come there.
She dropped on top of a roof top with Jojo slightly behind her. She then started to use the incredible sight of her Guardian Angel to see if there was anything they should find out of the ordinary. For several minutes she didn't notice anything, until her sight caught a group of five cloaked figures, like the one in the brothel, standing in front of three people, only for a weird figure to come out of the old man, similar to her and Jojo.
Diana then looked at the taller man with excitement combined with bloodlust and arrogance. "I found them!" she yelled out loud before using the golden legs of [The World] to push her up into the sky, reaching them nearly an instant.
Air rushed past her long blonde hair as she started to fall down, preparing to deal with the situation before it even starts. Her body was then stopped midair with a painful burn around her abdomen, causing her to look back at the angry young man who jumped after her by swinging from a lampost close by, before he started spinning her, giving her some momentum.
"I don't know what you're ability is, but us it!" the well dressed Hamon user shouted as the wires of fire that came from his fingers span her fast and released right when she was facing the direction of the cloaked group.
As she flew at an incredible speed at the five people in black cloaks she smiled, allowing the golden woman that was her guardian spirit to come out in its full form. "I was planning just that!" she shouted as all eyes where focused on her and the women from the group of three people started to run.
"[Za Warudo]!" Diana yelled with joy and bloodlust as waves of energy blasted out of her guardian angel, stopping the entire flow of time in an instant, while her form was still flying fast. The golden clad woman that was Diana's spirit pushed down her legs and provided a smooth landing for the blonde prostitute, allowing her to land safely right in front of the group of five people who where frozen in time.
"Toki yo Tomare." she said with a serious tone before looking at the cloaked men. She first noticed the vampire who leaded the assult on the piece of shit brothel she was working in, as he wasn't wearing a black cloak. With a smile from the tall woman, her spirit of gray skin clad in gold appeared and slammed a powerful left hook into his face while it shouted "MUDA!" with Diana's voice coming from it, only to continue with a right uppercut to the chin, starting his movement upwards that was stopped by the effects of [The World]'s ability.
The second one was the one who was covering his right arm, making the beauty to confirm he was the one she attacked an hour ago. With a thundering punch she sent him flying, only for stopped time to halt the movement completely.
Another smile rose to the tall blonde's face as the golden spirit next to her stared at the three remaining figures in cloaks. 'Three seconds left.' she thought to herself before [The World] flew towards the third one and kicked him so hard with another "MUDA!" sound that the kick bent the legs so hard that it broke them to the point that the bones pierced the flesh, with the blood stopping in the air.
While flying towards the forth, Diana's guardian spirit started to throw a fast barrage of punches that dented the frame of the fourth one before doing the same thing to the fifth, denting his bodies with at least a dozen punches.
A sly smile then rose to the young prostitute's face as her spirit or "Spectre" as Jojo called it, returned to her side. "Soshite, toki wa ugoki dasu." she said with joy in her tone as time itself started to move once more.
As time moved the hungarian flew into the air with blood flowing from his mouth as his jaw broke and cracked, shoking him as he didn't realize what happened. The already injured man flew backwards into a couple of empty crates that stood on the pier. The third one rolled in the air as blood splattered everywhere from his destroyed legs. The fourth and fith ones flew into the air by the force of all the punches they were hit with, blood flowing from their mouths and pain of broken ribs making them wince.
As they fell down with "Thuds!" on the ground a smile rose to the blonde woman, only for her to fall to her knees several moments later as she felt intense pain in her chest. She grasped the left side of her chest, where her heart was, as she started to huff and puff intensly. 'Bloody hell?! Why does my chest hurts?!' she thought to herself paniking while still angry at the situation, as it made her feel helpless, something she dispised.
The first one of the five to get up was non other than the vampire, who was stunned from what happened yet thrilled for some reason. 'I don't know what hit me, but I can tell that its physically stronger than me.' he thought to himself with causion and an analystic mind, as he looked at the man next to him, who decided to remove the hood of his cloak.
The man was standing at 1.73 meters tall and had an olive skin tone and dark black hair along with emerald green eyes. As he focused his pitch black skinned and muscular Stand appeared next to him, only to raise its arm in front of its chest and create a portal out of black and crimson colored energy, which he stepped towards to, only to disappear.
He appeared in front of the panting young lady with a furious gaze and his Stand raise its arm to strike. "I'm going to give you more than just a few cuts on the arm, you stupid prostitute." he said as the black muscular figure started to strike, only for five flaming wires to wrap themselves around the arm before they pulled him to a stop. He raised his head to see the well dressed giant of a man pulling him his own strength as the wires came from the tips of his fingers.
"I won't let you do anything so wrong and vile." the brown haired Joestar said as a golden aura of Hamon energy flowed around him as he pulled to arm of the Stand away from the heavily panting young beauty whom helped Jojo. A smile then rose to the olive skin-tonned man as the muscular stand used its second hand to create a portal, with the medium sized man jumping into it, only to appear right from behind the tall Hamon user.
"Teleportation is the power of my Stand, [Disturbed]. Remember that well before you try to fight me with a weak stand like yours, loser." he said as he sent a right hook right into the face of the young Joestar, who was too shocked to react in time, which made the punch connect and while not to strong, it weakened the strength of the wires, making the pitch black skin-tonned Stand of the man to release itself before charging at Jojo and slamming a vicious gut punch into his stomach, which made him puke and gag in agonizing pain before the strike doubled him over.
While the other three people in cloaks still tried to recover from the damage, the vampire just laughed as he watched the pain the Hamon user was suffering from. "Well boy, I don't know what is going on, but it seems like my friend Gerard here is beating you." he said to the giant man who was on his knees from the hit to the gut that he suffered. A moment later the vampire saw the man raise his head and look at him with a glare of pure anger.
The grey skinned man snikered with humor at the sight before putting his hand on his chin. "If you ever want to take revenge for your brother, my name is Cout Andros III." he said with a thrilled smirk of comfidence on his face before looking at the group of three people the group was targeting, only to lick his lips.
With a dash he then ran towards the three, his target being on other than the pregnant woman next to the old rabbi. A frown appeared on the face of the elder jewish man, and the four armed figure next to him moved one of its hands in a motion of a karate chop, which stopped right in front of the center of its chest. "VOSH!" it shouted, making the vampire feel heavier, much heavier, like his weight has been doubled. The vampire was confused as he didn't know why he felt heavier, since he couldn't see the old man's Stand.
Another arm of the figure next to the rabbi moved pretty slowly in a motion of a karate chop, and stopped again in front of the center of its chest, and as the Stand shouted "VOSH!" once more, the weight of the fanged man doubled again. Trying to reach foward, Count Andros tried to grab the woman, but his arm started to fall under its own weight, but his palm managed to tough one thing, the slavic woman's belly, which contained a baby inside.
Suddenly a flash of light occured that blasted the unholy demon backwards at least 60 meters away from the woman, only for the light to srround the woman with a three-layered aura of gold, white and arctic-blue, which only those who had stands could see, leaving them stunned.
Diana, who was the least fazed by the light, slowly got up and turned around to see the olive skin-tonned man as his Stand started to choke Jojo as the light erupted from the pregnant girl, making him stop. With adeep breath, the golden clad legs of [The World] appeared beneath Diana's as it pushed her foward straight at the man in the black cloack. As she closed the distance in an instant, the gold clad arm of her Stand appeared to her left, using it to send a punch that crashed like a bullet into the jaw of the man, causing blood to fly from his mouth along with two teeth.
As the force of the punch sent him flying 20-30 meters, Gerard crashed right next to his vampiric comrade, who was burned all over his body and he seemed to freak out, like he lost it mentaly. Sensing like they were in a bad situation, he created a portal with his Stand, pulling his comrade with him towards it.
As he entered the gate of black and crimson energy, he looked backwards to see two of the three other members of his unite starting to recover as they barely stood up. "You three! I leave those bastards to you!" he yelled in a panic as the warp gate closed behind him right as the blonde beauty managed to catch up to strike again, much to the woman's frustration.
As Diana turned around, the well dressed young man also stood up and panted as he started to recover, while two men stood in front of them and in front of the other group.
Ending musical cue- Roundabout by Yes.
Hello everyone, I just want to say that this chapter was rushed and that I had a really hard time of figuring out how to write it, so that is why the quality is lower than the last two chapters, which is saying something since they weren't that good.
Now for the stand of the rabbi I will give stats only on the next chapter, but the stand that can make warp gates I will reveal now:
Stand: [Disturbed]
Namesake: Disturbed (Band)
Abilities: Disturbed can create teleportation portals only to where people he knows are, which he is able to locate by puting a sort of a tracer inside the blood stream of his allies. The gates can be formed only up to 3-5 meters away from the user, and can teleport to where people the user knows are present.
Destructive Power: C
Speed: C
Precision: A
Durability: B
Range: C
Potential: B
Appearance: A muscular humanoid figure who's skin is colored black with yellow eyes in the shapes of rectangles. Veins constantly throb across its arms and legs.
R&A:
R: Good job for a second chapter you really amped everything up didn't you?
Seeing the Stands in action was something that I was actually waiting for last chapter that never really came and now I'm glad the wait happened. The first big fight of the story and it was certainly a big one.
Jojo's Stand is absolutely amazing I like the concept being put into action. Everything about it is so well done.
The World is itself without a doubt. I just love the dynamic that it established to portray Diana as one that views herself above the world( pun intended) whilst using it.
And yeah this one was a great way to get things going. I feel you are really into this story just from the detailing of the fights.
A: Well I'm glad last chapter was enjoyable, even if this chapter wasn't up to par. I did try to portray Diana Brando as an arrogant bitch, she has big shoes to fill. Hope I can write the character development of her character well. In this chapter she helped Jojo chase the vampire because he tried to get away with kidnapping Her.
R: interesting to see a JoJo MC using an AC/DC themed Stand... with Araki's reasoning, they usually end up as bad guys, like Esidisi and Valentine's D4C
A: Well I haven't read part 7, so I don't know much about D4C, but I do love me some AC/DC. I also thought Shoota Thrill would be a cool same since Jojo's Stand involves wires.
R: A JoJo/Joestar with an AC/DC Stand! YEEEEEES. Usually, anybody in JJBA who has names or Stands referencing AC/DC is a bad guy... Even if Valentine isn't actually evil. At all.
Considering that Valentine brought things and people from other universes using D4C, I'd say that the "JoJo-Verse" has many thousands (!) of universes so it's possible to have multiple versions of the Joestar and Brando families in addition to all the characters throughout Parts 1 - 6 (JoJoVerse 1) and Parts 7 - 8 (JoJoVerse 2). I think Eyes Of Heaven touches on the idea very briefly.
Is the Joestar Curse just that they all die? Or... Some of them die young?
A: Well as I just said, I didn't read Part 7 so I don't know much about Valantine other than that he is the President of the US and that he tried to rape a 14 years old woman. Still sounds cool as well as Diego's THE WORLD.
Well guys, I hope the chapter didn't suck too much, so until next chapter. Bye bye.
