Hinata's mesmerizing eyes!

Notes: I am new to Naruto and this is my first story, so bare with me.

I like the Characters of Naruto but I don't own Naruto (Man I wished I did though, Anime tears).

Hi all, I'm really stuck for ideas so this chappie might go a bit slow please give me at least one idea or I'm not updating. Thanks to all the people that reviewed it's your reviews that make me want to update quick (even though I don't).

Yeah cough cough 'pity reviews'

Shut up b#

Sticks and stones may break my bones but words will never hurt me

Says in mimicking voice- If sticks and stones will break your bones then a chainsaw will surely kill you (pulls out a chainsaw and starts it up)

Stay away from me with that thing AHHHHH (runs like mad)

I'll get you (starts running after)

By the way I don't mean to offend any one or do anything wrong.

Any way, let's get on with the story! :)


Chapter 4 – Cupcake

After breakfast they got packed and said their goodbyes to Temari.

"I'm going to miss you Saki" she cried as she wrapped her arms around Sakura.

"Get a room" Sasuke smirked and everyone laughed minus Hinata who giggled. Temari quickly let go of Sakura and stuck her tongue out at Sasuke.

They set off once again for the village hidden in the sand. Everyone seemed to forget about Hinata except for Sasuke who talked to her every once in a while. Hinata was finally glad someone was paying attention to her because although Kiba and Shino are her friends they're always arguing about something. Hinata started to feel really drowsy and nestled in to Sasuke.

"Goodnight Sasuke" Hinata whispered as she fell as sleep.

"Oh no you don't if I have to stay up you do too" Sasuke chuckled as he started to tickle Hinata. Hinata started laughing uncontrollably.

"Okay, okay I'll stay awake" Hinata was still holding in a giggle.

"Good" Sasuke smiled 'She looks so pretty when she laughs what am I saying I don't like Hinata, she's Hinata the quiet little girl that can't stand up for herself, stop thinking about her' Sasuke was having a battle in his head.


It was lunchtime when they decided to take a break from walking and settled for a clearing just off the side of the path. Sasuke put Hinata down against a tree so she had a little seat.

"Thanks Sasuke" Hinata blushed 'I must have said that at least a thousand times by now'.

"My pleasure Hinata" as Sasuke said this he looked up and saw Hinata's unique eyes. He couldn't help but stare into them, he felt as if he was going to kiss her any second but decided against it.

'She has such beautiful eyes but she's still getting over Naruto I can't tell her what I think' He thought to himself.

'Oh god why is he staring at my eyes has he only just realised I'm a freak, oh no he's smiling I bet he's thinking of a mean thing to say' Hinata quickly looked down holding in her tears. Hinata was used to being put down because of her family but the one thing she hated about herself was her eyes.

"What do you want for lunch cupcake" Sasuke said with a kind look on his face.

'Damn what the f# did I just say' Sasuke was mentally hitting himself on the head. Hinata giggled.

"A cupcake would be nice but I only have one sugary object a day and that was my pancakes so can I just have some fried rice" Hinata smiled at Sasuke. She knew he was calling her cupcake but she could see the startled look on his face after he said it and wanted to make him feel better. Sasuke now had a relieved look on his face he did a mental thankyou to the sky and went to get some fried rice out of the food pack. Hinata was glad that they were friends and she felt stupid for thinking Sasuke would mock her. Sasuke came back with their fried rice.

"Thanks Sasuke" Hinata gave him a broad grin 'why do I always have to say that'.

"Your welcome Hinata" Sasuke sat down next to Hinata and started to eat. It was a beautiful calm silence which Sasuke liked a lot 'she knows when to shut up she's nothing like Sakura'.

"Saaaaaaaaasuke come over and eat your lunch with me" Sakura said in her fan girl voice.

'Speak of the devil' Sasuke thought.

"Sorry Hinata tell me when you want to do something" Sasuke said with a disappointed frown. And just like that Hinata was alone, she felt the presence of someone next to her to find Naruto.

"H-hi Naruto-kun" Hinata said with a weak smile. Little did she know but he had heard the whole conversation.


Sorry if it was short I have a lot of homework, pleeeeease review.

(Runs past screaming)

(Grabs) ha I caught you!

Do you really want to kill me (puppy dog face)

I'll have to take some time to decide hmmmmm…….